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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

    Together, the two of them have managed to create something, a physical presence of some sort. Is it sentient? And yes, the best defense is a capable offense, pinning your foes back... I think before they bring the battle to Orinovo, they had best do some serious research into the az-ari. How many types are there? How are "talents" taken from fellow az-ari? Frankly, they need to know everything possible about them before considering bringing the war to Orinovo...
  2. Thanks for this, I enjoyed it very much. You are leaving your readers with a sense of foreboding, knowing there is one more story to follow.... Neither wolf noticed the faint scent of gun oil and silver, the rain washing it away, or the glint of binoculars from a distant ridge, gone in a heartbeat. &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& By the time everything was settled, the storm had passed, leaving the woods washed clean and glistening. Sunlight broke through the clouds. A vehicle engine started somewhere in the distance, the sound barely audible over the laughter beginning to fill the clearing. &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& The sound carried far on the clear night air, echoing across miles of forest into the listening darkness beyond, reaching a concealed spy.
  3. LA seems not to be so appealing
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    King John will not sit still for long, as we see by his comment about instructions/guidance from Rome. Runnymead, as much as the Magna Carta, is seen by many to be a sacred place. There are memorials from many democratic nations attesting to its importance as well. It is believed that the Magna Carta was signed under the boughs of the Ankerwycke Yew, a tree over fourteen-hundred-years-old. Another fabulous chapter, Albert! Runnymede - Wikipedia
  5. drsawzall

    The Brooch

    As much as Goodwin needs to find his courage, Varion needs to understand to play nice with his companions...
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    You borrowed my thunder @Summerabbacat, and once again, we find Killian behind the wheel.....yikes!!! Like everyone else, I hope Fletcher isn't communing with the great spirit in the sky... @RichardWrites makes a great point... I remain curious to see if Adam and Steve have sorted out their difficulties...
  7. drsawzall

    Embarkment

    It's been smooth sailing, so to speak, up to this point. Wait till they hit open water!!!
  8. Oh my goodness, well goodness will have nothing to do with what will happen, things just got very interesting!!! Is this the sound a door makes when it opens??? Jonas nodded slowly. “I know that feeling. Took me a while to figure out what I actually wanted. Turns out it was guys. Older guys, mostly. Ones who know themselves, who don’t play games.”
  9. I'm left wondering if Graham should also be watching his back.... Louis' life is about to get very interesting and busy... I had to look up the museum. I have loved comics since I was a wee child. Every Saturday morning, I would get my allowance and head to the drug store, and spend an hour trying to decide what comic book I wanted, and the flavor of my upcoming ice cream cone....Inevitably, I would also come home with the latest Classic Illustrated comic book and an orange sherbet cone. On occasion, I would be given some comics by the owner that hadn't sold, getting Batman, too violent for my mother, past her was quite the exercise in deception.... The Comic Strip Museum in Angoulême - Angoulême Tourism Classics Illustrated - Wikipedia
  10. As from the last chapter, someone struck more than a match....
  11. Ain't that the truth... On appearance it's a small thing, but that's the match that lights the fire. There is a whole load of other stuff.
  12. I agree with the comments above, no one has been minding the pressure cooker, and it's about to.... I think Alice is going to come back to a huge, disaster-infused mess fueled by alcohol...The farm won't burn down, but several relationships will... Pressing his lips together, Dante nodded simply. "And yes, Matthew needs all the help he can get, but I want you to watch Henry and Frank. This stupid show is happening the day before Ma's birthday, of all days, and if she's allowing the slaves to celebrate, I don't know-- And Pa's not in a good mood right now." To this he raised a brow and asked a little provocatively: "What does this have to do with Frank and Henry?" Was he imagining it, was it the light, or was she really turning pale? "I just want you to intervene in case of emergency, should he try to take out his bad temper on someone who can't fight back or doesn't dare to disagree." Dante nodded obediently, but where she got the impression Blaise was in a bad mood was beyond him; he actually got the opposite feeling. Or maybe that was just her interpretation of the breakup between Blaise and Tom. "And besides, at parties like this there's alcohol for the slaves and both Henry and Frank should keep their hands off of that, the others are already overdoing it, there's no need for these two to join in." Blaise is like a shark, a land shark nevertheless, and he's gonna start something even he can't control...it's a shame a log didn't roll off the truck...damn it... Will this 'birthday party' and its ramifications blow up Frank's guardianship?
  13. He had at least the thought and will... I think he had the thought, but not the will!
  14. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Wow, that was intense!
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 21

    Fenn should have killed Yarima as he tossed her.. It’s time to hit the books and figure out how many disciples one can have! What is the Herald up to?
  16. Wow!!! So well done! And bring on Pt 2!! What a great opening chapter!!!
  17. Steph saw something Steph liked! And did his best to attract the object of his attraction…..🤨
  18. A truly remarkable story of love, engaging and expertly nuanced, as we watch Hudson and Liam build a relationship despite all the negativity tossed in their way. This story had me hooked with one of the best opening chapters I've read in quite some time. As the first chapter finishes, you find yourself on a rollercoaster you won't want to get off of!
  19. My sincerest thanks for gifting us this story. Truly remarkable, and I hope that someday in the not-so-distant future we have a chance to peek in on these two, and let's not forget Mateo or Daniel. Thank you!!! And I look forward to you sharing more of your talent with us!
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Harry is quite the bad boy....
  21. drsawzall

    The Old Fishery

    Should someone check Goodwin for those dangly orbs between his legs?
  22. Poor Enir, I hope he can see past his inhibitions...
  23. Early days yet...I can see this growing organically and will be fun to watch!
  24. Looks like Silas may have some competition for Jamie... Valerian, the High Lord whose origins predated Silas by eons
  25. drsawzall

    Chapter 20

    Ain at the moment, is a detriment to any action that might occur. It would have been better if the spoiled little child that he is had been left at home with a babysitter or two... Behaving as he is, he is of no use to anyone... There has to be more than the Herald making Ain a general to create such enmity. What else happened?
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