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Everything posted by drsawzall
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The whole episode with the attempted break-in seems to be, with the assistance of the caretaker, more than a bit dodgy and good thing they left when they did... Looks as if there will be plenty of veterinary calls by the boys as news seems to be traveling faster than they are!!! Another wonderful chapter and the historical sign tweaked my interest and a chance to learn a bit more...Thanks Quoka!!! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barrow_Creek,_Northern_Territory
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Not much I can add to the comments Val, but to my deepest thanks and respect for putting up with me as I tried to post my first contribution to an anthology...you took this babe in the woods, held his hand and helped him see the light. Here's to avoiding any speed bumps!!!!
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Loved this chapter and as soon as I finish this comment, I'm heading out to the supermarket for some Jumbo Shrimp and sides!!!
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Time to get the posse organized and go a huntin....
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There's no closing that door, now is there....
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As with the others, our thoughts and prayers go out to those affected...And another fantastic chapter!! https://www.msn.com/en-us/weather/topstories/cyclone-ilsa-sets-a-new-wind-record-as-it-smashes-into-australia-s-western-coast/ar-AA19PL38
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This is for anyone who harbord doubts imposed by others, the following excerpt should give everyone pause for thought... Explore your childhood fantasies and someday one of them may also be fulfilled. Don’t give up or listen to the bullies and naysayers that enjoy crushing dreams: Just do everything that you can and possibly your dreams may also come true.
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Having lived and grown up across the wrong side of the tracks, from the 'right' side of town, I was very fortunate to have had mentors throughout all my schooling and employment. I was fortunate to find employment that encouraged me, starting at the very bottom/entry level and ending up on the executive floor with a corner office!!!! And I found the following so very frigging true... This may just be another one of my fantasies, but I hope I have proved a point: Explore your childhood fantasies and someday one of them may also be fulfilled. Don’t give up or listen to the bullies and naysayers that enjoy crushing dreams: Just do everything that you can and possibly your dreams may also come true.
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It's never too late to find out that there is an escape from the rut we sometimes find ourselves in, read on for inspiration!!!
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Truly a fantastic effort and so glad you chose to share your personal ode to joy!!!
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Old Coats: Explorations in the Cedar Closet
drsawzall reviewed Parker Owens's story in 2023- Exploration -Poetry
What items hold your precious memories, a glance or touch reminding you of events too precious to forget? Read on to see what joggles your memories...-
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My wardrobe closet is full of garments I can't bear to part with, some articles are memories to precious to discard...
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While this story stands on it's own, it begs for another chapter or two...well done!!!
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Brutally raw, painfully realistic, emotive, and grabbing your attention inescapably, with the rawness of the harsh conditions descripted... I'm hooked and waiting for more!!! The few memories I have of her are far and few between, and what I do remember. Well its best to just forget. My social worker decided on a whim to pull me from my last placement. Of course I bet the scratches on my back and the bruising along my ribs had something to do with it. Maybe the blood stains on a dirty pair of underwear clenched the deal. At least the doctors where gentle with their probing this time, it’s the only gentle touch I’ve ever really had.
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It is a bit more than simply through the looking glass... But then again... https://duckduckgo.com/?q=what+a+long+strange+trip+it's+been+song&atb=v314-1&iax=videos&iai=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3Dp5dTKcCMg2U&ia=videos
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Chapter 33 - The Beginning
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 33 - The Beginning
Well this chapter answered a couple of questions while poising a couple more... In this type of conflict there are terrible costs and a severe price to pay, will the victors get their shite togetherand figure out where and how to go from here, or will they descend further into madness... Needless to say, part of this chapter had me reminding me of a song, shown below, the vid is of poor quality but nevertheless... -
Chapter 8 Life 1975 - 2015
drsawzall commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 8 Life 1975 - 2015
Like two ships that ae passing in the night, at this stage of their lives what will the future hold for them? -
Chapter 32 - Sacrifice
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 32 - Sacrifice
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This tangent may be an indicator of a new career path for the boys, they just may well become The Traveling Vets!!!
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The grandparents are a hoot to say the least, while I hold out hope Devin holds the key to extending Mac's life thru conjugal relations, this chapter reminded me of a famous comedy skit...
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Chapter 30 - Auntie Peg & Ninyani, Part Two
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 30 - Auntie Peg & Ninyani, Part Two
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Chapter 29 - Alone
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 29 - Alone
Let's face it everyone, the path they are currently heading on, is a prime example of evolution at work...and if the humans and bio-shifts can't get their shite together and figure how to deal with the dangers they face...together...they won't stand a chance against what's left of the Messiah's and their potential allies such as the principal messiah's brother...that is to say if there isn't any love lost betwixt the two... Just where is the principal messiah and Vion??? And...what sort of trouble is going to come out of the Red Ravens Tavern???? -
Ritter with all his overwork would be a strong contender, especially after his encounter with Doc Holiday
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Being in the right place and at the right time pays off and what will transpire as a result of meeting the local vet?
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For some reason, the following quotes have been sticking in the back of my mind as I eagerly await the next chapter. While we all know Freddie is a spineless dolt, governed by the shrew he's married to, it would be interesting/instructive to know more about his thought processes... I am trusting you to make that decision solely based on your own instincts. If he is, you will read the first will, and destroy the second. If he is not, you will read the second will and burn the first.” “This is why you needed to meet with George before you could read the will,” the Duke of Suffolk noted. “It is, Your Grace,” Scruggs replied. “An did you decide that George would indeed befriend these Catholic tenants?” Freddie asked with a sneer. “I had a lengthy conversation with His Lordship, my lord, and I am convinced that he will honor Lady Kendal’s wishes,” Scruggs said. Granger was impressed with how well he was handling this complex situation. His attitude was both firm and respectful. “And what happened to the second will?” Davina asked. It was easy enough to see her plan. She would fight in court to overrule the first will and rely on the second, which was presumably more favorable to her and Freddie. “I burned it as instructed, my lady,” he replied. “That was a rash and inappropriate thing to do,” the Duke pronounced. “I disagree, Your Grace,” Rosslyn said. “He has clearly followed Lady Kendal’s directives.” That certainly didn’t make the Duke happy, but he had little choice but to acquiesce. “So you asserted your love of these papists?” Freddie asked Granger nastily. From Lady Kendall's letter, again it would have been interesting to have been a fly on the wall to overhear the conversations betwixt Freddie and their father... My nephew Freddie, the Marquess of Preston, would probably torture them because they were Catholic. My other nephew Bertie, Lord Blakeney, is much too self-absorbed to worry about them.” “Just as we thought,” Freddie said to the Duke. Granger and his mother, both furious, stared at them in disbelief. I feel that this is a bit more than a warning, plans are already afoot. The question is, who is driving this, or why are the Duke and Lord Freddie so needy for the funds obtained by screwing over family members?? “Freddie is even worse. He will reap the benefits of your labors when he inherits the dukedom, but in the meantime, he will try every trick he can to cheat you out of what is rightfully yours.” It was all Granger could do not to smirk at his brother. He wished Bertie were there because Bertie would have laughed out loud. “Perhaps Bertie had the right idea by going to India and escaping from their grasp, although I am confident that they will still do everything in their power to steal his riches,” Say what??? What in God's green earth would drive you to speculate on such possibilities unless there was a glaring need!!! “It is certainly not good form to taunt your brother,”the Duke said, scolding Granger. “Indeed,” Granger said, controlling his anger. “Freddie noted that Lady Kendal’s will was settled just as the two of you suspected.” The Duke glared at his son, not because he was angry, but because he was cornered. “It was just idle speculation on our part.” “Was that before or after the two of you tried to get me to agree to overturn her will and split things three ways, and to completely cut Bertie out?” Granger asked sarcastically. I would hazard a guess, noted earlier in a previous chapter that Davinia has brought the Duke and her husband to or near the brink of financial ruin with her gambling, that she or Freddie might be in debt to the Guild. In their badgering for the Lord-Lieutenant for Freddie, what would the monetary gain be??? Will they be desperate enough to approach the fallen harlot Caroline and have her come after Grainger with rumors of sexual peccadilloes??? I also fear we haven't seen or heard the last from Davinia... I trully want to know what's really driving the Duke and little Lord Freddie..... “Daventry is right,” Cavendish said. “He owes his position to you. Based on Freddie’s comments, and your father’s reaction, it appears that they were hoping to ensure the larger portion of Lady Kendal’s legacy went to them and not to you.” “Considering what your father owes you, that was a most disloyal way for him to act,” Daventry said, completing the thought. Granger grimaced briefly. “I am hoping that he understands how irritated I am with him, and I hope he can find clarity and explain things to my brother. At the same time, I have my hands full dealing with my wife, and I need him to at least be benign in this process.” “It would be hard to see your father siding with Caroline,” Cavendish said. “I think if he did, he would end up destroying his own marriage.”
