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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Now I am officially worried… Rhaelce chuckled and shook his head. “Nyrra is good hunter, but I better and I move without being seen or heard. No worry about her.”
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    Chapter 14

    It is said fortune favors the brave….will it help our boys?
  3. So very true….. “Grief does not demand loyalty through stagnation,” he said. “It asks to be remembered honestly. That is different
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 11

    From the frying pan to the fire…..🔥 The conversation might have ended there — if Tialing hadn't surprised them all by saying: "Let Franz look into the mirror. He is a dreamseer."
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    Chapter 25

    Once again Danilo and Lauretta prove to be more than what is assumed… “You were going to leave without me,” Danilo said softly. “I was going to spare you,” Matteo replied. Danilo shook his head and reached for his own coat. “You were going to get yourself killed or sanctified. Neither of those is useful. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@ He watched Lauretta move through the room, reshaping it with presence alone, and understood that whatever had been taken from Gianluca would not be returned by argument. Not by argument, but by warmth. By insistence. By a table and a name spoken without condition. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ While it may be a threat, there is much for the church to keep quiet… One of the older friars drew a breath. “You would expose the Order to public scrutiny.” “I would prevent it,” Matteo replied. “By resolving this without spectacle.” The implication settled heavily.
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    Chapter 13

    This is a fine series of events…will the fact that ruins came alive work Isiah’s favor?…
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    Chapter 12

    I have to wonder if this response is an automated one from a civilization long past… will it be Gremlin who pulls everyone’s bacon from the fire? Jessie isn’t going to “return” Isaiah if he refuses to return to the father…. Is the father any match for Mickey’s mother?
  8. I understand that people have lives after work, and...gasp...sex!!!! Set up a date so you can have a fun evening...
  9. I'm a bit disappointed with Sam, knowing he wanted to and hopefully, have a stable relationship with Emory, he beds Peter and then tells him to, in all sense of the words, to take a hike... That conversation, the adult thing to do, would have been to tell Peter right away...
  10. A story like that could have an explosive ending...middle...or beginning....
  11. From this... To this...
  12. What he said... Mother needs a jar of Valium, and Father needs to stop forcing expectations as well; perhaps he could share the Valium...
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 7

    It could possibly be a back door into the city as well, however…knowing the dire conditions within the city, is an ally as well….
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    Chapter 7

    Hopefully Ashot was out of the tunnel before the earthquake….
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    Chapter 8

    What becomes/became of Ser Mark, will we learn more about him?
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    Chapter 8

    And so it began…a journey that will change everything and everyone a thousand times…..
  17. A thoroughly engaging tale ripped from the annals of a very turbulent history of England at the signing of one of the greatest documents ever written, the Magna Carta. I strongly recommend this story to one and all, you won’t be disappointed!
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    Chapter 31

    A bit late to the party, and the comments above encapsulates my thoughts and feelings, 100%…. As someone who has enjoyed your other works, I need to tell you that in my humble opinion, this is your finest work. There was a constantcy from the very beginning and throughout the story to the end. It never let the reader down and kept all of us waiting for each and every chapter. For that, I thank you, and can’t wait for the second book!!
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    Chapter 18

    We see this in the deepening relationship the boys and with the acceptance they get from Rowan and Declan…not to mention the email to what was home. I still have fears that the troglodyte’s who oppose the government sponsored archeological works will do something to upset the connection with Cianan….
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    Chapter 11

  21. I still wonder the real reason to go after Kent’s inheritance, if it was simply that, Niran was/is an idiot. If it was as a result of poor financial decisions for any number of reasons, then he proved he played the game badily. One hopes that we’ve seen the last of him…. And, the following speaks volumes… This is business,” he said, adjusting his cuffs. “You forced it to become procedural.” “It never was,” I answered
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    Thokk is closer to understanding his nature, the cause of his loneliness, and how he may play a part in a larger role. I don’t envy him…
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    Chapter 2

    How in the heck did I miss this?? It would appear that Thokk has some serious soul searching to do….
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    Chapter 23

    Danilo has the truth of the matter….and the knowledge and means to be effective… Will this be the moment? Could Benedetto “accidentally “ fall his donkey, or over a bridge? Benedetto would depart for Siena. His absence brief. His return anticipated.
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    Chapter 6

    All of this in the name of a loving, just god who is abused when others are misappropriating his message, on both sides. And both sides are equally guilty….
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