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I think Toph needs to confront his mother but on his terms. He is surrounded by a strong group of friends and some family members now who will emotionally support him. As to the interview, I hope he didn't do as poorly as he thinks and also believe his past body of work and references will supplement any deficiencies in the interview. I have enjoyed this story and while I sense it might be coming to an end at sometime in the not too distant future, all stories do come to an end. Thank you for bringing us these people.
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Good start. I'll be reading more. What is Mopar? I am not a car person.
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A very good week for stories and some of my favorite authors. I liked this and hope you'll be posting more.
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I'm so glad we're going on the road trip with the boys. Great start and I look forward eagerly to the rest.
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Yes, Diarmad is indeed an ass.
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A powerful story and a powerful speech. I am so glad I read it. Thank you.
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Chapter 43 The Rollercoaster Ride
avidreadr commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 43 The Rollercoaster Ride
I enjoyed this story a lot in the beginning but I've been losing patience with Robbie's indecisiveness. It does seem, though, that that might be changing. -
Loving this story. I think it's time for Dorian to play hardball and use the media as a threat. There are things about the way he grew up and his parents that I'm sure they prefer not get out. His parents are also incredibly stupid. Here you have a gay, intelligent, photogenic and well spokenj young man who could be a real value to the campaign. Maybe he should have a talk with the governor and just ignore his parents.
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I am enjoying Dorian's journey. I see a big future for him and I actually can see a possible future in politics, but on his own terms, not his father's. He has surrounded himself with a good group of maybe lifelong friends. It is funny that he has so many strong woman around him. I look forward to more. On another point, I am concerned about whoever attacked Wes. I think they will probably turn up again to cause more problems.
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I like and am enjoying this story but am losing patience with Tobyn. In truth I would much rather see this story mothballed for a while and have more Cards on the Table.
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Chapter 40 One for the Road
avidreadr commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 40 One for the Road
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This was wonderful. I had wondered about the reaction these men would have to recent events. This was perfect. Brett's comments should be spread around the world. He is 100% correct.
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Tobyn's plan for the future is noble and self-sacrificing but he should realize he might not even be able to perform with Tilly. He needs to realize there are other ways he could father children and still be with Kellar. I look forward to reading more. Good story.
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Thank you so much for this wonderful story and these great characters. I would definitely love more of this story. However, being there are already 50 chapters I don't see a problem with Running with the Pack, Book 2.
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D is being an ass. He needs to talk to Noel before any more damage is done to their relationship.
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I am enjoying the way this story is coming together. I am eager to see Barrett get what he deserves, even though that would, sadly, probably be almost the end of this engrossing story.
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Great chapter and even better wedding gifts. I think my favorites were the Egyptian figures and the picture from Greenland. Looks like they're going to need that museum. Love this story and these characters. One extremely minor point. For some reason, Alpha Dorian Jackson and his poisoning caught my interest. I was curious to find out whodunit and what happened but was a bit disappointed not to learn more. Will there be any more, like maybe a side story?
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It's All Coming Together
avidreadr commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in It's All Coming Together
What a wonderful posting for July 4th. I am enjoying this story and look forward to more. -
Loved the story and I'm also a bit sad to see it end. Thank you for the epilogue and I look forward to your next story.
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Great chapter again. A lot of information and a lot of changes for the Lycan counsel to deal with. I think most will realize that the changes will be for the best and those not in favor will probably, over time, lose younger members who leave to join more modern packs.
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The fight scene was great. Ethan just keeps getting better and better. The council scenes were well done and John was wonderfully in control. If I had a vote, it would be the third option. They caused the deaths of many others and deserve to pay for it.
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While Ryan's reaction might have been a little overblown, it's not surprising he, and Clayton have issues. I find the story to be engrossing and look forward to more.
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I'm not sure if I left any comments before, but I want to tell you how much I have been enjoying this story. There is so much more to Kye than he realizes and it's nice to see him starting to realize it. I hope they find and deal with Barrett. I look forward to reading more.
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I knew the end was coming but I dreaded it. I have come to love all these people and they feel like family. The story was entertaining, engrossing and, at times, educational. We watched CJ go through a roller coaster of a year and come out on top. I will miss all these people. I really would love to have gone along on that road trip. I could talk about this more, but I generally don't go for long comments. Let me just thank you deeply for bringing us this wonderful story. I look forward to whatever else you plan to write.
