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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

    Why does Gorge remind me of...
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    Chapter 22

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    Chapter 30

    In order to preserve what is left of my waistline from expanding further, I am so glad this chapter came after I ate my supper!!! Well done, looking forward to more as time allows!!!
  4. Ya just had to go with the evil coconut...
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    Disp Ch 13

    Hopefully they remain flying under the radar as far as their hostile neighbors to the north go. We've had enough boats/hotels blow up...
  6. Another well written chapter, thank f'ing goodness the store is still open...and I'm having 2!!!! Perry and Kyan together, as certain as my having 2 ice cream sammies tonight....
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    Chapter 21

    Al...its just past what time the rooster crows for this retired old fart...I had to look up both before the caffeine kicked in...talk about conundrums...😉
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    Prologue

    The Egg Stone In the time before and in the time after does the following take place on a planet with two suns and three moons. For there are many tales that follow this story. The time is one of change as the inhabitants are moving from the nomadic to an agrarian lifestyle, where trade is conducted between remote villages and the first use of metals has started. Technology has advanced to the levels to support a merchant class coexisting with the farmers, hunter/gatherers and the religious
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    Chapter 1

    La’gan made his way across the hot dry dusty public square of the village with a heavy heart. He knew what would be asked of him, he was certain of that, why else would he walking with such a heavy heart? More to the point, despite any and all of the objections he would raise, he knew at the end he would have to do what would be asked of him. This dilemma tore at his very soul and shook him to the core of his being. That death was certain was no doubt, either a lucky stone would find it’s m
  10. A story of love and redemption overcoming long odds.
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    Chapter 21

    It remains to be seen if the Pertwee have any magickal abilities or can be taught. Jamie and the others know now that they can/have been tracked to some extent and travel now will be different. While I can't recall the exact chapter, one of the first or second stations seemed to be a warehouse of some sorts. Might it be possible for our intrepid travelers to send one or two after Porvus??? I for one shudder at the thought...
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    Chapter 1

    Like all of you and some of you...I want more and I know zilch about horses... But to assuage your concerns about the story ending I give you the following, as most of you...like me...have short term memory issues... The Case of Cloud Rider - 1. Chapter 1 “Jimmy? I know it’s been a while, and I’m probably the last person you want to hear from, but we need to talk.” I gripped the phone handset so hard, I thought it might break. My heart pounded in my chest, and I felt like all the breath left my body at once. Was this really who I thought it was? I know..I'm a real...
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 193

    It was too hot to cook either lunch or dinner, so I compromised...
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    Chapter 17

    And now the begin to face danger and uncertain future, I suspect it won't be easy...
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    Disp Ch 12

    Well, things are still in a pickle as regarding the diplomatic front as it would appear someone(s) nose is seriously out of joint. Not only have they discouraged their illegal expansion/island building, but they are hitting their merchants in the wallet... Let's hope their time on the station is calm and peaceful...tho Quokka may have other plans for the boys...
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    Chapter 193

    Thank goodness I had lunch before eating/reading this chapter!!!! In the midst of a heat wave here in the Boston Ma area, once it breaks, guess what I'm making!!!!
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    Chapter 20

    Course when this is all over, @weinerdog, it is high time to use their magick to get the cafeteria food dispensers to make...
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    Chapter 20

    A very powerful chapter to say the least, the reality of what they are facing had been made starkly clear. It appears that there can be no detente with the dark mages. I hold out hope that somehow Jamie and his fellow travelers find a way to neuter/neutralize Porvus and his minions. We've yet to meet the Pertwee and am left wondering there may be some nascent magickal talent among them like Bastyin and the Lachess. This begs the question concerning the Lachess and the Pertwee, would/is it possible that Jamie and our fellow travelers, raise a sizeable force of magickal users?? I realize that Bastyin is an outlier, but where there's one, might others have the ability laying dormant??? if there were enough mages created they could simply do to Porvus et al what was done to Artagon. Rather than kill, entrap them till the span of their lives end. "A dispersion field for electrums," Jamie acknowledged. "It can be tied two ways: to disperse from without, or to disperse from within. This one was tied to disperse from the inside." He shook his head in wonder. "It was culled from Master Thorvil's magick tomes in an instant of need by the lens. The field contained Artagon's primary offensive magicks long enough for him to see the futility of their wielding." Of course another punishment would reduce them to...
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    Chapter 19 S1

    A very interesting chapter to say the least, time is drawing close to head out. Hopefully the grades will be posted before they leave... I enjoyed the history bits about the Native American Indians. For anyone interested in knowing a bit more I recommend the following book... https://www.amazon.com/Mans-Rise-Civilization-Cultural-Indians/dp/0140153233
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    Chapter 19

    What if the deceased was left as a message, it would be of significant import. It would imply that their progress of their travels, through the wondrous tunnels of the ancients, is somehow being tracked. One way would be by the use of the devices they have learned to ease their journey, could the power required somehow be monitored?
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    Chapter 19

    Wouldn't that be more like a wait and see hanger??
  22. Can we say who is who???
  23. Oh boy aren't we all in for...
  24. And us commentators loving the return and byplay!!
  25. A poignant story of survival and redemption, Seeing grace and favor where most would least expect. Leaving one much ponder with plenty of food for thought!
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