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I've been thinking the same thing. I finally came to the conclusion that they've been watching him, and see that he is trying to change. He hasn't attempted to avoid his community service, and has actually asked for more. He's quiet, respectful and doesn't push himself on others. Also, I think the opinion of his "guards" goes a long way.

Great story! I'm glad you forgot to remove the sex. LOL

I wonder if Michael asserted his dominance by sexually assaulting Chris. There's something he's dealing with besides how he acted. Like, Jeffrey, I saw the mention of suicide, but it escalated so quickly! Portraying that incident is a case where Chris' "journal" view falls short. But he's not Hemingway, right? He can only share what he can share.

Great story. I thoroughly enjoyed the characters. Thank you for sharing it with us.

I was surprised that the story ended here, but that's because I was looking forward to the visits to other packs, and the young Morningstar boys realizing they're mates, and Keller and Tobyn becoming parents. I'd also like to see how the pack functions with Keller as alpha. But your stop here was perfect. I hope you continue the story. You've produced an impressive addition to the genre. I'll miss the Monday updates.

*claps with glee*

I read this on the other site and loved it! Hudson, did you make lots of changes?

I'm confused. Did Will get a new truck? His was given to Oliver, and Katherine got a new truck of her own, yes? Why did Will get keys?

I was thinking the same thing! What would it take to make a party boy decide he wants to settle down? It'd be a nice addition to this little universe. And maybe by then, Corey and Jason could have a kid ...

Think you'll ever come back to this story? I know it's years later, but I just read it for the first time.

Since Kenny was talking all loud, I figured Graham heard him (small apartment) and was getting the spear gun. I, too, forgot it was left in Ellie's car. LOL

Cried at Sybil's vision, laughed at Keller's response to news he's an alpha. :0)

A wonderful tribute. I am so sorry. Please don't forget to care of yourself.

I have to ask: Since Colin can't store food, does he have to take a big dump every night to expel what he ate that day? *shrugs* Inquiring minds want to know. LOL

I started this story a few days ago, and I've been reading steadily. It's been great, because I knew I had so many chapters to enjoy. Then just now I got to the end of the chapter, only to see I'm all caught up! Darn. :0( I love that you didn't stop after the mess with Deena, instead choosing to share all sorts of episodes in Seth and Erik's lives. Thanks so much for posting regularly. I'm a fan of the series.

"A big part of Liam wanted to run after Alek and explain, to tell him the truth, but now was not the time." Bullshit. All he had to do was say, "call me when you're done. There's something important I need to tell you" or a simple "he's not my boyfriend." If I have one thing that bothers me about this story, it's Liam not telling Alek the truth. Feels like you're dragging out the drama.

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I agree with Jeff! Um, two things: Danny didn't call her David at the precinct? He certainly can't bring himself to say "sister" or "Dorothy." And the doctor didn't notice the Adam's apple? :0)

Yes, Eric's POV, please! The mention of ugly crying really made me want more from him. As I read I could feel that ending coming on, but it still hurt. I'm so glad you're working on part two. This would have been a great way to end the story for good -- after all, not every tale has a HEA -- but I'm glad you're continuing.

I was thinking: you know (or maybe you don't?) about how porn stars have social media accounts and do interviews about their latest movie? If this series is doing as well online as it seems, wouldn't they be expected to do porn press interviews and post pics and comments to up the audience even more? That would allow you to add an extra layer of tension, plus give the guys ways to get to know each other even more ...

I read this on the other site and really enjoyed it. I look forward to seeing the changes you've made!

Nicely done, but I'm bummed that it ended the way it did. I understand wanting to wrap up a story while leaving something to the imagination. However, so much time was spent on Lahja agonizing over becoming a demon, then suddenly we find out he took almost 40 souls his first time on his own? I wanted to follow that transformation. I also wanted a sex scene between them, because the dynamic you had going was fascinating. Different. And hot, of course. Finally, I wanted to read more of their conversations, now that they are finally on the same page.

Enquiring minds want to know: Who laced up the corset? Dorothy couldn't have, and there's been no mention of a maid ...

So we're not gonna talk about how Dorothy's earring left her ear in the first place? Mmmhmm. LOL I'm enjoying this. Seth should know how Dorothy feels when she tried to make dinner for him.

Mike is a 26-year-old man who has had something extraordinary happen to him, and he wants to spend time with ... an introverted, immature (he certainly reads younger than 18) high school senior? I'm with Duncan: Why? Also, would most people be willing to go home without finding out how Mike did that thing with the streetlights? Hell no! You've come up with an interesting premise, but so far the characters aren't living up to it. They're stereotypes -- the thick-headed brother, vapid girlfriend, the shy "homely" protagonist who manages to attract the sexy man of mystery. You've even telegraphed that the teacher is unhinged and will cause trouble later. Mainly, I think Duncan has to show more maturity in what he thinks, says and does. He has to *earn* whatever Mike is about to get him into. He has to man up. Otherwise, Mike just comes off as odd and creepy for wanting to be with him.