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If I was Rafe's father or brother, I'd be getting a bit worried right about now, Dylan will make a good partner in the work to be done!! While it may seem as if the school has nothing more to teach Rafe but...it just may be best if he stays the course and finishes...all the better to take on dear old dad and...have we heard ZoelWulfrot and his band of mangy misfits???

It will be interesting to see just how far Gary will go given time as their senior year commences...

While I can understand what is happening, the bio-shifts need a leader who can harness their abilities and power... Let's not forget what the Messiah's are... https://gayauthors.org/story/adam-andrews-johnson/the-mantis-variant/1

It might be a worthwhile reminder to go back to the first chapter of the first book in this series if you want to see the evil that the Messiah's are/perpetuate. To not react or fight back and eliminate the threat the Messiah's poise would mean more of your fellow citizens and friends would face subjugation until the Messiah's are eliminated and as the following attests to... “An example needs to be made,” the woman continued, “and it needs to be made in Gate Town. I will not stand to have our authority questioned or resisted, nor will I be satisfied until we have access to every part of the city and each inhabitant. No angry mob will stop us.”

Is Dozi's brother still safe???

Let's not forget they are cleaning up the Messiah scum, that started the whole mess to begin with, with their cannibalistic ways...Lets remember one important fact...it is the Messiah's who have been preying on the innocent and from what we've seen, there is no accommodating them or negotiating with them... Not sure I would consider them heartless or savage, sometimes you have to fight fire with fire, let's hope once the Messiah's have been dealt with, that peace and harmony will reign..

Me thinks Satan has taken up residence up Helen's backside!!! Sam is showing promising talent and here's hoping someone calms Ike down...it seems as if the man just cain't take no for an answer, what I did not know was, that when the infamous gunfight took place with the Earps, Ike was seen skedaddling away as fast as his cowardly feet could take him...he's gotta lot of mouth for a coward...

Quokka...one of your best chapters yet...thanks!!! As a Yank, I've fallen in love with the Chester Zoo from the TV series on the Animal Planet channel... Not knowing anything about the March Stones, I had Uncle Wikipedia tell me a bit...very interesting!!! Hopefully the soon to be adopted boys will find comfort with Marcus and Jexon!! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/March_Stones_of_Aberdeen

What an exciting chapter with so much going on...The mother-in-law who won't be named is still worrying me and will do so till she is in Berlin and under 24/7 surveillance... Love the fact they are going to flush out and drive the Consortium into obscurity...time to neuter them and rend them harmless and if possible, incarcerated!!! I live a stone's throw from Downtown Boston, and I want one of those burgers...hell...all of them but not at the same time!!! Bohdan and Ruslan deserve more than a dinner and a mention in the history books, paying for their higher education and possible jobs in the Kingdom's outdoor recreational sector as they both love to be out exploring the countryside!

Had to chuckle at the following... “What do you boys want to do today?” “Can we go fishing?” “You remember how sick Uncle Arnaud got in Greece? I think we should wait until he goes home before we go fishing.” They agreed. The next question is, “When is he leaving?” And am saddened with the news of Colin's father...it will not be an easy transition for everyone...

As well conceived and thought out a story to be found anywhere, hitting so many high points, as our protagonists are overcoming setbacks on their voyage of self-discovery and personal relationships. Well written, paced, enthralling, and just a delight to read!

Reading this again was wonderful!!! And as noted above, simply perfect!!! I blame the fact that it is spring and the pollen count is rising, for the used tissues!!! Looking forward to seeing more of your stories grace the pages of this story site!!!

Pandora's box has been opened...there will be retribution to be sure, hopefully it will mean that more Messiah's will be drawn out and meet their just rewards in whatever version of hell awaits them... What happens to the Mantas Glands of the dead Messiah's, are they destroyed as well?

Here's hoping the two mutilated Messiah's were Vion's partners and some suspicion falls on Vion, it is a shame however that Vion wasn't there when it all went down...

Looks like a friendship has gotten a bit more involved...

I think Dickie suffers from a genetic malformation, where is mouth has an independent brain, and it is intellectually challenged!!

To quote a great author..."Something's rotten in Denmark"...

Loved this!!! Least he missed riding in James Dean's porsche

It's a case of absence making the hearts grow fonder and other parts harder!!! Much has been left unsaid, I would have expected there would have been insurance settlements in the deaths of both Mac's siblings...funds available for any college, Mac as valedictorian, left me stunned there weren't any scholarship offers. Like others, I found the lack of return addresses on the cards sent, along with the hiatus before the first was sent, puzzling... Then there is what happened on the path on that first hike at Devin's family cabin...we have an enigma wrapped inside a mystery,,,

One of the best stories to grace the pages of Gay Authors and it has it all, romance...some odd characters...mystery...humor, think ice-cold bottle of Ensure...an old victorian mansion with secret staircases, a missing will...and finding the strength to bust open a closet door... Be prepared, once you start, you'll find it difficult to put down!!!

First of all...thank you for the time and effort for gracing us with this story... Thank god Rick was where he needed to be as Jonathon proved himself right to the end...I suspect the boxes weren't full of trinkets... I found the following to be so painfully honest...I've been involved in a 13 yr family battle over an inheritance, the details of the will are unambiguous yet unlike Marc, there are those who can't see past their own childish intransigency... Why wouldn‘t these cravings leave him? Time after time, his mother had hurt him. His longing for her had been painful, and his resentment peppered with hope for too long. He needed to let go. Get angry, if that‘s what it took to banish her. But was it really productive, or even fair, to be angry? The truth was, he didn‘t even know his mother. Whatever motivations or reasons or even regrets she kept close to her heart were a mystery to him. His was still a child‘s anger, a child‘s hope. But he hadn‘t been a child for a long time. It was past time to let go. What planet is Marc's mother living on, off running because people needed her, things that needed doing...unlike her child??? Whatever gave her the thought that he'd come running, did it ever occur to either one of them that their first responsibility before saving the world, was their son??? “You‘re so thin.” He‘d wanted to say it differently, or maybe he‘d wanted it to mean something he couldn‘t verbalize, but Maggie tilted her head, acknowledging his words, and after that, it didn‘t seem necessary. “I lead a very active life, Marc. Sometimes I think it might be time to slow down, but then there are other things that need to be done, more people who need me, and I‘m off and running again.” She laughed, the same soft, lilting sound that Marc remembered from his childhood. “It suits me, this thing your father and I do.” A gust of wind rushed past, and she lifted her face to it, inhaling deeply. “I didn‘t want to presume anything,” she said, “so I waited, hoping you‘d come.” I'm so glad to see the Mill brought back to its original splendor, I have a fetish for old, historical buildings, and the hint of the future to come, the work that lays ahead of them. You've created a fan @Libby Drew and while I look forward to reading more of your work, I look forward to the day where we may return to this local and characters someday! Thank you!!!!

I'd give Greg and Junebug less than 24 hrs and Greg being Pan wouldn't affect the relationship as after all, love is love! This story warms the heart and hits all the right notes without being perspicuous...I for one, would love to see more of your work posted here!!! One of the things I loved about this chapter is how you work in the ordinary, background minutiae of day to day life, an example that adds richness and depth is the following.... A few minutes later I heard that weird sound again, like a truck backing up. "What is with that doorbell?" I asked Donnie. He shrugged. "The old bell broke. My dad had that beeper in the basement, and he hooked that up until he could buy a new bell. And then he and my mom split up, and so that's what we have now." Oh.

Her parents will remain that way until her brother goes missing like the other children...then they will need her help...

Vion and his helpers just may have started something they can't finish...

Looks like the crystal dragons are about to meet our friends...much to the dragons detriment