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What a friggin mess! Overhearing conversations like the one between Ryo and Sakura always sound ten times worse to the eavesdropper. Poor Soubi, Ryo, and even Sakura. I know she is trying to help, but the guys need to work it out, and Ryo's mother is going to be a fly in the ointment until someone swats the hell out of her. Another great chapter, and I still have one to read!
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My second time reading this, and it is even more awesome than the first
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I was intrigued by the descriptions of the different setting in your story. They made your tale all the more realistic. Sad ending, but sexy night. I enjoyed this very much Cele!!!
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Truthfully, I have found your writing hard to absorb, but you hit a homerun here. You came across in a perfect, honest way, and I could not quit reading. You have found your nic in writing. Thank you for such a great read. Kudos!!!!
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Parent's like Ryan's should have to go through a treatment themselves for being superficial assholes and criminally insane. I love Logan. I agree with Ryan that he is just what the doctor ordered
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What an uplifting story. I am from the south and the dialect is right on. lol. You can still here it from some of the older folks where I grew up as a child. Enjoyed this very much
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Beautiful, poetic, sad, and lovely. The emotion was flourishing.
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Interesting take on the anthology and very enjoyable. Don't know if I want to see under the "angel of death's" robe tho. Looking for a boner and only find bones maybe I really did love this. Great job
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Lost At Sea - Spring 2013 Anthology - A Night To Remember
joann414 commented on comicfan's story chapter in Lost At Sea - Spring 2013 Anthology - A Night To Remember
Well, I would have killed Teddy myself when I went to see him after what he had put me through. Truthfully, I thought Teddy's mother was Teddy, and he had had a sex change, but couldn't see the time frame in your story allowing that. Then it dawned on me when they were talking about the necklace that it was his mom or sister. Your story made me think a lot, "taxed my poor brain". That is a good thing. No fun if everything is predictable. But it is a wonderful story Wayne and I am so glad you gave the guys a happy ending. They deserved it -
This was different, but definitely very interesting and I am so glad I read it. Thank you
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You would know that I am out of "likes", but I think this is a fabulous story So glad all got their happy ending. I love the thought of losing your virgiity to your best friend and still remain that years later. Wonderul job as usual Mann
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How fun , and totally unexpected John. Great job!
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Good grief!!! You made the hair on my arms stand up and gave me chill bumps with that ending. It was so unexpected and sad. To work so had to be with the one you love and have it taken away in the blink of an eye. Very powerful story and I loved it.
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Great story AJ. So much fun to read and very entertaining. You should definitely write more of these!
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HOrrific happenings turned into a beautiful tale of courage and redemption. This is a wonderful piece Rob and I agree with Mann. Your writing is definitely one of your assets that you should use more Thanks for sharing
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Boy what some sick men. I guess it takes all kinds as sad as it may be. Enjoyed your story so much and I like to think that Adam and Steve had a wonderful life together.
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Acting like tough police investigators one minutes and shy teenagers the next. lol. Can't wait to see what they find out in the next chatper.
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I love to play Texas Hold'em. But, they almost turned it into strip poker. lol. Nothing wrong with that tho. I knew where Stephen was going to find Nathan This is such a light and fun read. Thanx
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Loving this. Can't wait for him to meet his wary. BTW, he phone was a nice touch and pretty funny.
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Had to laugh at the guys trying to eat and discuss the bloody handprint. What an appetite killer The undercurrents between Adam and Steve are becoming a little more obvious. Can't wait to see that unfold. Well, looks like you have us a surprise in store next chapter. Now Please!!!lol
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Tell me u did not just end that chapter with an unanswered question between Ryo and Stoubi. lol This was a great chapter, and I hope like hell Ryo knows what he is doing. Soubi is in an important place in his career right now also. Great job Lil
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Beautiful! Luke and Blake weathering the storm of life and love and finally doing it together. Great writing!
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What a wild ride girl! Samuel is a lot smarter in more than just the geeky way. lol
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Uh oh, Samuel is pissed and someone is going to pay!
