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some really violent (and insecure) little shits in this school. I assume cody and Jt are brothers of Andy's? It's sad b/c I'm sure finding your way through questioning your sexuality is hard enough without having to worry about being beaten up and put in a hospital. I can't see that Even kid being smart enough not to get caught doing something soon, hopefully!

maybe he'd be better served training in martial arts b/c clearly he can't fend off students, he's gonna need time to work up to doing any damage at all to some super-strong angel. This really doesn't seem to be working in his favor yet. I also think Marc needs to talk to his father. He can't not know what his side is doing. Maybe he needs to go with what his bf told him and show he's willing to hear his father out. good story...worrisome to see him get his ass kicked with no defense, by humans. Also, does he know how to work the necklace? And why wouldn't Lucifel have just gone and gotten the device? It's not hidden. If they knew it was in his hands, why not go and get it and have this super weapon? that must say they believe he could do damage if they are willing to leave it to him to protect himself. How did Verina find Lucifel if they are so well hidden? Interesting.

I dunno, Aki really has no control. He's supposed to be taking care of these ids who come to him. And here he's screwing him in five seconds. And what would that have done to Hel if he walked in on that? still unsure what a haptic is. Knowing what his lover wants would be part of the empathic abilities I'd think.

Thanks for finding time to work on this. Zipping around Europe sounds fun! We've all been waiting for this chapter with baited breath, I'm sure. I know I was. I thought it would pick-up at the table. I was sure he wouldn't out Carlin (I hope he keeps calling him that. it suits him better than Carl) , but I was looking forward to their confrontation in private. I kinda would like to know how they've been getting along without bringing attention to themselves if Alex thought he could have killed his father on top of the anger he'd been harboring over the revelation of who he was. Maybe you can give us some hint of how it had been going through Carlin's reaction when he confronts him after his return home. I think Alex is very lucky to have little Luka there. he's loyal enough to risk making such an accusation. He's someone who would be under-estimated if taught to fight and used to further Alex's interests, as well as his job now. though I am a little worried about him once that crazy mother shows up! She will be quite angry to see him still alive. Does Alex even suspect the mother wanted him dead? Can u really get away with dispatching your entire staff the way she did? Guess we all have different ways of mourning lol Gosh, she is a scarier person every time she acts. Couldn't she try to take over as General? I hope we get to see Alex in action again, fighting at some point. He's so good at it and I'd love to see him and Carlin have to fight for their lives together and kick some ass. Can't wait for more.

interesting revelations. the biggest for his dad probably lol. It's great that his dad was so accepting. It was sweet how he treated Marc. It seems like King Icarus might not be that great a dad (it was his dad who was king right?). sounds like at minimum, his choice to watch over Damien didn't go over well. What I wonder is what made Marc want to do that job at such a young age. With his talk of maturation, he was only like 8-10 y/o maturity-wise for a demon. That's pretty young to choose a life-long job and obligation. Do they have more of a connection that he recognized back then? That empathic connection they had, is that something that Damien can accomplish with anyone, or is it something that is unique to his relationship with Marc? Marc seemed to be pleasantly surprised when it happened. I only expected Damien to ask Marc if he wanted to be with him b/c it made it easier to protect him or if it was b/c he would spend so much time with him and might as well be able to have some fun at the same time Did his feelings develop long ago for Damien as he watched him grow (obviously I don't mean lusting after a kid, just getting to know who he is and coming to want him as he got older)? Just wondering. Damien seems like that would matter to him. I think one of them should have noted Verina's pleas to not kill him when the suits came in during the dinner. Did she not know the Angel's decision to do so? This war, he said it began as a civil war that the demons got pulled into. Was it still a civil war and if so between what groups of angels? Or did it totally become about ridding the earth of demons so they could take over? looking forward to more.

This Is a very entertaining story. It has a very 'real' feeling to it. I like that each character has a 'feel' and you keep to it. Sometimes with the stories that are about a bunch of h.s. kids, the author puts the same 'voice' on all of them and it drives me nuts. ie if the person has a word they use like 'gaaaah' I like that you only use that with Aidyn. you don't have all of them saying it which is not likely. sky is adorable! Greyson is too. I love to the two of them. I'm intrigued by Nolan too. I will have to consider checking out your other story about him on the other site. I love how all the brothers are both struggling with it at the same time and they don't know. The one thing I would have liked to have seen was Noah talking to Aidyn about his and his brother's relationship and what he saw him doing to Skylar. It would have been part of their relationship that had a big effect on Aidyn and helped skylar and in a way helped noah maybe by helping them. Even though he finds out his brother's change of behavior wasn't about him. I feel so badly for Noah. I mean, his childhood and what happened to his family is horrible. To find out what happened to his brother is just heartbreaking. I'd love to see you work in the message somehow that if that were happening to someone, they should go to their parents or someone they can trust. someone might just be reading the story who is going through that. maybe even if in the form of a message at the beginning of a chapter. Straight, gay or whatever, that experience should be shared. It could have saved poor Ryan. I hope that Noah doesn't feel guilt over the fact his brother was trying to protect him. I do worry that Noah is pressing the envelope with Aidyn. I don't feel like he should force him to come out bc he is ready to. shouldn't it be a personal decision? Does he expect him to come out at school or just to his parents? I understand Noah's decision not to hide but I don't think he should require that sudden a decision from Aydin. look forward to more.

The chapter was sweet. I was pleasantly surprised that they lightened the atmosphere like they did and the back and forth at the meeting was cute. I was surprised he didn't introduce Louis to his father or speak to him after the meeting. His father and he must not be very close. I am impressed that Louis is taking this in stride. He seems to be more willing to see the positive in Xavier than I expected. I'll be interested to see what he is thinking about all of this. I'm surprised they systematically avoided discussion of their night together or at least what they both felt as a result or specifically, why Xavier felt the need to trap him in a contract. I wonder when that will come up. For now, I guess they are both willing to give this a chance which is good. look forward to more

So, I love this flip of religious beliefs on its ear b/c I think books should be imaginative. Doesn't matter what I believe. I only feel badly b/c he now knows there isn't some place he will meet his mom again. Hadn't some small part wished that earlier? Anyhow, I would want to ask who was on the detail for watching his mom b/c clearly they failed! I think he said his uncle was right? Lucky for Damien that he's got a new guard! I wonder how he'll hone his abilities if there aren't humans with the powers to help him? Marc said that he doesn't have those abilities. The story is really fascinating and I look forward to more.

wow freaky! can't wait for more.

I'm surprised James hasn't tried to reach out to Casey though. He hasn't tried to go hang out with him. I agree Casey might be seduced right now by popularity and I'm disappointed that he doesn't remember that he'd not have had a chance for any of this without James. At the same time, I think James is not acting true to himself. He is so bitter right now about the way the jocks are and I think he's assuming Casey will become that. Casey's attention to girls is obviously hard for him to take too. That said, that bitter boy we just heard on the hill doesn't seem like James. The idea that he'd become like them is ridiculous. If any person is a strong and good soul it's that kid. it makes me sad that he seems to be terrified to reach out. I'm sad he's as much of a loner as we now see. I hope things change.

Wow, that was a great chapter. I think it was the best chapter so far. I have one question. How could Kris know where he lives? All he was told was that he was on a certain street. He'd have no idea where to go, unless he got a feeling from his mom. I love how he heard that voice...chance's mom. I hope he is able to do something, but even if he were to find his house, what Is he gonna do? Just barge in? it will be interesting to see how you play this. I hope that you are able to write and get the inspiration to do so. I'm sorry you've been going through something. I'm enjoying the story and hope for another chapter as soon as you can write it. good luck

very very interesting. so is his father a shifter? can he shift at will and show this guy? Mohawk guy is interesting. How did he end up ready to kill the kid of a guy he hates? what did the old man do to him? can't wait for more.

I like the two characters. They are really different which is cool. Chance seems so tragic so I hope Kris can pull it together and help him. I'd love to see you get an editor. There are a lot of small errors and misused words. for example saying he was 'fondling' instead of 'fumbling' for the keys. these are things easily grabbed by an editor if not a spellcheck program. they could also help you as you develop the story. Good luck.

lol Uh oh...this should get interesting. An unstable teen wolf with a spirit animal and a demon who easily loses his temper and a flirty empathy/haptic....sounds like the beginning to a joke. But, really, these three should be really interesting together. a few questions...what is a haptic? Does Aki need a kiln or can he just fire his pottery with his demon fire and is Hel going to change into a werewolf in the physical or just have a spirit animal? I like this story a lot. look forward to more. I love that we have no idea where this could go. makes it fun!

Thanks for the answers to the questions/comments I made. I appreciate it. I totally get what you're saying and it does make sense that the former owners would share 'slaves' and pass Ryle around. I read it again several times to see if there were only two or possibly three men there. it doesn't seem so and riley has a really good sense of smell and would know that scent so I think if he'd been there, they'd know it. Riley should mention the concern to the captain who could confirm that bastard is dead on Cana. I'm glad Gabe is surrounded by love and he was making strides at least. What he went through was horrifying. And the physical scars would serve as a reminder which would probably add to the memories and such, making the emotional part even worse. I'm so glad to see the relationship he has with his father now and of course with Riley. Now being with David also will heal him too. it will be nice for him to show Riley where he grew up. The Captain sure has grown as a man and father. It is amazing to see how much he loves Gabriel and I don't even think raising the other children will make a bond that is closer than he has with Gabriel. I love the pride and care he has for his son. It was so amazing that he took him back to Earth. I think it's really good for Gabe to get this chance to remember his mom and be with david and share his old home with Riley. It will be very healing and it's nice that the captain isn't threatened by the relationship gabe and david have. I'm hoping we get to see them there, get to know david a bit and see the healing it gives Gabe, as well as seeing what the Earth in that time has become. Having Plutonium fields doesn't sound too good though! The story is really one of my favs and it's getting better as it goes. thanks. wondering if you'll go back to the follow-up to full moon after this...not that I want this over, mind you! Thanks to craftingmom for that quick turnaround too so FB could get this out to us. We know you guys are busy busy busy.

lmao he I so like a child at times and then he's this force to be reckoned with at others. oh lord how he'll tear up the court when they end up there lol

I can't say I feel like it ended at the right time. I try to be honest in comments so I'll say it. I really felt like the story was incomplete. We read both stories and were there for the rape and it was wonderful to see the changes in him. I just wish we'd seen the follow-through and seen how the interaction went. I'd love to see an epilogue. I just feel that we saw the tension between them after Ashlee came into the picture. We saw the whole dynamic and I really wanted to see the outcome of it. I wanted to see how he was accepted by his friends who got to the point of telling hi to stay away. I thought the fact that he ended up with Taylor at the same place he'd been with Clem that day was very interesting and it worked well. It showed how much he'd changed. I think it was great for him to admit that his father wasn't going to change, but he had and I think eventually, he'll be able to do more than avoid the old man. I hope he'll have enough confidence in himself to stand-up for his actions and his work and who he is. If not, that ranch will be an unhappy future for him. I enjoyed the story thoroughly, but still feel it would have been better ended after the apology. Thanks! I know an epilogue including the apology would make it awkward, but maybe you could show him later down the road with a party at the ranch and show him fully accepted back with them. Show he'd worked through things even if he is a work in progress.

I'm glad you had Ryle kill them straight up. While it woulda been nice to see them suffer, I think Darth got a good end when he saw the other guy's entrails hanging out and knew he'd called it down on himself too! Ryle would just kill to protect his mate. He'd not think of getting back at him. What happened was terrible and I pray Gabe is able to overcome it. He's still young and been on such a high that this will be difficult. He's lucky though to have a mate and father who loves him and who now will probably struggle with feeling guilty for not seeing through the ruse. I'm a tiny bit confused as to how all these people are working together though. How did all Ryle's former owners all end up owning shares in the same company? then Darth, who was angry with Gabe, goes to Ryle's torturers to get help against him? I guess I get that the ones behind the ship that attacked the starcutter would want to hurt the captain for going after them. But, what of this whole routine to get to Gabe? Why would one of them help Darth with that? I thought that the use of Ryle's voice/song to get through to Gabe was sweet. Why though would any of the men have thought that the Captain wouldn't want them all looking for his son? it was messed up that they all left only Ryle to find his poor mate! Keep writing. Poor craftingmom now has us on her...get those edits done now! lol

Please don't make us wait too long with a cliffy like that! I don't understand how that didn't raise flags to the Captain that this come so close to them being herded to a planet and then the attack . I assume someone knows it's easiest to get to the Captain through his boy or it's the boys who have the enemies. Uggh, the idea of being sucked into earth is really scary. bleh. He made a real enemy in Darth and I guess he could steel that ship that tried to get them away from the Starcutter, but unless he paired up with Ryle's 'formers' then they have two possible culprits now. Poor Riley

nice story. I'd love for you to find a way to complete their story and allow them to be together. AFterall, it won't be good for him to be with someone who can't live a full life with him. for them to only be together in their own way. I'd have liked for ou to address what the authorities would have thought about him knowing these things. What would he have answered. Would he have become known for his abilities? i'd love to see a HEA where Jacob is given a chance to truly live with him as a reward for being a guardian or something. Please consider it. Is the other story some sort of ending for them or just another story about them?

I agree that his respect for the lives of the animals is special and probably fostered by his mom and his Native American culture. It's a shame the grandfather is acting like he is. But why get Casey's fines paid if he disliked the kid so much? I am wondering if james and casey are even talking much. Did things get better after James' visit? Overall good chapter. thanks for the heads up it was posted!

Again my issue is with the reality of the injuries and that they can still go that far. I'd have had him go on the horse for a time. That foot would be in rough shape. I would hope he's cleaning it but they would probably have infection as an issue. better get it treated in the town. they got together finally which is nice. i'd love to see them have a convo about when they each fell for one another. It's a huge shift in their long friendship. I'd think they'd discuss it. It was a perfect V-day chapter. thanks

I love this story so much. I love how imaginative it is. Always fun to see what you'll come up with. I feel badly for the woman with three boobs though. Man that must be murder on her back! lol that royal guy must be a hoot to deal with. why aren't you offering me everything? are you mental? lol I can't wait for the rest of the day. Hope for an update soon!!!

It sounds like Casey is getting the parenting and love he's deserved for ages and that he's getting some of the sense of belonging in the town through school. I can't believe he ignored james after everything that happened. That must have hurt James. And here, James once again went out on a limb. he's a special kid. his advice to Sam shows he's so far beyond his years. this kid should be running the town! how sweet that he show sam how to drive. he cracks me up that he can get a truck to borrow. He's really got this underground going on too, knowing who to go to for what! I'm surprised he didn't approach Casey before this at school. Maybe he knew he needed time to settle in. I am not sure I understand all of what casey was thinking. I can understand his saying he blamed James even and then the shame. I just thought he'd get over it in order to feel that friendship again and to thank him. I'm just glad they worked it out and I hope they can cross that line soon and be friends. I'd like to see that easy going friendship they had after that first lunch. I want to see them be kids together and run around in the woods and stuff. I wanna see them shooting the bow, etc. lookin forward to more.

Ha! Xavier is a tricky guy. lol. I am wondering why his new worker feels such a need to put on a certain act. is it pressure from home? I have to laugh at how the head of the sec. pool must be having trouble keeping up with why Xav is trying to lock a secretary in and not fire him. This should b fun. look forward to more.