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Great chapter. It started off strong with the Burke confrontation. I'm pretty sure with his attitude, he'll have problems in the future and end up getting fired or quitting. And the HRC party was all prime. "Watching" CJ and Owen meet Bill Clinton was priceless. I always liked Fridays but reading this story first thing Friday morning makes me start it with a smile. Thank you.
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As much as I miss the fairy godparents, I think it's good that the story is now requiring people to do the thinking. So often in tales involving magic, magic makes things a bit too easy. These characters are smart and ingenious and it's good to see these qualities being used. Love this story and look forward to more.
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I agree with the others, this is a great start. I love this gang and look forward to more.
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I loved this story. I'm glad James got to go along. In the spirit of the holiday, I'd like to think Chris and his elves arranged it so James could go and no one actually was hurt before the big day.
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Beautiful story.
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Such a beautiful, sad story. I'm in tears. Merry Christmas.
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A wonderful story but it had me in tears. No idea who wrote it but I look forward to reading more.
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Great chapter. Politics is a field CJ could definitely succeed in, if he wished. It was a good place to end this cycle but I will miss getting up on Fridays and knowing a new chapter will be here. Oh, well. Just to say this now, have a happy new year and I'll see you in 2017!
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Wonderful to see this story again. Great chapter. It looks like things are going to come to a head. With Evan and Russ together and with their fiances, the mother bears and all the others who support them, I think it might be the time to confront Henry and get it all sorted out so everyone can live their lives in peace,
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Chapter 1 One Year Passes
avidreadr commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 1 One Year Passes
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Great honeymoon. I like your idea of continuing this. There is a great cast of characters I'd like to hear more about.
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Good chapter. I think the first thing the boys need to do is change the locks on the house. The grandparents already snooped around once and won't hesitate to do so again. With them living there now, Adam and Peter have every right to safeguard their things. As to them getting custody, unless one of them does something really stupid, I don't think the grandparents can get custody, especially since the mother is still around. She might have to be told what's going on and brought into it if things go that far.
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I think it would be interesting to read more. I'd love to see what happens to the two boys.
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I enjoyed this story and would love reading more about these people. Thank you.
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I am enjoying this story. Jon is a douche but serves a purpose in the story. I am so looking forward to him getting what he deserves. I also really wish I could see the master tattoo. It sounds incredible. All the characters are well defined and interesting and feel real. I look forward to reading more.
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Apparently, good child care is a problem around the world and not just in the USA. As for the grandparents getting the children, a lot might depend on who hears the case if it goes before a judge, and whether or not they're homophobic. Peter and Alan are doing the best they can in a difficult situation.
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Great story and great characters. A wonderful ending; Toph deserved all the good fortune with his art, Gary and his family. As to his mother, she will never be the mother he wanted but even she made some progress at the end. I will miss these people but this was a perfect place to end. Thank you.
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The story has a good, solid beginning with well defined characters. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to more,.
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Thank you for bringing us this story and these characters.
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Wonderful chapter. Going along on Toph's journey to find himself was engrossing and satisfying. I'm glad Toph has finally dealt with his issues with his mother and has moved on. I look forward to the parents' meeting.
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I liked this chapter. The gun control argument was well stated and thought provoking. I would welcome more control but, like CJ, don't see it happening.
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I agree, like Ryan said it's been a helluva ride and I've enjoyed it all. Thank you for giving us these men.
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All right, Kye. Wait to go. The old bastard got what was coming and I notice they also managed to work in that the cargo was being unloaded the next day instead of that night. Good work. Now all they need to do is catch Barrett, who I'm sure is somehow linked to the old bastard.
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Another great chapter. Love the grandparents. It helps explain a few things about Harley,
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So moving. I agree, how will we make it through the actual ceremony. Oh, and I want that jet.
