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    Bloomings

    joann414 commented on yoxone's story chapter in Bloomings

    Beautiful. Loved the structure of your first part also.
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    Mark

    joann414 commented on Aditus's story chapter in Mark

    Short and to the point. I do remember your other poem. Great job.
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    You idea was very successful Wayne. What a descriptive piece. Great job
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    going to a party

    joann414 commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in going to a party

    So you know I'll expect more poetry as well as stories don't you. Well done Cole
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    Anthology Poem One

    joann414 commented on Toast's story chapter in Anthology Poem One

    "passionate destruction". Now that's food for thought. I love this Sam.
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    A Storm is Brewing

    joann414 commented on Bill W's story chapter in A Storm is Brewing

    I enjoyed this once again BillW. Thanx for sharing.
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    Great first attempt, and youngsters always seem to have infallible hearing
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    Lovin' High Places

    joann414 commented on Marty's story chapter in Lovin' High Places

    What a beautiful piece. It makes the reader rethink life and the things you've noticed and those you should've y noticed. As I get older, I wonder about my friends from the past. Many moved away, others, I drifted apart from. Like holidays you always wish for the moment, but it's gone in a second. I felt tearful at the thought of him standing and staring at the mountain reliving such a beautiful moment and not being able to contact his counterpart. . Now, I'm wondering why you don't write more. As I said, beautiful and touching story. Thank you.
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    I'm with Nossy. But, I can remember laying in bed and dreaming I was already at school:P Interesting beginning.
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    I should've known that
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    So true Daddy, but I found it amusing that a man that knowledgeable put urine on his head
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    I was intrigued by the names of the brothers. Also, I've got to admit, I saw your blog on the site today and for some reason, when person blogs that I've never really interacted with on the site, I check out their profile to see if they write. If thy do, I read something of theirs to gain a little insight and it seems to work. Lovely story, and obviously, you write what you know and relate to which is good, and at times, not so good which you pointed out in your blog today. Enjoyed this immensely and will definitely read more of our work.
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    I agree with Lisa. No right were read or anything. You're story is moving along like a hurricane. I just remembered I hadn't reviewed, and I've read it all today
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    Chapter 3

    joann414 commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Well Peter is a fast worker Of course, we don't know how the relationship progressed through the years, if at all. I love the way Peter helps Alice.
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    Chapter 2

    joann414 commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I think I like you story, and the fact that James comes from a humble and loving background. It's funny how when you work with people for so long that they become like family which it seems in this case.
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    My Guardian Angel

    joann414 commented on Bumblebee's story chapter in My Guardian Angel

    Your words conveyed some deep emotions, Bee. Enjoyed reading
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    Bunny Humor

    joann414 commented on Ron's story chapter in Bunny Humor

    Cute as hell. Enjoyed it immensely
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    Six Feet Under

    joann414 commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Six Feet Under

    I guess what jumped out at me in this chapter is sweet Button's thoughts at the end of the chapter. It's heartbreaking with all that has happened to him that he still feels uncertain of how his own family feels about him. I hope all turns out well for his best bud Andy
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    HI John and welcome! I'm sure you'll enjoy reading and writing also. Looking forward to reading your work
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    Chapter 3

    joann414 commented on FrenchCanadian's story chapter in Chapter 3

    I just don't see a lot of good coming out of this situation. Ryan expects Kyle to be trustworthy and leaves him in bed with David? Not happening. After all, Kyle didn't tell Ryan about spending time with David. One lie leads to another and deception can kill a relationship quicker than anything. I love the build up in you story.
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    Chapter 2

    joann414 commented on FrenchCanadian's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Things are getting a bit testy. David seems to hold his cards close to his chest.
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    Chapter 1

    joann414 commented on FrenchCanadian's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I like the fact that David didn't give in immediately. I'm a little puzzled about the threesome deal. The two men seemed to love each other. Is David just a little spice added to the mix? On to the next chapter.
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    Prologue

    joann414 commented on FrenchCanadian's story chapter in Prologue

    Interesting
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    At least you're a nice bitch
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    I enjoyed this very much:)
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