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Finally got around to reading and reviewing the anthologies. This is so beautiful. The heart wants what the heart wants and nothing can stop that feeling. Sam and Paul are perfect for each other and if they ever get around to sitting down for their damn romantic dinner, things will move along nicely. Love your story as you already know. Just had to read again.
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Finally got around to reading the anthos and I'm not surprised that yours is one of my favorites. I'm glad you wrote it as an antho, but it would've been a beautiful chaptered story also. You did a great job with the dialect and displaying acceptance at this time in history. It's never been easy and I hope with all my heart that one day it'll just be accepted to a point of at least indifference. People think we want to be noticed when all we want is acceptance. Great job!
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I laughed my ass off at the comparison to art. That was too funny Sorry it took so long to read the anthos but I'm just got behind with my reading. This was a good day to read them tho. Dull day at work and I needed a pick me up. Wish I knew magic
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I'm so damn behind on my reading that I'm just getting to the great anthos. Yours is very entertaining and I think you should write a little short story about Robert and Paul's romance. Great job, Wayne
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I never regret reading a story but sometimes, I want to kick my butt for reading it As always KC, when you write subject matter, you go for the jugular. Raw, dark and heartbreaking. But, things like this happen daily and no one gives a damn. It doesn't say a lot for what we now call the human race. Sorry it took so long for me to catch up on some of my reading, but glad I grabbed this one.
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I missed this somehow. Beautifully moving and it grasped me from beginning to end. Thanks for such a heartfelt piece of lovely writing.
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I had to laugh at "Nellies" If you look at the history of Natchez, Mississippi, you'll know why if you don't already. she had a pretty reputable establishment there. So, the Adonis kissed him. I'm so engrossed in your story right now, personally, I was kinda hoping you'd make his mate a little more mysterious. If I were bored with your story, I'd welcome a companion and new characters to feed off of. Just my opinion. I'm sure whatever you do, it'll add to your wonderful tale of sex and space.
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Chapter 13 Arrival at Starview
joann414 commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 13 Arrival at Starview
Hmmm, I wonder if he has found his man. Abel was certainly interested. The two cousins tickle me. They are all about sex and shopping. lol. It's going to take quite a man to separate those two. -
Chapter 12 In Transit, Part 2
joann414 commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 12 In Transit, Part 2
The Guardian has me curious as hell. Is he going to be a person or what? There's several ways you can present him and I can't wait to see. I'm wondering if he's going to be Abel's love interest. Short but great chapter. Love how you got a little sex in at the last moment -
Don't have to tell you how much I love this story and your ending was perfect. You're going to have to do a helluva job to top this one with a sequel. "throws out challenge" Wonderful job Cole!
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There's sex, sex, sex, but I've yet to notice any feelings of warmth on Abel's part. I'm curious as to who you are going to couple him to. He's a unique individual and it'll take quite a strong and also unique person to match him. JMO
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Abel has his own sexual playground and playmates it seems. They'll have to all clean their showers good now. I'd feel almost overly self conscious if I thought someone in the room with me could scan my thoughts and the intricacies of my body.
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Abel may have powers but that doesn't take place of a companion. It's hard being lonely no matter how many other things you possess. "Space juice sounded good." Loved the chapter. Auld Lang Syne a thousand years old huh?
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Abel seems to be acquiring more and more power and they it seems to effect his dreams at times. He's hell in the shower isn't he. HOpe he cleans is each time.
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The Animal Psychologist
joann414 commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in The Animal Psychologist
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The New World I consider myself a history buff AND a Colin Farrell fan. But, this was the most disappointing and boring movie I can remember watching. I questioned why I was watching it many times throughout the movie. It might've been closer to the truth when dealing with the story of Pocahontas, John Smith, etc., but I could've used a little more entertainment and scenery. I still love Colin Farrell, but hate this movie. Christopher Plummer couldn't even make it interesting
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Happy Birthday Billy !!!!
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I missed this. Happy Birthday my friend!!!!
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So great to see someone like Greg with compassion along with his passion, especially with a virgin. Broken hearts are easily gotten but a bitch to men. Hopefully Greg is the person he appears to be. YOu create quite the bedroom scenes.
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Quite a set up here and the imagery is great! Can't wait to read more.
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I agree with BarricadeBoy. Beautiful picture you painted here. As always.
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Welcome. Learn by doing.
