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    Chapter 18 Peace

    Your readers are pining for such a story, oh what fun you could have with that storyline!!!
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    Chapter 18 Peace

    Cain't add much, I have to agree with the comments on the symbolism and layering, all the hallmarks of one of GA's best authors, and this chapter was a testament to the writer's craft... So much happened in this chapter, all of it leading up to a catharsis for Jubal, much effort was made in finishing up things that needed doing and taking comfort in the accomplishments. Whether Jubal see's it or not, it is happening along with subtle reminders of the past, the good finally outweighing the past. Glass is repaired, doors are made, chores are done with a light heart, and the timorous, shy horses are beginning to accept Jubal, just as he is beginning to accept himself. Despite the author's contention, dealing with the broken branch was just that, it was so much more and a fitting capstone to this chapter, as we can see that what is broken in Jubal is slowly mending, as the past is being dealt with and discarded. Herman Melville is one of the greatest authors this country has ever produced, considering the layering and complexity we find in his stories, Moby Dick stands out foremost in my mind. Gary my erstwhile friend, you are giving the man a run for the money!!!
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    Chapter 7

    Thanks Chris for taking the time to entertain us!!!
  4. The boys are natural parents, the only thing I would add is to have Adam read to them, I am loving the fact Adam reads, it is so frigging important... Now we have a judge-hanger...what possibly is going to set her off??? I'm guessing someone is trying to that Adam away from, gasp, two men living in sin....
  5. O my everlovin goodness...Lyoth...where can I rent, buy, abscond with find one???
  6. Or in Russ's case, perhaps low places????
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    Chapter 7

    Another excellent chapter, Dr Wagner needs to be dealt with, hopefully by whoever is around the corner...speaking of which, this isn't cliffhanger of sorts, more like a who's around the corner hanger??? Here's a suggestion your fans may appreciate...
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    Chapter 32

    Thanks for the latest...it is appreciated!!! Love the fact that there are future plans in the works and eagerly look forward to your next chapter!!!
  9. Thank you for your comments, they are treasured!!
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    Chapter 34

    Thank you for your kind words and taking the time to read this, believe me when I say that there is more to come! Shamelessly self-promoting myself, please take a moment to look at some of my other stories...there are several that relate to the farm!!!
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    Chapter 33

    Rosco is a force to be reckoned with, nobody messes with his herd!!!
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    Colin 5

    Good on Colin! It was well past time…herein the states we have an expression that fits here…Lincoln freed the slaves you know…get up off your ass and do something…
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    Chapter 11

    Talk about complications…..
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    Chapter 13

    Micco has to be one of the most underwhelming central protagonists…I am finding it difficult to break thru the cloud of miasma that surrounds him…
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    Chapter 32

    Sometimes the old ways still rock
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    Chapter 31

    There are some who suffer from self importance, commonality known as headupyourass
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    Chapter 30

    It is taken time but we are finding out that the new world wasn’t discovered in1492
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    Chapter 19

    Hey everybody...#105...still rising like a bullet..
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    Chapter 29

    Thanks, Mary is going to surprise folks!!
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    Chapter 6

    If those in charge don't f'up, neither twin will be walking the streets anytime soon...
  21. Well, as others have noted, Lacey has most likely relapsed...was she supposed to be taking meds that would prevent such an occurrence and forgot, or did this cancer come back suddenly??? Dylan hasn't lost custody, the courts simply do not work that way in any scenario... Dominick is quite the precocious seven yr old... I can't help but wonder about the following...if Lacey was brought to a bed in room 3, not the morgue, then she is clinging to life... And we have a 3 day wait and see hanger....humph...
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    Chapter 19

    Ok all you haters, the Jury is asking for transcripts and it ain't looking good...consider the following, lots of woulda's, coulda's, shoulda's, and head scratching WTF's... Fuck. He hated to think his stupidity was going to be the catalyst that escalated the timing of the confrontation with Huntington. Ya think???
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    Chapter 238

    So upset with the antics Christian is pulling...the following says it all...time for a conversation with GG? “He doesn’t know about these coins?” “No, you probably would have stayed with him if he did.” “I don’t understand. Grandfather was a wealthy man, I’m sure Christian inherited his wealth.” “Your grandfather was a shrewd businessman. My guess is Christian isn’t.”
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    Chapter 5

    That's how it starts, give away the secrets to one chicken soup recipe and next they will want the recipe to my BBQ St Louis style ribs, that or my braised short ribs...humph.... Or my slow cooked Prime Rib bone-in roast...
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