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Thank you Dan. I had hoped to have gone slowly enough that no one was really lost. There were mentions of various Gods and Goddesses but hopefully it was just a quick overview and nothing that would lose my readers. I'm glad you like the touch of the rainbow. Figured if their was going to end up being a gay couple that would be a nice inclusion.

Well this wouldn't be any fun unless they are caught. Just waiting to see the punishments Beth and James have in store for our favorite runners. Jenny's butt won't be the only red thing after all of this.

Six from the end Cia. lol. Chapter 25 goes to the editor and beta today.

I'd also suggest both of those series as well as Mortal Instruments by Cassandra Clare

Life is a spectrum. I think all men, even us gay men, view women and can still say who is attractive. I've always surrounded myself with women. They are close friends, confidants and can understand me easily. However when it comes to sex and who I desire emotionally for love that has always been a man. You face a hard decision. It would be one thing if it was just you and your wife. You are lucky. Yours is giving you space to figure yourself out. The major thing that anyone who even glances at this is going to focus on is your child. Your wife and you brought this young life into the world. Your responsibility will always to be to the child. If living in the same house hold will cause your child more heartache then staying together would that is something you need to decide. I have seen gay parents who were married make this work and their children loved them both. They have accepted their straight parent and their gay parent as well as the mates they have chosen. I have also seen people try to stay together for the sake of the child. Eventually, cheating occurs, fights, and the child is the one harmed emotionally. No one can tell if you are bi or gay other than you. You might decide you need counseling of some sort. You might decide you and your wife can yet make a go of it. Whatever you decide be honest with yourself and her, but always keep the future of your child in mind. I wish you the best whatever you decide.

Bleu, I am glad you have begun to read Charlie. He is pretty close to my heart. As for the speech patterns, well they are what I am accustomed to hearing both on Long Island where the story takes place, and up in Connecticut where I lived for six years. I hope it all makes sense to you but if something doesn't please feel free to let me know.

Thank you Tom. I am still working on the story. I am glad you have enjoyed it. Charlie has been very close to my heart and it seems nearly every day someone new is finding him. Working on the next chapter now. Hope it will be done by midweek at the latest.

This was an amazing piece. A painter who finds the perfect subject. He paints with psychic energy and can bring the paintings alive. I wonder how the twelve look and react. Where does he plan to put his masterpieces. You have so many wonderful parts to this Sam. Truly a work of art unto itself.

Interesting take on a the spy ring. I really enjoyed it. The only comment I have beyond a good story is find an editor. It is worth your time Adam.

Ah the joys of a fallen star who gets a second chance to make it all better. I liked the fact at least he knew he screwed up. Hopefully he will take his sobriety and this new chance at life and love to heart and get somewhere. Nice use of a legend.

I don't know if you were jumping in time as well as death. Always the fallen Angel. The first according to the tattoo. Gabriel? Hmmm, you play with the big boys. The woman and the name I don't recognize. Was an interesting twist on the idea of Angels and the legends surrounding them.

Okay, there are some people I know who read my stuff. I always say the best way to tell if you like an author's longer stuff is to check out their shorter stuff. There are so many wonderful things in the Fall Anthology. Nephy, Cia, Lugh, Frosty, Jian and so many others have put forth such totally different ideas when it comes to the word Legends. If you haven't read them, try them all. You never know when you might find a new author you want to read or stalk. And remember if you enjoy the work leave the author a comment. It can do more to encourage them to write than just saying to yourself that was nice and going on to the next one. If you enjoy it tell them that. Remember all of us are doing this for our own enjoyment but it is always nice to know someone is reading it and enjoys it. Thanks, Wayne

Thank you W_L. I always loved Mythology and Fairy Tales. Whenever I get to use one or the other in my writing I am fairly happy and hope I don't insult anyone with my take on the subjects. Thank you for the review.

Thank you KC. I just wonder how many will pick up the cues I have in there for rainbow. I like to slide in the gay culture as I can. You flatter me with the favorite line. I'm almost through everyone's stories. There are so many different ones and all so good.

Well we all knew if he took the stand the crap would hit the fan. The coach, was a surprise. I had actually forgotten about that little stunt. I love how he played the innocent. Looks like things are going to heat up fast. Great work as always Andy.

Okay you know I have been with Stu's story since the get go. I think you did a wonderful job with his characters. Now lets see if we can just get Stu to finish it. He is never going to hear the end of it from me.

Nephy that was down right spooky. A good vampire, twins nearly, sex. Death of one set of brothers, enslavement of another. Great story as usual.

Thank you, Frosty. You are always there to make sure I supply enough details without getting lost. Thank you for helping to make this turn out as well as it did.

Thank you Dolores. I was happy to see I wasn't the only one who turned to Greek/Roman Mythology for my inspiration. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you Carrington. I just sort feel if you write you should be able to write about nearly anything. I like a challenge.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Greek and Roman mythology is something I enjoy. I have never shied away from putting my own spin on anything. Figured how wrong could you go with Venus anyway.

Puts a whole new spin on the idea of being your own worst enemy. It was really a great story. Thanks for letting us into such a mysterious world.

Cia, of course you should continue this. There are questions left unanswered. I hate that. You have an original tale here that needs expanding. I want more. Don't make me hound you. I'm good at that, ask around.

Who is to say what makes a legend. I have yet to hear one of the good father. Nice change on the message and I enjoyed it a lot.

That was really cute. I liked how you built the whole thing up. I really liked the Zorro reference and how cool the parents were. Great story all around.