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    Chapter 17

    So...a girlfriend, perhaps someone from the 'Ladies' division of the Hells Angels????
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    Chapter 17

    There will be copies in other places Tarquin can't touch...
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    Chapter 17

    Amen, brother, Oliver is a putz, it is like he's stuck in a TV show rerun, time and time again he sees the light and folds like a cheap house of cards...pathetic, simply pathetic...did I say pathetic??? Yawn.....
  4. Well said!!!
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    Chapter 3 Raincheck

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    Under World

    As much as we appreciate all you have done in creating GA, your descriptive writing talents are sorely missed on these pages!
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    Jupiter Run

    Like many others, more please! And where might we find your submission to the anthology and title please and thanks!!
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    Chapter 5

    The new squires are finding out that their lives are no longer part of the innocence of the young. And while life, even for young children, was fraught with the day to day challanges of daily living. Now they find themselves belonging to the keep, manor, and villages; their every move will be watched to see if they are worthy of the respect of all. There will be challenges from their elders and contemporaries to see how they measure up. They will be probed, taunted, and challenged. Let's see how they measure up. If they remember the lessons Kalen imparted, they will do just fine!!!
  9. I take solace in the following: it will take time, and remember folks pay the attorneys as much as you can as you go... The judge lifted her hand. "I'm not finished." She looked directly at Liam. "Mr. Hart, if the court grants temporary transparency and limited disclosures, you will establish a clean signatory structure immediately. Independent trustee or neutral administrator. Documented and court-supervised. No informal channels. No side arrangements." Liam's voice was quiet. "Yes, Your Honor." The judge's gaze slid to Marina's counsel. "And Ms. Velluto's signatory authority will be removed from the entities described in the motion pending review, so long as the petitioner complies with the clean structure conditions." Marina's counsel's face remained composed, but Hudson saw the flicker, panic buried under professionalism. I hope to all heck we go down the stereotypical road in "the destruction" of the relationship between Hudson and Liam....While I understand it is the job of the author to attract and engage readers, and I can't quibble with his story and the way it has proceeded, if there is to be a break-up in the relationship...please, for the love of whatever, keep it brief... That's my story, and I am sticking to it... Did you say the next chapter is ready?
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    Chapter 34 S3

    What about the Powerball and Lucky For Life tickets??? What is Liam up to??? A lovely chapter!!
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    Tom

    Cockroaches...brrr...no thanks!! Blaise just can't keep his eyes to himself...
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    Chapter 11

    I get the feeling someone's cornflakes just got pissed on...Don't forget Varilik is from Orinovo, or is this a red herring?
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    Chapter 10

    Hopefully they have an honest conversation tomorrow...
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    Chapter 13

    What could possibly go right/wrong...no wonder Will flipped at the beginning of this story...jeezeus
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    Chapter 12

    This is painful and way past the point of shitting or getting off the f'ing pot...somebody find their f'ing voice and remember your testicles...
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    Chapter 11

    WTF????
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    Chapter 10

    Jef is beyond the pale...way beyond, and his testimonials must be the size of grapefruits...
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    Chapter 9

    Jeff...say the word...hotel!!!
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    Chapter 8

    YES!!! And sometimes ya need to talk to each other...not at each other...
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    Chapter 7

    There's a special place in hell for Scott....
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    Chapter 6

    I'm lovin Peter more and more and his sense of sartorial splendor..I used to make my staff wear Hawaiian shirts every Friday and have quite a collection!! Oh...dear lord...what did Jeff just do???
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    Chapter 5

    I've got nice legs and I love the color...from the waist up...best not look to closely... Though, Will thought with trepidation, at least he wouldn't get stuck in a tangerine bridesmaids dress... I think the following explains the origins of black holes... He glanced back at Rafik; a truly unhappy individual lay beneath the man's exterior. A man who, despite all the material things he had in his life, couldn't find a shred of peace. Not because he deserved it, but he ignored it completely when it was presented to him. He was a creature designed to work. In a loveless marriage set to have children he didn't particularly want. He hid behind material wealth with the urge to escape but steadfastly refusing to run.
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    Chapter 4

    It just doesn't add up in some ways...what was to stop him from looking for another and for god's sake, f'ing talk to Andrew...
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    Chapter 16

    Where in the heck is Oliver?????
  25. Hey...I liked algebra 1 so much I took it twice in high school...
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