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Is Itumak developing quite the rep as a Ladies Man???? Loved this chapter and the subtlety of the poisonous comments at the dinner table...Aaron handled himself quite well!!
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It is well past the time for a couple of things to happen... Colin and Owain need to sit down and discuss how they are going to act around each other, privately and publicly and what is acceptable... More to the point, Colin's workers are, for the lack of better words, guests, in the house they are working in. Comments such as shirtlifter, said loud enough for the homeowner to hear, is unacceptable and immediate reasons for firing...
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Remembering Thanksgiving and the First Real Physical Contact
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Remembering Thanksgiving and the First Real Physical Contact
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This pretty much sums up my feelings. It is a great synopsis cogently distilled for us....
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Loved this chapter, so much packed into it. Much was said and much more was implied, and if Jubal ponders a mite more, he'll realize folks have his back and are concerned for his welfare. Will have to come back and reread the last few chapters as I am just back from a short vacation, to watch my favorite team choke once again...At least the beer was superb, what little I had...
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This has been an ongoing issue with Devin's mother and it bothers me that the resentment lingers...could it be a larger issue later? “So, you’re able to do all of the same things that they do now?” she asked with a twinge of bitterness in her voice as she pointed at her son and husband.
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More of the same and more of the same old....same old...
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At this point, the following is the best we can hope for. Something is very wrong with this community, and it's time to stop it from spreading, this chaos could be infectious...
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Dr Wagner is trouble, he needs to be dealt withj ASAP
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Confrontation and Escape
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Confrontation and Escape
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Hopefully no one's nose get's out of joint over the seating arrangements!
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Back yet again for more of the same it looks like
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Year 1 AD (After Divorce)
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Year 1 AD (After Divorce)
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Looks like several cakes are metaphorically baking….
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Peek a boo time….
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Can’t disagree with any of the comments above….let’s not forget the mother of all hurricanes is approaching…. And Micco, share the frigging texts with Burke and we have even more red herrings to sift thru It was Danny,” I blurt. “I’m sure of it.” “Danny?” Burke tilts his head, not unlike a wolf. “Danny Parks? Sam’s friend?” “He hates me, Matthew. He’s been stalking me. Throwing accusations around. This morning he sent me some threatening texts.” That gets Burke’s attention. “What kind of threats?” “Never mind.” I regret the outburst immediately. The last thing I want to do is share tangible evidence of anything, bullshit or otherwise.
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Well…so much for my comment in the last chapter…it is no longer a cliffhanger but a wait and see hanger….
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As with the quote, “Do onto others, as you would have done to you” the following quote is in the same vein and wisdom to mold a life around…. God, grant me the serenity to Accept the things I cannot change Change the things I can And the wisdom to know the difference Not sure how I missed this powerful chapter, but now I miss the cliffhanger…
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Oh…look second on page 4….
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Why are flashes of images of Mel Gibson in Braveheart flashing before my eyes?
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Uh oh Balder then took to the altar and spoke,” The Old one says this offering was pathetic and we need to offer him a human babe. He also says you aren’t being as diligent with your prayers and tithings and must offer more to the Order of Eternal Night. So saith The Old One, so mote it be. Now offer praise to out benevolent God.” Travis followed along with the other demons, not wanting to stand out, as they prayed to Oblivion, but Dre refused, causing a minor kerfuffle.
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Boots should get 2 ribeyes a day! Thank goodness Corbin and Boots are ok… Ok all you haters, the Jury is still out…. Asa wasn’t sure how everyone else slept, but he and Caleb tossed and turned all night, and yet, they were ready at five a.m. to catch the flight Sebastian had arranged for them. Asa frowned as they drove away from the house. Last night had escalated so fast they didn’t get to give a proper goodbye to everyone, but it couldn’t be helped. Poor Caleb. He knew his mate regretted leaving things with Vann unresolved. His anguish was palpable through their bond. Asa felt it in a way that was similar to a fine-tuned instrument hitting a wrong note.
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And yet scum like Calvin seem to thrive on the misery they inflict on others…all we can hope for is that he shows his true self in the courtroom… There has to be some monetary gain for Calvin to push the envelope so far in this case…
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Chapter 81: Final Chapter
drsawzall commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 81: Final Chapter
Amen brother…amen!!! Lord Arbor thanks for this book and the knowledge that the saga will continue, as we all know a certain vertically challenged piquant pissant, is about to wreak havoc much greater than his stature!! A lot of answers in this chapter…well done!!- 57 comments
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Let the learning begin and just where will it lead to?
