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Chapter 53 Two Winning Hands
avidreadr commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 53 Two Winning Hands
Another great chapter. Nate and Bodie are really sweet together. It's good that they're trying to help Josh but I'm a little worried that he will get his hopes up of reconnecting someday with Nate. Oh, well. Time will tell It's also very satisfying to see the changes Mark has made. Good communication is definitely the key. Look forward to more, -
Thank you for this story. I have enjoyed it a lot and look forward to your next story. Happy New Year.
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It's what Levi needs, a family, and I can see how this would help him through the ages, but I was sort of hoping she had a cure for him of some kind. In any case, it was a lovely chapter,.
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Sad but hopeful at the end. I look forward to your solution or else Levi has eternity of going from man to man.
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We knew the three Ethan forgave come around. Now, if Chris can get away from Michael, there's a chance for him. Michael is too arrogant to change and will pay for it sooner or later. As for Ethan, curiouser and curiouser. I guess we know why some of the ferals have been drawn to the area. I can't wait to read more.
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Chapter 25 The Easter Weekend Part 1
avidreadr commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 25 The Easter Weekend Part 1
I wish he would break up with Fran already. All he has to say is he simply isn't ready or interested in getting serious with anyone yet. He could always say he plans to return to England and doesn't want any romantic complications. -
Not putting Michael down is a mistake. I can't see him just taking his punishment and everyone who thinks he will jut meekly drive away is delusional.
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A really excellent chapter. I feel sorry for Josh and hope he does tell his mother; he needs the support. Nate and Bodie are just too sweet together for words. As always, Michael and Kendall were wonderfully supportive and gave good advice. I look forward to more.
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I don't think exile will keep Michael away, but the point may be moot. IMHO, he'll be dead one way or the other by the end of the story, anyway. I'm excited to see what happens when Ethan is changed. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Druid/elemental explains a lot; that it with the horse from last chapter might nail down exactly which one he is. I think he should be converted soon, for his own safety. Although he can protect himself, if he is converted, it adds another layer of protection.
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Hmm. More clues about Ethan. I have an idea or two but I don't want to spoil it in the remote chance I'm right. Glad to see more of Alex and I really like the Alpha. He is dealing very well with a difficult situation. I also don't think his son is the next alpha, despite the family history.
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Faris and James - Doggie Style
avidreadr commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Faris and James - Doggie Style
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Congrats Promising Author. An excellent chapter. I've got to say, I love Kendall's parents. Their reasons for finishing the house are valid. It is no fun living in a construction zone, especially with a baby. The second half of the story was very hot and just what our men needed. I look forward to the new house, the puppy, the baby and everything else. One minor thing. Can you please change the puppy's name? I don't care much for Eyebrows.
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I love that Ethan is ready, willing and obviously able to protect himself. It's great that he is equal to Aiden in many ways. As to what he is, he seems to be able to control water, reflected by the blue hue of his eyes, so he could be a water deity of some kind but it's all guesswork.
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ARG! So frustrating. You sure know how to keep people hanging. I'm starting to think that when the inevitable conflict between Michael and Ethan comes, it might be Michael who'll be in trouble.
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It seems to me we're getting all sorts of hints that Ethan might be more than human, but I can't figure out what that might be. I liked the other couple we met and hope we see more of them.
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Good grief. Some wolves never learn.
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Chapter 31: The Universe Shifts
avidreadr commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 31: The Universe Shifts
I'm glad Andy is finally catching a break but I keep waiting for when the truth all comes out. I just hope that all the positive steps he has taken in his life help to mitigate the consequences. -
Hmmm More and more mysterious. I look forward to more.
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Chapter 50 Building a Solid Hand
avidreadr commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 50 Building a Solid Hand
Wow. Usually 50 chapters has me antsy to finish a story already, but this one is flowing along so beautifully I didn't even notice. I look forward to when they can move into the new house. I think Nate deserves an overnight - friend basis only - to give our guys some alone time. I also forget when the baby is due, but that should be coming up, too. -
Gee, you sure know how to cheer up a reader! All kidding aside, the story has taken a quite unusual turn which I find fascinating. Now to see if our heroes can dig themselves out of the hole.
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I was a bit confused before this chapter but now I'm really intrigued, even if I didn't understand a whole lot - physics is not my thing. I look forward to hearing more.
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A beautiful tribute,
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I read this story and want to cry for Eric. He's had it so hard and he's all alone and none of it is his fault. I think we all knew he would end up leaving due to Ambrose's nosing around but at least he got some time to rest from the traveling and now has some money. I know where I want this story to go, but I have to wait and see. This story is an engrossing one and I look forward to more.
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Chapter 48 A New Player at the Table
avidreadr commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 48 A New Player at the Table
Seeing things from Nate's POV added so much to the story. I think he and Brodie are going to be good together; I jut hope they don't get too much crap in school. I always look for updates to this story; it really brightens my day when I see one. In fact, I now eagerly await the next chapter.
