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How far do you think you’ll take this story? 15 chapters? 30 chapters? I guess I’m wondering if it will be an epic. With so many mates, I could see that being the case. Speaking of so many mates, I’m curious if some will be closer to each other than to Elias. I know everyone loves him, but Mateo and January have the makings of a special bond ... P.S.: Pax is my favorite!
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It’s interesting and authentic that the side of Erik he thinks will scare Ryan away is the side that makes Ryan fall in love with him. I look forward to seeing how Erik responds in the morning.
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My turn to ask: are you gonna finish this great story?
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Because he’s Josh’s friend and he hates to see him upset? If the point of this story is that deep down Greg really loves and wants Josh in the romantic sense, I think there should’ve been obvious clues along the way. As it stands, this story makes me uncomfortable because it reads like a man trying to push himself on another man who has repeatedly told him no. I’m surprised they’re still friends. Josh really should stay away for his own sake. And man, do I feel sorry for Glenn, who’s allowing himself to be third in Josh’s heart (after kids and a straight man).
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Great couple.
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I read “Lust and Chastity” yesterday, and to this point today. Love the characters. I wish you would explain the twins’ predicament a bit more, tho. Their parents let them stay there for SIX years? Such a long time, esp. considering what they have to do.
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Silly question, but I wanna know: How long is Pax’s hair? Curly, wavy or straight? I keep imagining a long mohawk, like Storm’s (X-men). This was very hot. I look forward to the restraints and blindfolds and shifting roles ...
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Ah, but he didn’t save Luca because he wanted to protect a human from certain death. It was the act of someone who didn’t want to deal with red tape. Kohen is scarily detached and lacks empathy in that moment — it’s like the computerish part of his brain takes over.
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This is the first story I’ve read by you. The first graph combined with the title and the mention of getting kicked out makes me think poor Adam is going to be homeless. And there’s no mention of college yet, with him only 15. I hope this doesn’t turn out to be a tear-jerker every chapter ...
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I figured he was trying to save both Hyun and Raphael from possible heartbreak.
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I have two questions. 1. Did Harry mate with Rayne? 2. Will there be a sequel back in Banes?
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I, too, was surprised. But then, Erik always did excel at reading Ryan well in bed, but poorly outside of it. (I was also surprised that Erik still had Ryan’s number — I’m curious if he ever used it in those three years.) I’m so excited to see these characters return! I’ve reread the first story a couple times, wondering if we’d get a sequel.
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“God love Ian, he chucked the wobbly of the century, and we all went home cranky.” *blank look* What’s a wobbly?
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Nope, I’m skeptical as well. I reserve judgment until Mandy appears again. LOL
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The date was sweet (LOVED the hoodie) but I was surprised at how quickly Trick’s parents accepted Cody. It didn’t seem realistic to me. They saw how the bullies’ treatment changed Trick for the worse, made him a timid and insecure person. Changing schools is serious. They didn’t have to cuss him out and refuse to let him in the house (as my mother would have done), but they didn’t even question Cody or tell him how he affected their son.
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Chapter 12 The Final Act...
Geemeedee commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 The Final Act...
I enjoyed the story, but I thought Simon's 180 wasn't believable. Seriously, I thought he was gonna blow their cars up. They got off too easy. -
Chapter 11 The Things We Do For Love...
Geemeedee commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 The Things We Do For Love...
I fully expect everybody to die at the end. -
Chapter 8 Desperate Situations...Desperate Actions
Geemeedee commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 8 Desperate Situations...Desperate Actions
I'm reading this story in one sitting. You've been working on this since 2012? Damn, girl. So, I've read the comments and I'm surprised no one brought up the weirdness of Simon going into the bathroom to "try on" the condom. Why didn't they both get nekkid and he put it on right then? And he came out of the bathroom with his clothes still on? The whole thing was very odd. Enjoying the story, tho. -
I want to make sure I'm reading it right -- they're gonna become parents right after high school? While they are settling into college and building the foundation? Why does everything have to be so soon? They haven't given themselves a chance to live without layers of responsibility weighing them down. I thought waiting til after college before having kids was the smartest decision they'd made.
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I just reread this and realized -- Marcus is sketching a painting by the man considered Jack the Ripper! Is this an Easter egg?
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If you do decide to go back to Seb and Beau, I hope you explain why Odie was so stank about Beau and never even gave him a chance. Actually, it would make sense to do it, since Seb has been visiting Odie in the hospital. I would think he'd be spending a lot of time with Odie as he heals physically and mentally.
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Mine! Part Two Chapter Thirty-two
Geemeedee commented on Cia's story chapter in Mine! Part Two Chapter Thirty-two
Nice chapter. I like the little ways you show Ritch growing more comfortable with the idea of mating with Park. One thing: I kept waiting for Park to brush his teeth or at least swish some mouthwash, because ugh vomit breath. -
This is marked Conplete, but it doesn't feel complete. Is that a mistake?
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"Lee looked around, "They better not have used my stuff,' and he ran up the stairs to check his bag." That cracked me up!
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Mine! Part Two Chapter Thirty
Geemeedee commented on Cia's story chapter in Mine! Part Two Chapter Thirty
I really liked how Ritch was like, "fuck being scared. I have to take care of my man." He's claimed Park as much as Park claimed him.
