Interesting start. Not a huge fan of Aaron. Although it is highly annoying to have to drag a drunk coworker home, he was rude and nosy in Malcolm's home, especially when Malcolm was inebriated and couldn't set boundaries on how much of his personal space was open for investigation by a stranger.
Thank you. The situation between Adam and John had the unfortunate side effect of hurting Mikeal, but they worked through it and were closer at the end. I don't think Adam is the kind who would let something like that continue! Thanks for commenting!
Axel definitely messed with the wrong guy for sure. Savannah had a good time, I'm sure, but is probably worried about what happened to her friend. Thanks for commenting and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you for commenting! People have a lot of different opinions on Grant, some can see how Elliot forgave him, and some can't get past the danger he put his partner in. It's a difficult situation.
Great comment on how abuse can flourish in a relationship.
I'm glad you liked the story, even though the ending wasn't to your taste. I considered it carefully and wanted the story to end in our world and not carry on into Ra and Tylien/Casey's world. Thanks for reading and commenting.
I don't want to spoil anything, but there is a lot to be said about the encounter where Jack touched Damon's hand and Damon's reaction to it.
He could be. He could not be.
Thank you Dodger. You're right in that Jack doesn't seem interested in dating anyone. Yet. There will be more of Damon and Alyssa coming up in later chapters. I'm glad you are enjoying it and thanks for commenting.
Jack is a bit of an idiot, lol. I'm glad so many people like the dialogue! There's a lot more coming up in the next few chapters, so I hope you enjoy what's coming up. Thank you for commenting!
Thank you Carlos. Dialogue is one of my favorite things to write, so I'm glad it came across as realistic to you. There is plenty more drama coming in strong later on, so I hope you enjoy it. Thank you for commenting!
Jack Proietti thought that there was nothing in world that could come between him and his best friend Damon.
Turns out he was very very wrong.
A story of betrayal and revenge.