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"Promising Author"!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!! You absolutely deserve it. You've come a long way from when I used to ditto your comments on other stories!! I started reading this the minute you posted it, but halfway through my cold medicine decided I needed a nap. lol! I really wanted to be the first to review it. oh well. This was such a beautifully written chapter. Michael's first time and from his pov was excellent. At first, i thought "wait, what??? 51 chapters and I hadn't realized that he hadn't bottomed." I liked Chet's cameo. It was nice to know he and Aaron are good. I can't wait for the next 51 chapters (hint) I mean we need to read about the move to the stone house, Eyebrows (is that her final name?), the wedding and all the prep before it, the new baby and let's not forget MK 2.0!!!! Again, Congrats on the promising author status. And know that if you write it I WILL read it!!

Oh Wow!! Did anyone get hurt in the bombing? Are the MacGills behind all of this? And are there any doctors they can trust? They need to get this mating ritual done, asap. Really loving this story and the slow build.

A bear and a tiger as mates was different. I liked how Ethan and Aiden are really enjoying being with each other. Tyler apologizing to Aiden and telling him that Michael is planning something was great. But what's up with the water droplets?

WHAT (WHO) IN THE WORLD IS ETHAN?? I mean his eyes glow?? and Aidan's does too now? wow, what a chapter. Michael needs some lashes or banishment. Let's not make him the next Alpha. OK?

What a way to end a chapter!! Who is Jin working with? And Why?? Can't wait for the next chapter.

50 chapters!! Seems like we just got started. LOL!! Congrats!! All the other reviewers, have said everything I feel about this chapter. I'm running out of adjectives to describe how much this chapter and the previous 49 have impressed me and made me feel all warm and fuzzy. Can N&B be any more adorable? They truly are following in the Unk's footsteps. Soooooooo the next story is Jeremy's path to love, right? You Rock, G!!

Wow!! That alpha was a sick piece of work, wasn't he? Great chapter!!

Winter is my least favorite time of year. Wish I was going down under with the boys!! Poor Dragon and King. Saw that train wreck coming a mile away. Can't wait to see what you've got planned for Winter (no alien abductions??? aw shucks )

NEW CHAPTER!!!!! YAY! And such a good one, too. Raeden will definitely have to take his time with Kim. But he has the patience. I love the apartment and Kim's wonderment at the idea of taking a hot shower. Wow. Makes you appreciate the little things in life that most folks take for granted in Zonesee and the world we live in. Thanks so much for updating. I've been checking on this story every week. I refused to give up on it!!

Sniff, sniff!! (where's the tissue?) That was such a lovely chapter. M & K are two of the best characters I've ever met. I agree with all the other reviewers. So I won't repeat it all. But, really, the advise they gave the boy's, the scar, the late nite chat....all of it was so perfect.

OMG!!!! It's Mike and Kendall 2.0

Scooby Snack!!! LOL. Too cute. So glad Avery's living a normal life ......as ScoobyDo I love these prompts.

Bravo!! Great story. Exciting and romantic. Loved Dim and Talin, they are so perfect together. Buy that man a dozen rose bushes, Dim. Thanks for writing this one.

Wow. That was quick. After all that build up to the showdown. It was like... wham, bam, cut the head off, get back on the plane and go home , we're done. Like I said quick.

I don't know how to tell you how much this story affected me. This is my idea of the Afterlife. Transitioning to the next life when this existence ends. John spoke some truths that I've believed for a while now. Not only is this story about truth, but hope also.

WOW. What a way to finally get closure. I'm glad Marcus got the chance to (sorry bout this) Let It Go. (now the songs stuck in my head. Great chapter.

GAWD I so hate Candy. I didn't like her in the beginning and now I really don't like her. Can you work it out so she doesn't have custody or even visitation rights? She tricked Michael and had no intention of telling him. That shows she isn't fit to be a parent or a pet owner!! I'm ready for the BIG fight. Let's float like a butterfly and sting (her) like a bee

You came through the back yard, into the kitchen and down the hall on this one. I didn't see it coming Wow!!!! Oh OOooo!! The "new" grandparents are gonna go NUTS!!!

Can I slap Jackson??? Please?? To be as old as he is, he is woefully ignorant. He's acting like a kid because he didn't get to do things the way he dreamed of and both of his mates are suffering. So he took his ball and went to his office to sulk. Geez, How CLUELESS can you make him? Arrrrrgh!! Vash is turning out to be a little powerhouse. I like that. Casey and Jackson weren't ever going to get together at the rate they were going. I'm loving this story....as I do all of your story's

And into every life a little rain must fall. In this chapter, its a tornado with baseball sized hailstones.!!! For some reason, I knew this was going to be a rough chapter and it was. I'm one of those people who doesn't like to read or see bad things happen to characters I like... like that tv show that just killed off a major character. Took all my will power to read this chapter.It was worth it, car wreck, shooting and an arrest!!! Plus Doc's two men. Whew. I kinda feel sorry for that police officer and his department. The BIG guns are about to open a can of whoop-ass on them. How dare they arrest our baby??? And then you left us hanging to go ride a bike Have fun and come back refreshed and with lots of ideas!

I love the communication between these two. They spent way too much time festering and living in their own heads. But they way they talk it all out and really listen is the key to a continuous and harmonious relationship. Chet and Aaron are going to have so much fun on Wednesday. I can't wait to read it. Excellent chapter, as usual.

First, ..... I'm speechless! You set the scene so perfectly. I was tensed right along with them. And the outcome was the BEST news ever!!!!!! Can we get a story about Dixon and his partner?

Wow. Quite a bit happened in this chapter. If all of that had happened to me in such a short frame of time, I'd have to take a looooooong bubble bath, have a stiff drink and sleep for 12 hours straight. Whew. and a new baby, too?!?! The scene with Doris the teacher was funny. Clueless, wasn't she? Can't wait for the next chapter. Excellent

I saw this coming when Casey first met Vash. And I'm okay with it. Your reasoning makes sense to me because I've always thought that Jackson and Casey needed a referee. But how old is Vash?

It's so cool to read a scene for another story from a different viewpoint. Thanks. I liked this chapter. So sweet that Cade introduced Louis to his friends and called him "mate". Nice touch.