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  1. drsawzall

    No Way Out

    This was a very true to life chapter…. How can one experience true heartbreak without first learning what sorrow is? Rufus made a promise to his friend. He seems determined to keep it.
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    Shelter

    I’ve been watching a storm chasers program on the Discovery channel and the videos of before, during, and after are hard to comprehend. Last night a huge tornado being filmed, showed revolving lights of a vehicle approximately a couple of hundred feet off the ground. That’s how close Ash and Taggert came to flying. I would have to agree with the following…
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    Chapter 13

    So very true for an inspiring actor… “I’m so proud of you, Johnny. Every time you dare to dream bigger, you reinvent what’s possible. The most authentic stories come from the courage to face your own truth.”
  4. When it rains it pours….and be very careful Ximo, sins of omission have a nasty bite when brought to light.
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    Chapter 17

    The situation also presents a neat solution to whom Zdain will be romantically involved with in the future..While I perish the thought, it is very possible that Ade is walking towards his death. With all the foreshadowing in this chapter, it has also created food for multiple red herrings.
  6. Humm… Something moved down there – a matte black shape, and Lawrence thought he glimpsed a metallic glint. Bubbles from his own nose blinded him. The sun was at its weakest here. He rolled so he could dive after his attacker, but his robe slid off his body, turning into a shroud around his head, cutting his momentum.
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    Chapter 3

  8. Shayna, is a skunk hiding in the tall weeds…
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    Chapter 2

    Well…it’s time to move on towards the north…will they be followed on the way out of town? it’s time to hear from Rhaelce’s point of view….
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    Chapter 6

    Looks like they will need to be careful crossing the railroad tracks…
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    Lunch Surprise

    Well…as grandpa always said, the proof is in the pudding, or something that looks like pudding…
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 17

    Ade has just been set up..
  13. A call for calm hearts and clear minds….
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    Chapter 6

    So, the race is on to meet Darren before the crusaders and dogs catch up. We need a map showing progress of the hunted and hunters…
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    HD Chapter 7

    I'm impressed the twins want to do their own laundry, good on them! And I would love a day or two on the Adelaide!
  16. Many enjoyable stories here
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    Chapter 2

    The finest Arabian goats mind you!
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    Chapter 2

    And shoveled snow barefoot with a KFC spork
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    Chapter 5

    Depends on what faith one proscribes to, and listening to the haranguing that all other faiths are false. And to think…they are all sons/children of Abraham….
  20. This slow dance is a delight to behold…there is much quietly said in the following….an unspoken acceptance indicated… Yes, well, I must credit Oliver with that. He has become quite fixated on lemons. He asks for little, so when he spoke to me at length of how refined and fastidious they are, how fashionable and versatile, and such handsome trees besides which would look well in the front garden, I indulged him.” ************ “Yes. It is merely a cake.” For reasons unknown to me, this amused him. I wished to ask why but would not gratify his mischief by doing so. Instead I reached for his empty plate and the knife. He watched, drawn back to the moment. I cut another slice and returned the plate to him without a word. He struck me as looking quite starved. “Indulge.”
  21. My goodness, my psychotic , power of prediction was spot on…I’m off to buy a lottery ticket and a scratch card… I have to think once exams are over, Harry will find himself at the sheep farm… And once the dust settles, I imagine that a serious, intensive discussion will need to take place as to the future of the farm. If it is to sell, one hopes Aled shares in the result of the sale. I can’t see how the two brothers can keep the farm going, it will be months, if not years before Iwan can work the farm. it would be a real kick in the pants if Harry and Aled were no longer a couple…a throuple possibly…
  22. It must have been difficult during that time knowing that there were so many eyes out there looking for trouble, and from both sides of this conflict… Ximo was certainly fast on his feet, but worried that gossip may follow…
  23. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Welcome back and look forward to reading the rest of the story!
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