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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    If not kept in good condition a knife edge will dull, so it goes with his fellow soldiers and knights.
  2. What goes around, comes around… Can you really blame Louis? That general had tried to execute them after all.
  3. I’m hooked!
  4. Let’s hope the police are informed ASAP…I truly dislike Thomas, hopefully he finds a boyfriend when he’s in the slammer! Now…where is our favorite detective and partner? Best of luck in cheering the place up! Might they find “the object” of desire when they do so?
  5. drsawzall

    Tom

    It’s funny, I go from disliking Tom to a pathological hatred of Blaise… I like shrimp, just made a shrimp and scallop pie with seafood stuffing on a crushed Ritz cracker base last night. I seared the scallops first and used pre cooked shrimp. A bit of drawn butter before popping into the oven.
  6. Mateo is growing on me…I didn’t even like him at first but… It will take but a moment for the C U Next Tuesday of an agent to figure out what Liam’s plan is. While they are in the air steps should planned and enacted to excise the painful bunion she has become. The studio is going to love the publicity as it will sell tickets and fill theatre seats….perhaps with the studio’s legal team they can terminate the bitch witch….
  7. The wishful thinking part of my brain has me pondering a combination of both themes in one story....
  8. drsawzall

    Epilogue

    Thank you for this story, I enjoyed it very much! As for your next, I vote #1
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 35

    This chapter is certainly a wow chapter for what we have learned. Will we find out what the Prince, now emperor, has to tell us in the epilogue??? Bartos...tread lightly understanding what you are facing...
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 7

    Tarquin will soon find out his control over Orel is kaput...Orel is 18; while he may be on a spectrum, he's certainly able to care for himself. With that 'little performance' in the study, Tarquin just signed on to an ignominious, spectacular ending. Safe to say, our heroes need to lie low, quietly setting their traps, and let their nemesis think all is well and going according to his "plans"...DO NOT give him andy reason to suspect something is afoot....
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    I had to go with angry, and that anger justifiably is justifiably directed to the A-HOLE Tarquin...That a ledger was kept itemizing the PI's findings while following Finn, wants me to think if the A-Hole is/was responsible for the deaths of Finn's parents, he will have kept a record of it as his narcissism would demand no less....I'm reminded of a poem by Emily Dickinson. As a side note, critics of this poem often note that the poet is a reporter observing a murder...make of it what you will...to me the first stanza speaks volumes... A Bird came down the Walk by Emily Dickinson A bird came down the walk: He did not know I saw; He bit an angle-worm in halves And ate the fellow, raw. And then he drank a dew From a convenient grass, And then hopped sidewise to the wall To let a beetle pass. He glanced with rapid eyes That hurried all abroad, They looked like frightened beads, I thought; He stirred his velvet head Like one in danger; cautious, I offered him a crumb, And he unrolled his feathers And rowed him softer home Than oars divide the ocean, Too silver for a seam, Or butterflies, off banks of noon, Leap, splashless, as they swim. #OrelFinn #LydiaOliver + Mrs Patel
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    #OrelFinn #LydiaOliver + Mrs Patel
  13. Went to a boxing match once and saw a hockey game break out....
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 32 - End

  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 32 - End

    Phew...looks like I dodged that bullet....
  16. Nice to see Daren has someone watching over his back.... I think hockey has been misnamed...It should reasonably be called Boxing On Ice...
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Well...the father boots our knight out the door, followed shortly by his mother, the love of his life is sleeping in eternal rest.. Looks like a great story here! Let me put my thinking cap on...🤔
  18. Best friends make life much more enjoyable!!!
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 30

    A lovely chapter a delight to read!
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    Stick to the outline, let's not find ourselves unable to see the forest for the trees...and...Orel ain't no dummy. He's well aware of what his oldest brother is capable of, it becomes a case of just who is controlling who....
  21. Sometimes it's best if you talk to each other, not at each other...
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    While it wouldn't serve the story as plotted, I would have kicked the a-hole in the balls (perhaps the tire iron instead?) and have at him as he was bending over retching....stuffed him in the front seat of his car, emptied the bottle of cheap rotgut all over him, set the car in gear towards the pothole and the bridge, and watch. I'm debating on using a lighter as well... Ok...now that that is out of the way, not that I have any strong feelings...I loved this chapter, knowing the longer term plan makes the most sense...to see the a-hole emasculated in the most public space!!!
  23. And yet, at the end of the day, all Leo is trading is one hell for another and simply a pawn...
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