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What a wonderful chapter. So Ethan is a hybrid Alpha water Mage? Too cool. I really enjoyed his first shift (and second shift) with EVERY one there. And the long hug Watch out bad guys, you really don't want to mess with this pack.

Well, I'll be. You remembered!!!! Good Chapter. Gabe is coming out of the dark. Now, why does Ryle have to go in the hospital? Please, no more torturing your characters.

I like this. Can't wait to see how the meeting with dear ole Dad goes.

So, Trey's coming home on Friday after a HEAD injury? Even if it's resolving itself, that's still pretty damn quick! Oh well, be that as it may, that's good news. But I see tough times ahead...or not?

Annnnnnnnnd......we're off!!! Great first chapter. Carly needs a therapist and a couple thousand Valium I loved Mom and she's probably wondering how she raised such a shrew. She was switched at birth, right? Poor Jared probably realized he had feelings for Craig during the 'ordeal' and seeing him at the party was the straw that broke the camels back. You're about to take us on an emotional roller coaster, aren't you? Well, I'm buckled up and ready. (got a box of Puffs too!)

Oh WOW!!! Merrick's on the war path!! I agree with everything everyone else has said. Great chapter. More, more, more.

Great chapter The bad guys are going to be soooooo surprised when they 'invade' the pack lands.... Lions, tigers and bears, oh my! (sorry,Wizard of Oz ) Happy that the Alpha invited Alex and Nathan to join the pack. That kind of bothered me a few chapters back when I read that they weren't part of the pack. I like what Centaxhairysub said about Ethan maybe being an Egyptian Magi!! Maybe Darius is Ethan's protector or guide or familiar???? I was going to write poor Michael but then I'd rather call him an insane, deluded, rat-fink. How deep in the gene pool did the Alpha go to pull his genes out??? Can't wait till next Monday!

I honestly thought I had read this when it posted..... then I realized I hadn't!! Duh! Anyway, great chapter. I wondered about that Friday timeline too. Thought we had moved to an alternate universe where time runs longer or stands still or something! Tony has got to STOP hitting his head (I've mentioned this before, ) Those headaches are serious and concussions are nothing to sneeze at. Ask the NFL and Will Smith Ok. its the New Year.... do you have time to update? And just so you know.... I've been reading this story since day one, so keep going....at least to the honeymoon.

And what everyone else said!

I just got caught up and Awwwwww. Version 2.0 has begun!! I seriously don't remember being anywhere near that wise at 14!! Hell, I don't think I am now. The relationships in this story just keep getting stronger and stronger. I am so in love with this story...can it be "The Neverending Story"?

I'm kinda speechless!!! Michael is insane and doesn't even know it. That was brutal. Things are about to get intense. I bet we find out what Ethan is now, right?

Applause to you! The third alternative was an excellent idea and very fitting. I can't wait for the next story.

I like this. It's different and from the viewpoint of God!! Wow. Ok, I'm on this ride with you. When will you post Sin's story?

Glad Trey's alive. But the dreaded 4 letters, PTSD, will rear their ugly heads. Please let it be a mild case or maybe not at all? How bumpy are you going to make the rest of the ride? Hummmm?

HaHaHaHa! Great ending. Just like Jackson to deliver important information as a throwaway line. Please revisit them or let them be in someone else's Chaptmistres story. thanks.

Excellent ending to a great story. I'm so glad that Louis can now hear! Will there be a Book 3? Say yes, please??

YOU LEFT US WITH A CLIFFIE!!!!!!!! Mean, Renee, that's just plain mean!

I don't have anything else to add because all the other reviewers covered all the bases. But I love what you replied to Columbus Guy .... It would screw up the plot" LOL Indeed. So somewhere in the plot outline are the words..... "Michael dies"!!! Still loving this story

Oooooo..... that made my toes curl. The beginning was the perfect description of how my migraines are!!! WOW!! Great story. I'll remember this one for a long time

Poor Alpha and Luna. They raised a sadistic sociopath and everyone knows it. SMH. He needs to be 'put down'. And way to man up Tyler.

Wow. What a chapter! I'm going to agree with Irishboy and say that Ethan's a water elemental. So who's going to give him training on how to use his powers? He needed a family and I'm glad he's found one that excepts him and loves him. Exiling Micheal will just put off the challenge between him and Aiden. And Aiden's going to be the next Alpha, right? Are we going to see the interrogation of Michael.

"Promising Author"!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!! You absolutely deserve it. You've come a long way from when I used to ditto your comments on other stories!! I started reading this the minute you posted it, but halfway through my cold medicine decided I needed a nap. lol! I really wanted to be the first to review it. oh well. This was such a beautifully written chapter. Michael's first time and from his pov was excellent. At first, i thought "wait, what??? 51 chapters and I hadn't realized that he hadn't bottomed." I liked Chet's cameo. It was nice to know he and Aaron are good. I can't wait for the next 51 chapters (hint) I mean we need to read about the move to the stone house, Eyebrows (is that her final name?), the wedding and all the prep before it, the new baby and let's not forget MK 2.0!!!! Again, Congrats on the promising author status. And know that if you write it I WILL read it!!

Oh Wow!! Did anyone get hurt in the bombing? Are the MacGills behind all of this? And are there any doctors they can trust? They need to get this mating ritual done, asap. Really loving this story and the slow build.

I like Joel and applaud his dedication to his oath to uphold the law. I can't wait to find out how he meets his love interest.

A bear and a tiger as mates was different. I liked how Ethan and Aiden are really enjoying being with each other. Tyler apologizing to Aiden and telling him that Michael is planning something was great. But what's up with the water droplets?