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  1. Mann Ramblings
    For me, X-Men: Days of Future Past. Bryan Singer is supposed to be back heading that one. It may erase (or it least minimize) the shame of X3
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    Today I wish I was Irish. I could suck down green beer from dawn until the bar kicks us out and it would be seen as an acceptable exercise. Now all it will look like is that I'm a drunk poser.
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    That's quite the glowing review. Krista obviously did something very right here. I hope this drives a new batch of readers in her direction.
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    Very nice. You did a great job of giving the feel of the location and the growing drudgery of endless weather. The growing frustration of Dev's environment was really well handled. Based on a song, your tale had a nice melody from beginning to end and brought a smile. Lovely.
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    I admit, I didn't answer the poll because it lacked the Associate degree level I had, because a technical certificate, in my area at least, requires half as much effort. And "Something Else" made it sound less relevant. Dammit, I earned that degree. LOL
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    After high school I went to college. I came out during that time and the stress during that period left me after four years of classes with me dropping out and no degree. I felt so guilty for not being able to follow through, it took about another 13 years to muster the courage to go back an earn a degree in Graphic Design. Since then, I've taken 5 years of ceramics classes before joining the local guild absorbing every ounce of information I can on the subject and improving my skills. Then I started writing finished M/M fiction and keep trying to learn everything I can in this format as well. I doubt I'll go back to school for anything else, but my education is ongoing every day even if it's not in a formal setting. I'm good with that.
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    Sasha... you're a beast. I bow before you. (I wish I knew the emoticon for that lol)
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    Not counting the anthology this was a good week. Add it in, and you get a great volume to choose from. Love to see it all.
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    Chapter 1

    Mann Ramblings commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Nice using of real world events to ground this mythology rich tale. Quite the cautionary tale you have here. We poison our world and it's only a matter of time before she protests. Only an act of gods have prevented our demise. It gives me the idea that at some point Nature will cleanse herself and humanity may not survive the act. Clever as usual. Nice work!
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    Substance P

    Mann Ramblings commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Substance P

    This is powerful and unexpected. I think this the best piece of yours I've read. Excellent work and well thought out. The ending was tragic but very well done. You should be very happy with this.
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    Cumulonimbus

    Mann Ramblings commented on Aditus's story chapter in Cumulonimbus

    Nicely done! I liked that they didn't end up back together. Mark's actions were a little desperate to say the least, but the resolution of their relationship was well handled and believable. The backdrop of the storm fit right in with the mood and framed the scene with an undertone of disquiet. Well done!
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    Chapter 1

    Mann Ramblings commented on Myr's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I hope this is the beginning of something grander. This world is intriguing and I'm enjoying learning about the cultures you're creating here. This story was a very nice way to re-introduce your writing to some of us who haven't had the pleasure before now.
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    The Story

    Mann Ramblings commented on Ron's story chapter in The Story

    What a tragic yet hopeful tale. There are many implied aspects to the story: David always goes after guys that look like Robert. Does Robert look like his father? That makes for interesting psychology under it all the history of abuse. With the snowstorm I would call it less of "Nature's Wrath" and more of "Nature's Gift" to the newly found pair. Good premise and word usage throughout. A little adjustment during David's revelation could be had, (I am an absolute Nazi when it comes to dialogue.) but overall a very good piece. Well done.
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    Crap! It'll take all weekend to get through them all. Time to hunker down and get started! Looks like a good weekend
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    Chapter 1

    Mann Ramblings commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Love this! If you can't decide on who's POV you'll use for the next one, I'd love to see Moshe's. His simplicity and innocence is very intriguing. What a fun romp and inventive use of the antho theme. The sad part will be waiting for the next antho for the next chapter! Argh!
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    Fantastic!!! Congrats, Graeme!!!
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    Dammit! I'm at work! **where's the tantrum emote?**
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    What they said...
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    I find number 3 to the biggest one. Bending reality is one of the bonuses of the fantasy genre, but it you establish the rules of reality, you have to follow them. If not, it cheapens the story and makes it look like the author didn't pay attention to their own work. And the reader will know it, pick it apart, and appreciate your efforts that much less.
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    But you're cute and talented, so we can forgive a lot.
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    He's lucky he didn't get accidentally skewered, especially when he stood up. That gut of his was a big target. LOL
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    Damn teenagers! Always trying to pick a fight.
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    Makes you wonder how they were paired up. Quite a few were really into the scene. However, we now have proof that if you drop two gay men together, there's no guarantee that they'll hook up.
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    This is proof that a good story doesn't have to be a novel. Lovely work.
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    Chapter 1

    Mann Ramblings commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This is a lovely tale with a great word usage to show his relationship with the sea. A pleasure to read. Very nicely done. You've captured the feel of the dichotomy of the Greek Gods magnificently.
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