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Forgiveness - Prompt 501
avidreadr commented on albertnothlit's story chapter in Forgiveness - Prompt 501
Beautiful story. It make me cry and left me with hope for Jerry's future. -
I look forward to reading about the challenge. I want to see how Ethan trounces him without revealing too much of his true power.
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I think most of us figured what would happen but I didn't think it would happen so soon. I hope the kid, whoever he is, is all right. If it's one of the boys described it sounds like the kid will need all sorts of help.
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Gay History 101 -- and More!
avidreadr commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Gay History 101 -- and More!
Wow, a great chapter. The history lesson was extremely interested and information and I learned some things I didn't know or realize. The sex was, as always, hot. I do love these two together. -
It's good to see CJ reacting more like the teenager he is. I love him and everything about this story but I was occasionally bothered a little by how mature he always seemed to act. The letter was just perfect, Owen has to realize that the six years between them at this stage, 16 to 22, is more significant than it will be in several more years, say 21 to 27. I agree with CJ about starting things off slow and just being friends. Love this story.
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I loved the story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Another great chapter. CJ definitely had issues after NY and it was smart of the dads to have Dragon talk to CJ about it. It seems to have done CJ some good and the news that Tom's boys are moving to DC seems to have been the icing on the cake. This story always makes me look forward to Fridays. Thank you.,
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Love this story. I was planning to mention that we haven't seen much action between Nick and Sam and here it is. Thank you for that. As for Sam's sister, if the facts are as they seem, we all know Sam will get angry and do what has to be done but the sister does have some nerve. I'm waiting for her to blame Sam for her family's troubles. Eagerly waiting the next chapter.
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This Isn't About You, Not Really.
avidreadr commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in This Isn't About You, Not Really.
I think you're doing good. The characters are very well established, the story is coming along at a great pace and there is enough action to keep it interesting. I look forward to more. -
Another great chapter. I loved the your digs at Trump; totally reflects how I feel. CJ is doing pretty well emotionally. If I were JM, I would pull out of the school and move back home. At the least, he'll probably find himself ostracized by CJ's group of friends. And, if the story did come out, he could find himself being ousted from the US. I'm not sure, but I think even diplomats can be "requested" to leave the country even if they can't be arrested.
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Great chapter. The story moved along at a perfect pace. Marie and the kids was a development I didn't expect. I also look forward to reading about Ethan and Aiden in the playroom.
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So disappointed in Jose-Maria; I really didn't think he would go along with it. It's good that Sean showed up. He just might be able to give CJ some pointers about how to stay safe.
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I prefer to think Jose will not allow his cousin to do it. His cousin is a total lowlife for wanting to roof and rape his host.
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I hope we find out who Lee is next chapter; it could be any of the three or more. I even found myself wondering what the doctor's first name was! Between Tareth and Ash, Kye should be safe. Eagerly await the next chapter.
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Just discovered this story and am enjoying the story but I never did understand these kind of scandals. Yes, the photo was racy but it wasn't obscene and both men are known to be gay and single and no one else is being hurt or betrayed. Give me a break. I think maybe they should consider giving an interview to a high end legitimate reporter - like a Barbara Walters - and out the ones who are making a scandal out of something private, natural and beautiful.
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Perfect chapter. Everything in it just fit perfectly.
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I think Curtis needs to talk to Casey about what was seen. Curtis needs to get it off his chest and, IMHO, he needs to be the one to make the first move. Maybe this will be the impetus that makes him act like a decent human being.
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Chapter 11 Visits and meetings
avidreadr commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 11 Visits and meetings
Ah. the pleasure of Legos; it was my son's favorite toy. I loved how busy they kept him until he spilled them or I stepped on them! So much has been going on, it doesn't seem like it's been just a week. These two men have such a connection, however, that I think they are ready for the next step. -
Lots of good development in this chapter. I personally think Tom's ex should give some thought to getting out of Boston to keep her kids away from the bigotry. Maybe that's why she asked Tom to come up to Boston. Harley working with Danno on cars? The kid's going to go nuts. I like Chipper's observation at the end that Owen and CJ will eventually wind up together, but maybe not immediately. It is what I see happening. CJ is mature, but he's also smart enough to know, and has mentioned several times, that he's not ready to go steady with anyone. One of my favorite stories and I always look forward eagerly to reading new chapters. Thank you.
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Oh, computer password didn't occur to me but it makes sense. I would think the proof they need against the council is on there. Great chapter. I love how the story is flowing.
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Chapter 37 Tossing and Turning
avidreadr commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 37 Tossing and Turning
I will admit I stopped reading this story consistently because of Robbie's indecision and Fran's manipulation - as I see it. Now, I come back several chapters later and it is still going on. High schoolers break up all the time! It's time Robbie said good-bye to Fran and got on with his life. "I don't love you, I'm ending it. Find another guy. Oh, and btw, I'm gay." That's it. I'll be back to read about Robbie and Fran's wedding and their kids because it seems obvious he's never going to say anything. -
If Jackie's intention is to kill her son, I can totally understand it. Michael grew in and was nurtured by her body and I think she might want a quick death for him at her hand a both a punishment and a type of mercy. And as to the council, I think our packs should secede and start a new council.
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So glad that Brett is okay and I'm also glad you skipped over the hospital stay. It might have seemed a bit too reminiscent of when Tom was shot. Tom and JP buying and moving next door would be great for all the men but what about Mary and her husband? I liked them and thought we might be seeing a bit more of them. As always, I love the story and look forward to more.
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Another great chapter. It's interesting to see how the packs are handling the clean up. I love how they sent away the council people. More to come with that whole situation. I also hope we see Jean-Pierre's reaction to what happened, if he's even still around. I think he might have left, suspecting what was going to happen, maybe even a warning from a council member.
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All right! Absolutely terrific. I wish Michael had been killed because it's going to hurt the Alpha to see what his son has become.
