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There was a little unicorn trying to hoof a rainbow out of all those dark storm clouds. It was good to see Joey and Allen both let their shields down and be honest with one another. As much as everyone is warning them not thorn the other, they are finally opening themselves up to the possibility of hurt again and with the potential for love
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Well at least Star and Ticker are good, everyone else is still climbing out of the sh*thole!! - A wonderful, painful story.
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Joey is starting to live again. It is tentative steps though. He has relationships with Ticker, star and Allen now. Hopefully he takes care of himself until he learns that some of his present pain is simply due to letting down his shields and being a little more engaged with others
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Jake and Kaiden are wonderfully real. They can be both brave and insecure, kind and careless as we all are but they each have their own personality which stays true. I enjoy how Kaiden is learning the difference between being popular and being a leader.
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It would be a neat twist if Stan for all his size and brooding looks was gay and getting picked on for it
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It is interesting that they both think of the other as the "cool" one. Lovely chapter. I love Josh, he is so relaxed, Kay could learn a thing or two from his little brother.
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You catch the reality of Joey and Allen's situation perfectly. Even as they take steps to deal with their circumstances and their growing attraction, they can not escape the reality that they both still have daunting hurdles to overcome in just everyday requirements; Allen's health and how he is treated and Joey's problems of family, school and peers will not go away either. Thank goodness for Star the eternal optimist! She has her work cut out for her.
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Waiting because of coffee
Rndmrunner commented on Sam Wyer's story chapter in Waiting because of coffee
Kay is wonderfully neurotic over jake and the idea of coming out. Very cute - for a little while. he will have to let his stones drop soon. -
Chapter 81 Meeting the In-Laws
Rndmrunner commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 81 Meeting the In-Laws
I love how the characters are getting deeper, they have their good and bad sides and their quirks but retain their essential character. Great exchange between Robbie and Daniel -
beautifully written.
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This is lovely, light and playful and serious and deep at the same time, a delicate balance. i really like what we have seen of Kay. Jakes is still pretty mysterious - to Kay and to us. Can't wait for more
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What were those Neil young lyrics... "Oooh Feelin fine, painted ladies and a bottle of wine....." Sort of what Oliver and Carlos came home to
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It was a relief that the chapter was written in Joey's POV. I took it on faith that he would survive.
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Ronyx, you are shredding me with this story. I can only hope that the next chapter and a reprieve for Joey comes soon.
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you definitely have a way with your characters. I'm hooked. Thanks for the new (to this site and to me) story.
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Paul is concerned with half the frosting so slice the top half of the frosting off, as for the actual cake, Paul seems less concerned with what his share is. This is not so much "halfing" your cake and eating it but having cake and eating half the frosting. Thanks for the story and the puzzle
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Chapter 80 Making A Splash!
Rndmrunner commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 80 Making A Splash!
You just had to eave us hanging,not knowing what or if Daniel heard anything or was just reacting to Robbie and Nicola being friends again. Robbie keeps trying to run away from his troubles, hopefully he goes to Nathan first. As bad as that may be, avoiding and hoping the problem will go away will be worse. Good Luck Robbie... and don't F#^*k it up -
Great story. I love how Cal's tough shell was slowly worn away by Davey. It was great that Cal finds the family he always wanted/needed in the end but I don't think that dropping the letter in the bin means that he can just walk away form the pain. Even Cinderella (or Cinderfella) probably had to struggle with the memories of her step family after Prince Charming came along.
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Chapter 79 The Five-Foot-Six-Inch Giant
Rndmrunner commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 79 The Five-Foot-Six-Inch Giant
Dodger you have really taken it up notch in the last few chapters. You manage to be serious but at the same time let the playful aspects of the characters show through. Congrats -
I like how the story underlines that Dominant, Submissive or anything else, we all have to step up and take responsibility. you can't abrogate your voice.
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This is a lovely, difficult story to read. Congratulations! ...and pass the tissues
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I am in awe of the complexity of the emotional landscape that Call navigates. You have captured his maturity against a sea of conflicting emotions and yet the character reads sane, strong and coherent. AMAZING!!!!
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thank you for a lovely story. I have to admit that I cheated and read ahead on your site but it was great to follow it here as well.
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In a healthy democracy, citizens do not take up arms against each other nor need to take the rule of law into their own hands. Is there a civil war underway or just a war against civility?
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Mike is wonderful. Their antics remind me of my brothers and myself
