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  1. Bill has been sent by the council to help deal with a problem for the local Alpha Werewolf. Having a werewolf that has crossed the line and begun to commit murders, Bill has narrowed the suspects down to one of two men. The only problem is that a young innocent seems to be stuck in the middle of it, and he is attracting Bill's wolf. When push comes to shove, will Bill do his job or save the innocent?
  2. This story contains scenes of abuse and rape. Ronald has never had much luck in his life. From his childhood on it has been a fight to survive, but what else can a broken soul do?
  3. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Bill sat quietly in the corner watching the three men sitting at a table at the other end of the bar. He hated that he had to come across the country to deal with this, but when the council made its decision, that was final. He had barely crawled home from the last mission they had sent him out on, only to turn around and be sent here. However, even he had to admit the murders had to stop. The only problem was, he knew one of the two men before him was the possible killer, and the third was maki
  4. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    I finally left him. Who would have thought I would have the courage to do it? I sure as hell didn’t, but I did it, even if it meant I had to leave in a goddamn ambulance. I mean, when you have a roof over your head and are mainly left alone, you can handle a lot. “Please, just lie still, sir. I know you are in pain, but we have to get this IV in, and then we can adjust the breathing tube. Nancy, please let Dr. Avold know he is awake.” I hear them run around me like ants trying to patch me up.
  5. Just a note to wish you all the best. Happy Birthday Conner.
  6. Sorry the prompts posted late but feel free to add them there so everyone can find them.
  7. Life never goes as planned. I've learned that lesson a few times the hard way. This is just basically a note to say I'm here, I'm alive, I'm doing the best I can, and yeah I still have a ways to go. I've had a rather interesting year so far. I've learned things about myself I don't like, and done things I could to change. I know I am a work in progress and probably will be til I die. Sometimes lately I just keep quiet. It is how I handle things. I am being sent back to have new testing done on my back. I am trying to get other areas of my life together. I've been none to gently reminded lately that I am still over weight, in debt, and working a dead end job. I am somewhere between the worst son ever born and the reincarnation of the devil, depending on who you talk to. I've been told I am a beautiful soul, a kind man, and an idiot. If I listen to others I am not sure if I should be living as a monk alone on a high mountaintop so no one can see me or if I should be working on the corner as some cheap hustler. Truthfully neither is appealing so I guess I am still going my own way. I am worn out and need a break from work, but too broke to go anywhere. What I really need I can't get, and that seems to apply to a few areas of my life, but it doesn't mean I have given up on my dreams. Human beings are complicated. I should know, I am one. However people need to remember the small things. A smile can change someone's whole day. A "thank you" can turn someone's mood around. The word "sorry" should not be hard to say, especially if you mean it. Taking your problem out on someone else might make you feel better, but now look at the person you just beat up. Was it worth it? Be mindful of your surroundings. Opening a door for someone whose hands are full is an act of kindness anyone can do. Lending some change to the poor woman buying baby food might not break you, but might just help her out immensely. Look at the rules before you break them, because they are there for a reason. Remember that the person on the other side of the return desk is a human being too. That is their job, and try not to make it any harder than it is. If you don't want to deal with them, feel free to ask for their manager. Remember they don't make the rules they only have to enforce them. Don't keep putting off calling your friends or family. You never know when someone's time is up. The words "I love you" are something everyone likes to hear, just don't let it become something you say without meaning it. Sometimes that note from your friend that says hi, means don't forget me, I still care about you. So that is my rant of the moment. Still here, still kicking, still trying to do right. I wish you all a good night.
  8. This song has been stuck in my head all day.
  9. HI ColumbusGuy. Most of what you find in the prompts are the type of stories I often write. I hate to do what is expected in a story. I have a tendency to deal with the characters more than just the setting. I am never a good one to ask what is good of my own because I am usually a harsh critic of my own work. You can glance and see what stories I have that you might enjoy. I write a lot of different type of stories but always try to keep some sort of heart in it. Wayne
  10. Yeah. I got something out. lol. I also finished my second entry for the Anthology. Go me. And hopefully I will have a chapter out this week too. At least I am getting things done.
  11. Happy Birthday Iarwain. I hope your day brings you nothing but great things. Enjoy.
  12. Thank you Ron for such a detailed review. Tom and Alex have a really good father son relationship. Tom, as he explains, realizes his son is gay, but wants Alex to come out on his own terms. The problem comes into play when Alex disregards his father's rules and takes his lover into his father's bed. Alex isn't a fool and when everything is said and done he realizes he has some work to do to rebuild the trust with his father. Tom is hurt, evidenced by the locking of his door when his son passes. The morning will see the two of them both facing the actions of this evening. The final result will be up to how they handle things.
  13. I really didn't think of it as a place to hide. I think it is more the idea he tries to give his son his space and asks for the same. Alex was being a typical teen and that occasionally means thinking with the little head instead of the big one. I think it was more the shock that his father knew he was gay and having sex that kept him from really going after him. When he thought about it he realized what had hurt his father was the fact he broke rules he had always kept and was seeing there would be consequences. Whether Tom stays to what he says is another whole story.
  14. Thanks Kitt. It was the idea of Alex trying to be an adult but failing to trust his father. Tommy trying to lay down the law but being more hurt and upset than helping his son. They are human and they will work it out. part of being human.
  15. He isn't being abusive Sly. He is just hurt. Tommy may be a father but he is still human. Remember this just happened. Once everyone cools down things will work out. Neither was exactly being totally honest.
  16. Thanks Dad. I just didn't want to turn around have another, oh my child is gay and I should toss him out story. I wanted it to be a case of him not being mad that his son is gay, but more disappointed by his son's actions and for breaking the rules. Alex is realizing he screwed up and Tommy is feeling like he failed as a father. Something people can relate to. Thanks for the review DDK
  17. “Can you give me one reason why I should believe you?” Tommy looked his son who stood there shaking and nearly naked in the hallway. “Come on, Dad. I mean …” “No. Don’t come on me.” Tommy took a step back and shook his head. “I trusted you, Alex, and this how you repay that trust? You bring over someone and have sex with them in my bed?” “Dad, we …” Tommy held up his hand. “I don’t care what you did. I don’t want to know.” Tommy paused. “Tell whoever it is in there to get dressed and then bo
  18. I wonder if Sarah and I are related. Nice story Kitt. i can honestly believe the story.
  19. Hmm. Just what they really need is a lock. It would have saved some major embarrassment. lol Very nice story Sasha. I liked how you weren't sure exactly where this was going to go until the end. Although his brother not killing his best friend and soon to be brother's boyfriend was a good start.
  20. comicfan

    Prompt 349

    Hmm. The purple hair threw me. I was thinking maybe Teddy Ruxbin or gloworm. lol. I liked how you did it as poetry Krista. Nice job.
  21. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Thank you for the review Miles. This was something I wrote a while ago and it is nice to know it is still worthy of attention.
  22. Happy Belated Birthday. Hope it was a great one.
  23. This is the fear every parent has in this future. The never know what will happen to their children. It is something Dama and Ross will have to deal with forever. At least Red isn't dead though.
  24. Aw, thank you for reading, Sam. One of more wild tales.
  25. Happy Birthday Joann. May all your wishes come true.
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