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Chapter 28 - Tchama, Part Zero
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Tchama, Part Zero
So frigging senseless, like others, I'm hoping against hope and that Ninyani somehow comes to the rescue with Aunt Peg and the Mystic! -
Chapter 27 - Tchama
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 27 - Tchama
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Chapter 26 - The Tower
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 26 - The Tower
It would appear that the Principal Messiah just may be fleeing like Vion, are they heading towards her brother? -
Will Ninyani and his extra mantis gland be needed?
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Chapter 24 - The Clash
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 24 - The Clash
Vion learns a few things, no plan of battle survives first contact with the enemy and hubris is a many faceted emotion, and he is in fact a coward... It is now time for the resistance to lick their wounds, care for the injured, take care and honor their dead, and consolidate their gains before making any other moves... We are yet to see the full measure of the aftermath... -
Gives new meaning to things that go bump in the night....
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To partially quote Robert Frost, sometimes the best path/road to take is the one less traveled...
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Poem Entry - New Sights.
drsawzall commented on Midnightwolfpup's story chapter in Poem Entry - New Sights.
A positive message that those who refuse to stagnate...Live to experience the wonders that surround us!! -
They say that beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, memories that never fade... Read on to see if you agree!
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Time passes on for all of us, but memories such as this show me time that'll last forever...thank you!
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So well done and thank you Sir for reminding this old fart how I looked at the wonders of the world so long ago, discovering that same passion is still there!!!! Thank you!!!
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Oh to be young again and be able to experience the wonders of your surroundings, discovering how fleeting some experiences may be... An exceptional series of thought provoking poems...
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Chapter 7 Passions Explode
drsawzall commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 7 Passions Explode
Now, let's see where this conjugal reunion goes, will it last or will the two be like moths drawn to the flame of the candle... -
Pulled in a Dozen Directions
drsawzall commented on Refugium's story chapter in Pulled in a Dozen Directions
Robbie has wandering eyes for the wrong person and he might have to have a talkin to~!!! Ritter needs to have a "Come to Jesus Meeting" with Samael and look at how far he has (over?) stretched himself... Ike Clanton...what can be said about a cowardly bully, one that is all mouth and quite the expert at bushwacking folks...nothing good is gonna come out of his visit... -
What's the old adage??? "Prior proper planning prevents..." What a fantastic idea to use the jeep with the pole to ensure safe passage thru some of the small towns!!! Gotta love the helpful police officer as well!! That bus you used for the story cover looks like a interesting ride!!
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Starting down the rabbit hole
drsawzall commented on leo4567's story chapter in Starting down the rabbit hole
Well told and looking forward to more and I like the little bit of mystery with the missing twin brother! -
Despite running across a bunch of ignorant a-holes, when Jexon and Marcus accepted the job as traveling vets, was there any paperwork confirming employment with the traveling rodeo. I would argue there is grounds for breach of contract....the bus never should have been bought otherwise...let's hope they can turn this situation towards their advantage...
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looks like they will be traveling in style and the boys are going to get quite an education!!!
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Chapter 23 - Photonova Gland
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Photonova Gland
Somehow I get the sinking feeling that Ninyani will need to use his mantis gland in healing Tchama as a result of her being hurt at the protest/faceoff... -
Well heck...there goes the diet!!! Well done Sir!!
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You certainly picked a classic song...
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I think @raven1 might be on to something with his comment....I thought the following was very interesting, perhaps portending very interesting developments to come... “Only one injured; that has to be a record,” Alastair whispered louder than he intended. “And three more accessed the spark. Only one of them was even normal first access from memory; two were environmental stimulus-response, and one was stopping another,” Bear whispered excitedly. “Wait, they fought while accessing the spark?” Colton asked confused Teo saw us lined up and cleared his throat, breaking the circle. “You boys confused about what you are supposed to do?”
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Chapter 22 - An Unexpected Guest
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 22 - An Unexpected Guest
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It looks as if the Blue clan has their way...arrrggg there be dragons over there me laddie.... Last thing I remember I was running for the door I had to find the passage back To the place I was before "Relax," said the night man "We are programmed to receive You can check out any time you like But you can never leave"
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I can remember my father telling my Mother that she became Swedish by injection....
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