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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Gotta love Jacy, he’s got Killian pegged! Or wants to peg a certain someone… "Great!" Jacy grinned as he jumped out of the car and onto his motorcycle. Checking over his shoulder to make sure I was behind him, he revved the bike to life, and it leaped into motion. He made sure to keep his speed down so I could keep up, even though I knew the way This indicates we may have found the Granddaddy Red Herring…
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I have to believe that The Heart Of The Fen will have something to say to Louis and his folly, misplaced pride, ambition, will be for naught as the Fen will have something more to say. That the day to come will test the resolve of all, and forces beyond comprehension will have Louis questioning the cost of his folly. His tired, broken army will be no match for what they will face as they leave Wynthorpe…. No one who survives the day to come, will forever be changed.
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If I remember correctly, their time in Egypt won’t end well..
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Oh my…Mistress Carolyn must be in a dither and I suspect Alice has/will come to understand the words exchanged were coming from a different place. Blaise needs to get more than what he deserves, I was stunned that Val was also molested… Can’t imagine what’s next…
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This is going to be one hell of an adventure…and ya just gotta love this mangy cast of ill begotten, flea bitten, cast of characters….
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With so many stories to catch up on, I couldn’t resist…
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I worked with some folks those movers reminded me of, sad part was they were upper management…
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The Letter and the Weight that Comes with It
drsawzall commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Letter and the Weight that Comes with It
Steven still has a mighty long way to go, he’s taking the first steps, now to put in the effort to make it stick… -
Sideways seems to be a multi-directional hazard…and I suspect the different tangents will have sharp edges…
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This comment is spot on!!!
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Not all battles of import are fought at sea...Rumor, duplicity, and innuendo are known to travel faster than actual knowledge of the situation, when to tack, when to jibe, and trim your sails... “Alquier does not seem like the kind of man who is good at schemes, so this must have been developed by Villeneuve,” Granger mused. “That is why I find him so offensive,” Cardona spat. “Such a liaison would not have happened without approval from Paris,” Granger opined. Cardona looked at him questioningly. “This is too important of an alliance to France to allow a minor diplomat to wreak havoc on his own.” “I can see your point,” Cardona said. “You are suggesting that Villeneuve was following orders?” “That is what I am suggesting,” Granger said. “If Alquier is not the type of man to set up such a scheme, and I agree with you that he is not, then who did?” Cardona asked. “This entire scheme has the fingerprints of Monsieur de Talleyrand all over it,” Granger said. He could see his scheming French friend putting together just such a plot.
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This is the part that piqued my curiosity...if it doesn't belong here, where does it???
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My goodness…how to convince a soul to come back…
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Loved the banter, Mack and Mills are a treasure and had me in stitches…and if I think this chapter hilarious, I can’t wait for the wedding planning…. "You look good in gold, it’s clearly your color, Mack," Parker teased, turning to leave. "Walk away, Parker," Mack warned, though he was already burying his face in a warm, freshly dried combat shirt. "Just walk away and let me have my moment with the fabric softener.”
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Sam will soon learn the importance of Ser Graeme’s words, the world outside his village is full of danger.
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Toto…this isn’t Kansas anymore, we got flying (dancing) monkeys…
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And the plot thickens??? Priya held the vial up to the light one last time. “This is either the most extraordinary find of my career… or something that doesn’t belong here at all.”
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Wow in a good way....😉
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Loved this, music in this genre reminds me of my earlier years chasing groups like this as I followed the bluegrass/soft country rock circuit....AND...can't count the times I was told: "I'm going straight to hell"!!!!!!!
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This keeps cropping up in my memory banks.... Kitt tried to roll his eyes, but the smile that tugged at his mouth made it useless. He stepped onto the bus and looked back just once—Matt in his hoodie, hair a mess, grin bright enough to cut through the early-morning haze. The doors hissed shut. Kitt leaned his forehead briefly against the cool glass, watching as Matt jogged across the lot toward his car, waving one last time before the bus pulled away. The sun was just beginning to climb, soft gold spilling across the road. &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& Why then does Matt take the bus back? The bus waited with its doors open, engine rumbling. “You ready to go back?” Matt asked, rocking on his heels. Kitt glanced at the bus, at his teammates filing in with drooping shoulders and damp hair, then back at Matt. “Yeah,” he said. “Can I sit with you?” Matt asked, like there was any universe where the answer was no. “Of course,” Kitt said, and meant it a little more than he knew how to say.
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As with others, and my aged brain can work slowly, but early this morning, as I was ruminating on this latest chapter, and it came to mind that Jacy seemed to be inordinately interested (absorbed?) with the collection whilst Killian was engaged with the Mrs...
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Small steps leading towards a reconciliation soon.
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I can’t disagree with this comment above, and want to reinforce that in all my bitching and moaning, it is because of the author’s skill and talent, that he draws such a visceral reactions from me. And I need to note this was one of the best chapters yet.
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Forgot to comment on Seth and Kate’s mother, that cancer is particularly horrible, and while I have no love for her, or what she is and did, I can only hope that as her time ends, that she has the time to reflect understand the harm she is responsible for.
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One of your best chapters yet…packed full of valuable information… We are reminded that a lich can be killed, yet in Arlo’s case it isn’t so easy. So difficult that many gods are willing and trying to understand what the lich has that makes it so difficult to destroy it. We learn that when Arlo’s time comes, if he is a follower of Densa, he will return to the place his earlier vision showed him. All of this makes me wonder, what is the endgame of the lich that has Arlo’s fate? To become a god, perhaps?
