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Love the story so far, especially Daniel. Adam is still a threat and I think he'll be back causing trouble at least once more before he finally ceases to be a problem.
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I like Casey's interactions with Lane. He is patient with him and takes the time to explain things to him in a way he'll understand. It's very nice to see Rodney coming around. Curtis is still a problem which I'm guessing will be addressed in coming chapters. The class changes are also working out and I hope the coach gets the message and leaves Casey alone. As to Casey and his dad, I can only say it's about time. His dad should have told him why he left when Casey first got there. That chip Casey's been carrying seems to have lightened enough for him to actually sit and listen to his father and now maybe they can become a family instead of just 6 people living under one roof.
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Good action chapter. Way to go, Nick! He really came through. I am surprised that Davo turned out to be Tony. I realy didn't expect that.
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Chapter 57 Revealing Duplicate Hands
avidreadr commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 57 Revealing Duplicate Hands
They are going to be one busy couple with a new house, a teenager, two puppies and eventually, the baby. Well. they will have the parents staying with them who can give them a hand but still. Love the story and look forward to more. -
Wow. Curiouser and curiouser. Very eager for more.
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Casey is in so much pain and is close to a complete breakdown. It seems the only thing holding him together is Lane which is a lot for one kid. Casey desperately needs help before he badly hurts someone else or himself.
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OMG! I hope we don't have to wait too long for Spring and I hope Brett's not badly injured or worse. I guess, with things going so well, we should have known something was about to happen.
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LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT. I'm a sucker for a good epilogue. It's wonderful how everything came together for them so beautifully. This is one story I think I'll be re-reading now and again. Thank you for gifting it to us.
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Wonderful. Loved it. Thank you.
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I liked this story and these characters. My only question would be to tone down on the "elderly" aspect (I might be sensitive, being I'm in that age range now). I wouldn't mind reading more about these characters again someday.
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Hot and sweet. Loved it.
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Chapter 64 What I Remember
avidreadr commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 64 What I Remember
Loved this chapter, but there is so much to comment. Some has been said already: how great a friend Kaz is, the whole conversation with A's grandmother and the relief that the shack from chapter 62 is on the farm. One thing I do want to add. With weddings so elaborate these days, it was nice to see how wonderful a small one can be. It's great that Andy finally knows how loved he is. I look forward to the rest of the story and dread the end. Thank you. -
The adults in Casey's life need to clue into the fact that he needs and deserves to know the truth behind his father's leaving. Having a father leave at 11 with no explanation can make a kid feel unlovable and unwanted and can lead to the kind of troubles Casey is having. I also hope Casey realizes quickly the effect his leaving will have on Lane on before he gets far. As far as Curtis and Rodney, it seems Rodney isn't as big a jerk as Curtis so there may be some hope there. This whole family is desperately in need of some serious family counseling.
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I look forward to Ethan facing and dealing with the rogues. I don't think there will be much left of them. Good chapter, by the way.
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Something about Mike rubbed me the wrong way in this chapter . I think he's too pushy and too mouthy. Rodney and Curtis are going to keep causing problems for Casey and I think they're going to step up their harassment but I'm not sure what can be done. Maybe Casey's friendship with Lane will come into play somehow. I look forward to reading more.
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I don't think Toph will miss Steve too much. At best, I believe it was a casual relationship more for convenience and companionship and had run his course. I think what troubles Toph is the way it just fizzled out without even a hearty handshake. Steve is apparently shallow and careless with other peoples emotions. Toph is young yet and deserves better. As to his art, it was nice to see him branching out. Oscar's focus on the woman and wanting Toph to create a back story annoyed me at first but I suspect he's looking for Toph to think more about what he puts on canvas. So far, he seems to be letting the art lead him. I am not an artist. so I could be wrong. I like the story and look forward for more.
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Simple Questions Prompt 480
avidreadr commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Simple Questions Prompt 480
One word. THERAPY! -
Chapter 56 What Are The Odds?
avidreadr commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 56 What Are The Odds?
This chapter was so beautiful and a testament to how powerful love can be. The change in Candy herself was a wonderful surprise and it was nice to see our guys able to finally relax about the baby. Look forward to more. -
It's Hard to be a Saint in the City
avidreadr commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in It's Hard to be a Saint in the City
I liked seeing CJ around his pack of friends without the adults all the time, as great as they are. CJ might not resolve his feelings towards Owen until he seems him but it might also be that he knows he doesn't want anything deeper at this time. He is still a bit young, although he is mature. -
Everything in this chapter was wonderful. Really looking forward to the next installment. Wedding here we come.
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Chapter 60 Are You Sure?
avidreadr commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 60 Are You Sure?
Great chapter. Loved Nonna. I understand Andy is tired of being asked if he's sure, but it is a logical question. I think both boys have grown and matured through all their problems and can handle marriage now. Will there be problems? Sure. What marriage doesn't have them? But I think they'll be okay. I also expect one more encounter with CPS before the story ends as I don't think she's the type to just walk away. -
Knew the attack was coming. Can't wait to read more.
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Chapter 6 Impulsive Decision
avidreadr commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 6 Impulsive Decision
An interesting turn. Jorge seems to be just what Sam and Nick needed without realizing it. I really look forward to reading more. -
Another story of yours I'll be following. Poor Bobby and poor Tiffany. Her life will be hell. Look forward to more.
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Good story. I like both men and am interested to see how their lives go now.
