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  1. CassieQ

    Chapter 4

    It's cool, I'm used to being booed. Jack has a hard road ahead...he's in a bad situation for sure, and at a point where he needs to be able to make his own choices, and form his own opinions and judgements. I hope he succeeds. Thank you for the comment!
  2. CassieQ

    Chapter 4

    It is a sad story. Jack has to pick up the pieces and move on, but hopefully he will learn how to be a better friend if he finds one. It's a huge success to be able to live life freely and authentically! Kudos! Thank you for commenting!
  3. CassieQ

    Chapter 4

    It's not a very happy story. I hope things turn out better with your Jack than mine. Thanks for commenting!
  4. Extra special thanks to the person on the Proof team that had to tackle my 22,000 word monster.
  5. CassieQ

    Chapter 4

    Everyone is entitled to their own opinion on Will. Personally, I take a more charitable view of his character. I get where you are coming from. Yes, Will knows how devastating it was for Damon when he came out and he knew Jack would probably face more of the same. But Jack wasn't there to help pick up the pieces, and Jack wasn't there to see how much pain Damon was in when everyone in his life essentially turned their back on him. Will had to help deal with that, and I think seeing his boyfriend in that much pain and dealing with that much betrayal, limits how much empathy Will could really have towards Jack. Will doesn't approve, that's obvious from being so ashamed and embarrassed that he couldn't even look at anyone, but he doesn't try to stop Damon from seeking revenge and doesn't reject him, even though he doesn't like what Damon has done. He may be guilty by association, but I wouldn't put him on the same level as Jack or Damon. But I like hearing what other people think about it, thank you for sharing!
  6. CassieQ

    Chapter 4

    Karma is a bitch, is it not? Jack went through a hard time, but he got a taste of what Damon had to go through, and I think he needed that. No epilogue, sorry. I liked the open ending that left Jack needing to make a choice and figure out what he is going to do with his life. Thank you for commenting!
  7. CassieQ

    Chapter 4

    I'm not surprised about Alyssa either, basically for the reasons you pointed out. It wasn't enough that she had driven a wedge between Jack and his best friend, but when he dumped her (kindly) she wanted revenge. She's a not a very happy person. Damon went through a lot ever since Jack turned him away. He was rejected by his mother and kicked out of his home, his best friend turned him away and he lost his connected to Jack's family as well...a place where Jack's siblings knew him and liked him, and where Jack's mother cared enough to send him food if he didn't stay for dinner. Things might have turned out differently if Jack had stood up to Alyssa and had let Damon stay with him for the night, or even if he had approached Damon the next day at school, but Jack didn't and that can caused a lot of damage. I absolutely don't agree with what he and Alyssa did but I can see where he is coming from a little bit. No epilogue at this point. I considered it, but I like ending the story where it is, where Jack has to make a choice and pick up the pieces...alone. Thanks for reading and commenting.
  8. CassieQ

    Chapter 4

    C'mere. This was a deeply unhappy story where everyone makes the wrong choices. I don't think I could ever do what Damon did to Jack, but I don't think I would be able to abandon a friend in need either. (By the time I was done writing this, the only people I didn't despise were Jack's siblings, Will, and Deidra a little bit). Thanks for commenting, even though this was a hard read for you. It means a lot.
  9. Best thing about my holiday is that it's over.
  10. Thanks to the anthology team for all their hard work!
  11. Thanks. I might need two.
  12. Chairlift for Grandma and BIL is not working.
  13. Pray for me.
  14. Finally achieved my dream of making the Weekly Wrap Up in triplicate.
  15. Wow, I feel like a slacker now.
  16. I liked it!
  17. The Rise of Skywalker
  18. Just got back from the movies.
  19. CassieQ

    Chapter 1

    Chasing Toshiro “Stalker.” Kade sighed and rolled away from the bushes, onto his back, and squinted up at his best friends, Graham and Hana, and Graham’s girlfriend, Tessa. “I’m not stalking,” Kade said quickly, sitting up and trying to surreptitiously brush bits of dead leaves from his hair. Yeah, maybe Toshiro was reading on the other side of the bushes, and yeah, maybe there was a convenient gap between the bottom of the bush and the ground that allowed him to see the oak tree To
  20. Kade was sure that he could take his crush, Toshiro, on a wonderful date. If only life would stop getting in the way.
  21. CassieQ

    Chapter 4

    It felt like graduation came on in the blink of an eye. Jack could barely believe it. He had graduated high school. He was going to college in the fall, even if he had to get a part time job to help supplement his running scholarship. He had a beautiful, hot girlfriend who had promised sex after the blowout graduation party she was having. No wonder he couldn’t stop smiling. He spent a lot of the time leading up to graduation helping Deidra set up her house up for the party. She had invited
  22. Just taking a sec to back up my work....
  23. CassieQ

    Chapter 3

    Jack is not a very popular person right now. I'm in Damon's corner, I wouldn't spit on Jack either. Thanks for commenting!
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