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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 5 S1

    It seems that Devin has plans to see Michael join him as a skinwalker, the question becomes, is it done by someone who is or can act as a shaman...OR...Could Devin be turning Michael by intimate activities??? 😉!!
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 75

    Another thought occured to me, the Duchess of Suffolk, was Grainger's mother a bit closer to Lady Kendall than we thought? While gossip and speculation seems to travel faster than any other type of news, Lady Kendall was remarkably well informed and current. It would seem to explain her bequest to the Duchess of Suffolk...
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 75

    Wow...Wow...simply wow... What a fantastic chapter and can't add much to what has already noted, other than to say that Davinia just may be opening a larger can of whoop ass...It is to be expected that she, her dunce for a husband and father-in-law just may not realize or understand how much the King, Prince of Wales and the Duke of Cumberland just how much esteem they hold Grainger in, considering how much he smoothed troubled waters. I suspect Caroline is going to be mortified when she realizes the magnitude concerning the error of her ways... I believe after further consultation and consideration, both estates will run very smoothly... It will be fun watching the clueless and befuddled try to overturn Lady Kendal's will... Thanks Lord Arbor for another fantastic chapter!!!! Now to reread it once again!!
  4. Well...it would seem that a mystery was cleared up except for the missing letters and where they might be??
  5. My gut feeling is that the Messiah's will retrench for the night, to better plan and understand what is facing them...Conversely, it is time for the residents of the town to realize that they need to organize!!! Why do I get the feeling that Ninyani might be a secret weapon...
  6. Well done, could not have said it any better... One thing has me wondering about Ninyani, we know he has the ability to make things hot or cold, in his defeating the old "god'' of his village, one unintended side effect was the death of everyone in his village...does he have the ability to create the same sort of effect elsewhere, or was it just a one time thing???
  7. I think it is time to retrench, solidify the guard force rotation, have reserves in place to meet any opponent and securing your homes and businesses...
  8. drsawzall

    TV Chapter 9

    No rest for the weary from the vacation, talk about jumping from the frying pan to the fire!!! I hope Jexon and marcus get a bit to unwind and help the new family members settle in
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    A very engaging beginning, love the setting and looking forward to more!! Found the following very enjoyable, nothing like Jägermeister glasses to clear one's vision...even if temporarily... But the sounds intensify and I start to feel something even stronger, a strange taste on my lips. Fearing what's coming, I slowly pull away from Matthias and look deeply into his eyes. "Levi, I need to tell you something..." He says, breathing heavily. Whatever he wants to say seems important. "Hey guys I really need to close now..." Conrad's voice reaches us when he comes out of the kitchen. He looks at me and frowns, "Levi? Are you okay? You look... green..." I process his words, but can't give an answer because right after his last words, I feel something coming up from my stomach. And without time to run to the bathroom, I end up throwing up on Matthias's sweater, before passing out.
  10. Can't disagree, one has to wonder now that the citizens have been setting up neighborhood and town watches, how long it will take for these independant actors to be brought under control and get to organizing... Then again one has to wonder, how long before the monsterdom of the mutated to enter the soon to occur fray??? “Curse these monsters!” she raged. “Now they’ve attacked our sacred place!” The Principal Messiah stood upright as Vion approached. “Our fallen kin at this attack site,” she informed him, “only display two of the three types of murderous energies we’ve encountered. With any luck, our enemies are facing dissension in their ranks. Come inside, now,” she commanded, and without waiting, she stormed in through the broken doors. Vion left his inquisitors in the street and followed her. “Do you know what happens when a Messiah consumes another mantis gland?” the Principal Messiah asked. “Another, milady?” She furrowed her brow. “Yes, another,” she replied. The woman glared at Vion with an expression that dared him to interrupt her again. “You remember eating the mantis gland that turned you into a Messiah, correct?” Her question was rhetorical, and her tone was sarcastic. She continued without allowing him to reply. “Far to the south, the mountains end in a vast flatland, but between the two lies a region of foothills that serve as the monsterdom of the mutated. Those twisted addicts,” she continued, as she began to climb the stairs, “are not part of this society.” The Messiah's hell bent on death, destruction , and the cannibalization of the innocent need...must be eradicated if they are unable to change their ways. And to repeat myself...for those who feel differently...re-read Ch1 of the first book...
  11. drsawzall

    TV Chapter 8

    Well done sir and well played!!! Nice to see Jexon amd Marcus will, along with family, consolidate mand focus on the important things in life!!!
  12. I hope that everyone at the show remains safe and gets home safely... We do not know who was impacted by the events alluded to in the last two chapters, I suspect the aftermath will not be pleasant...
  13. This is not the end nor the beginning of the end, this is perhaps the end of the beginning...Winston S Churchill Lets hope they fully organize before acting precipitously, more to the point, what's to become of those who are exiled and have eaten more than one mantis gland. What happens to Vion when he ingests a second mantis gland, can, or will he want more???
  14. It's past time to organize, and once they do eliminate those who won't change their ways and exile the others if need be.
  15. Ladies and gentlemen of the jury, I rest my case, let the shifts organize and eradicate the Messiah's who won't or will not change their ways... And for those in doubt, please re-read Ch 1 of the first book... “I don’t taste anything. What does SF stand for?” “Spinal fluid,” she replied casually. “They want to call us cannibals; we’ll act like cannibals.” Vion looked down at his mug with a disgusted expression. “Keep your judgments to yourself,” the Principal Messiah snapped. Her scowl was back in place. “Don’t pretend that you haven’t eaten part of a Shift.” He looked back up at her and quietly asked in a kowtowed voice, “What does drinking Shift spinal fluid do?” “It is power over the powerful,” she replied with a wicked laugh. “I would eat every scrap of this monstrosity,” and the woman waved at the helpless victim, “except for his mantis gland. I have no interest in mutating like my brother. This thing,” she spat at the unconscious man, “is meat. He is prey to our kind. He is nothing more than an animal upon which we feed.” The Principal Messiah finished her beverage and placed the mug on a table.
  16. Iffin it ain't one thing, is another or so it seems...trouble seems to follow our boys, let's hope they can keep their heads above the dust clouds...
  17. It is past time for an honest conversation boys.... After he'd gone to sleep, I got up to write. I hate myself. I've done something to make my best friend feel like he had to pay me with sex, and I hate myself.
  18. High School romances almost never endure the pangs of separation when two lovers wend their way towards different destinations..
  19. drsawzall

    TV Chapter 7

    Talk about a seismic family shift and all to the good!!! Wonder what adventures the boys will find in their new home in Australia??
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 4 S1

    On a lighter note...let's hope this ability is immune to schizophrenia, but then we learn not all skinwalkers are forces or agents of good!!! “Yes, I can change into other animals and a lot more. I’m not a typical skinwalker, because most of them are evil and can usually only change into one or two other animals. I’m capable of changing into a great many different types of animals, as well as transitioning into different humans, both male and female. To put it bluntly, I can morph into just about anything that I’ve ever seen before, come into contact with, or can merely imagine.” Or in a moment of passion deciding to assume not only different positions but actual physical states..."Excuse me Miss, but you look oddly familiar..." Just think of the havoc that could be created if a skinwalker decided to involve themselves onto the realm of political/world affairs... Lot's of intriguing clues and thoughts here @Bill W...write quicker, post sooner!!
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    This happened to me once, I blamed it on the salsa or guac having been left out after the party... One, I am not a familiar. You and I are connected, but you are not a witch, you do not have magical powers, and I am not some sort of conduit to the spirt realm or a mystical wellspring of power. I am, however, the embodiment of the Cosmos, and someone has stolen my star.”
  22. drsawzall

    TV Chapter 6

    Wow...it is a small world after all or so it seems, it must come as such a shock to find out you've got family that you didn't know about..and on the plus side it would seem the boys have gravitated towards Jexon and Marcus...Julia Appleton will be surprised once the boys return to her house...to say the least! Kudos to the parents for being far sighted in providing for the boys in case of a situation like this!!
  23. Let's hope that Ninyani is and remains safe and it sounds like the Messiah's are about to reveal their ugly selves, one can only hope it backfires and they are put down quickly...
  24. drsawzall

    Chap 1

    Sadly there are those who are uncomfortable when it comes to thinking for themselves and have no issue with others thinking for them. And will blindly follow someone of a group of someone's who can convince others that, and take your pick, the world is ending, society is breaking down, brown skinned rapists' and murders from south of the border are coming to steal your women, children and steal your jobs, or the government is involved in a seriously complex plot to make everyone wear tinfoil hats...and let's not forget we need to be aware of space lasers, axe the constitution, and the need to execute all the democrats... A friend from high school, now many years past, will reach out to me to try and save my soul every few years or so...I think he forgets that, despite his supposed superior belief system, he's coming to battle unarmed... This time he was ranting against unmarried fornication and other similar ills...I asked him about Jesus and the woman at the well,, and was he the type of christian who cherry picked the parts of the bible that suited him...I suspect it will be another year or so before I see him again...
  25. Would fit in nicely with any of the old Twilight Zone stories...well done!!
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