Rndmrunner

I don't know how I missed this story earlier but I am enjoying it.

drip................ drip................ drip.... drip.................................................. drip.............. drip........................................................ the torture continues - it hurts so good!

I'm baffled why Emmett is resisting. Oh wait no, I am baffled why Sasha is making this attraction so excruciating, but maybe I understand why. I have a feeling that the days will be longer and the nights shorter before we get satisfaction. arraign!!!

I am going out on a limb here. I seem to remember you saying that you started this story a number of years ago. The initial writing style seemed a little more stilted than your other recent works. As the story progresses i am finding your usual rhythm in the character development and layering coming through. The chapters are laying building blocks for conflict or resolution later down the road and the story is taking flight for me. This is a difficult and nuanced topic that you are tackling with the focus on the family dynamics and the gay issues is a more supporting role. As always thanks for the journey. I always look forward to Saturday mornings and my weekly dose of drama.

This was a nice little bump in the road. The relationship and the plot angle had already been developed to the point where a serious break between the boys would have just taken us down old territory. As it is, it was a final little cliffy on the path to true love. Thanks for the journey.

This was a wonderful story. As much as I would have liked it to continue, it was the perfect length. I have a whole new appreciation of ink. I loved the intimacy of the shop and the mentoring that Kip received.

Great chapter all the more touching with the telling of the legend of the hare and the moon. OK I am dense what is HEA referred to in the reviews???

Spell check got the better of me: I meant "constant IMPROV and hopefully grace under fire. A lovely premise for a story (if sad) and RICH in possibilities". That will teach me to reread before hitting POST.

I appreciate how even in a bare few days, Peter and Alan see that there are no rules and what works for one moment or one child may not work later. Constant improved hopefully grace under fire. A lovely premise for a story (if sad) and rick in possibilities.

Love the story and the armchair parenting in the reviews. Mine is a teenager now and "The rainbow comes and the rainbow goes" By that I mean 7 different mood changes before breakfast on some days. All worth while though. I do really feel for Alan and Peter stepping into the breech as they have. Can't wait for more

never doubted that Em will end up with Jian but what's killing me is waiting for Jian to find his fur. Just don't buy all that suff about Jian having heightened senses just from living with shifters....oops were we not supposed to someone on this???

A great start. My only critique is having the graveside confrontation with Craig's mother. The reader is still trying to get their bearings. The mother if she is so "traditional" would likely not have accepted a man caring for the grandchildren and had stepped in right from the start and triggered the confrontation before the funeral. I know that I sound like a prig but it is more from the viewpoint of story pacing and the trader (in this case me) keeping up. It is sweet to remember my kids at that age even if your circumstances are horrible. Thanks for filling in the gap left by the end of the Leopard's cycle

Epilogue? does this mean we have come to the end of the road for the Leopard series? I know that it can't go on indefinitely but it has become a fixture on GA. I see an angry mob of fans in your future...

Doing a whole chapter on the draft is brave. You managed to create the excitement for fans combined with the excrucuating torture for the prospects as the event winds out. All that and i still choked up a bit for Ty. I also held my breath earlier that he wouldn't slug his dad in their earlier confrontation. Hope the story doesn't wind up too fast after the draft - it will make Saturday mornings too dull

Its so unfair. Preston has totally got to be the top in his relationship with Indie. I don't care who has the bigger dick. Otherwise its just so Telenovella.

I am confused, I thought that Julie did not get the job of head coach but this paragraph and Julie's subsequent drafting of Henry seems to indicate otherwise. "Julie chuckled. “I am. I’m also Paul’s big sister.” She smiled past Andrew to Henry. “It was a matter of some debate as to whether the head coach should be related to one of the players, but Paul and I keep our personal and professional lives separated. We worked together without a problem during the past season, so I expect that will continue.” She brought her attention back to Andrew."

We had a child 10 years ago. Back when I came out I had to deal with the fact that I would not likely have children. It was a blessing when it became a possibility again. Q:When did you put yourself out there and take a big risk for the better?

First off, let me say how much I am enjoying following this story even though it is not always easy to read due to the serious content. While some have commented as to their feelings regarding plot developments, i will not as this is your tale to tell and only you have full insight as to where you want to take it. The conversation between Luke and Elliot did catch me off guard though. Luke has been in the hospital now for 2 (3?) chapters and has just regained full consciousness when he has the scene with Elliot. Elliot has so far been a mature and empathetic character so it caught me off guard that he openly questions the potential of a relationship with Luke when learning some more details about the attack and Luke's relationship with Ryan. The Elliot we have been introduced to has suffered emotional trauma himself and it seemed uncharacteristic that he would almost expect Luke to choose at this time. Elliot's own relationship with Luke is nascent, Luke has suffered major physical and emotional trauma and this all happens in a few paragraphs. I cold certainly understand Elliot having questions and insecurities about Luke's feelings but the character seemed to have the maturity to keep a lid on those feelings at least until Luke had recovered physically if not emotionally. So this ramble is more a comment on the pacing so that the characters and the readers have time to process. That said: your story, your choices and I can't wait for the next instalment.

Another great chapter. I really admire how you have been able to craft the story within the structure of a real AFL draft. While that provides details to work with it also gives you a lot of constraints once you head down that path. Amazing job and all the more exciting.

I enjoyed the chapter. I always like complex characters and this chapter provided depth for Dorian, Leo and even a tiny insight into Dorian's father. If all characters were likeable there would be no tension, however that don't have to simply be different extremes. Dorian is beginning to find his way. He has a lot of growing up to do given how sheltered/rigid his childhood has been and it will likely have some rough patches. thanks for the gripping read

alot of themes are being set up here. I am really wondering what will happen with Geraldine and Kevin, hopefully a friendship will form. Warick was earlier warning Kevin that a little romance might be a good way to embark on his exploration rather than jumping into sex and now Kevin is heading off with Geraldine, who he has already realized doesn't attract him sexually, barely knowing her ... interesting

Just one question, Frank is "dead" and all his assets are transferred to Barry - are his sons left high and dry - no parents, early twenties and no resources?? Query aside, i am lovin the story

A lovely story. I appreciate that while the story is complete, the lives of the characters go on with all life small victories and failures to come. Realistic and not a fairytale romance. Thank you

This story is a great read and has wonder ul characters but I may have to give it up; even in fiction degradation is very difficult for me and Rother's character has passed insecurity and seems to enjoy his power over other through remaining them. I have seen real people act in this fashion (maybe not sexual power) and it is very disturbing. Matt you show the power of your prose - maybe too much for my tastes though

I am currently catching up on the story and really enjoy it. The characters are fully developed and distinct which i find especially important in the serial format. From a purely personal standpoint, I don't need the graphics sex particularly when dealing with 14 year olds. I find that the intimacy can be covered without the blow by blow details. As well once established writing multiple sex scenes is very hard while holding the readers interest and given it abounds on the web. I find myself simply scrolling down to a point where the narrative continues. This is not out of prudishness but it is the other aspects of the story that are unique and captivating. Great job