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  1. Timothy M.

    Gifting Day

    Timothy M. commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in Gifting Day

    Jeez talk about overprotective pack, what a bunch of idiots. I'm glad Pax immediately did something nice for Elias and kept reassuring him he wouldn't be smothered. Tillykke med fødselsdagen fra Danmark
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    It's even more interesting to read all the speculations now I know the answers. Not saying any more
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    Bed Times

    Timothy M. commented on northie's story chapter in Bed Times

    Well, that was a big step forward. I don't mind Geoff needing things to progress slowly, but I wish he wouldn't back-slide. Tony can post on Stuart's wall: You're an idiot and a loser. I only kept the flowers because my boyfriend liked them. Public ridicule might turn his ex off.
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    Oh what fun it is to read all the speculations in comments, mine included, now that I know all the answers. Of course, I'd never spoil anything for new readers, but rest assured all your questions will be answered.
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    Should we also be careful about those words when commenting on stories which are not in the Mature category ? I don't think I've done worse than a few Bitches and the F word here and there, but I can't be sure.
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    This is such an intriguing reply, but now I know exactly what you mean. Kellar's wolf has finally emerged and he is ready to begin his journey and find his future. The most amazing future none of us could have predicted at this point in the story, no matter how we tried. It was a fantastic experience the first time and I can feel myself quiver with anticipation at the thought of embarking on the roller coaster once more. (I jumped in half way through the other night, but decided to go back to the beginning and start all over again.)
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    Coming back to this chapter after having read the whole story, it's interesting to see the important details which none of us commented on when you first posted the chapter. This is why it's so great to read a complex and well-planned story like this more than once.
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    Even having read the whole story and knowing what this is all about, the first chapter still packs a major punch. And i love the way Kellar is totally confused about the changes to his body, both before and after the shift.
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    Chapter 9

    Timothy M. commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 9

    I'm sure Granger can fuck some sense into Cavendish, though I do not blame him for preferring death to a future shackled in a sham marriage.
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    Chapter 52

    Timothy M. commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 52

    I'm not surprised Carullo wants to spend a couple of days away from JJ and the whole family drama.
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    I like writing reviews, but I find it hard to use the star system. Normally I just choose five stars, because I only review stories I really like. It seems to me most other reviewers also give five stars, but perhaps we should adopt your system, Myr. If I've done a blog review, I often use a slightly amended version as a story review. You can do the same @Puppilull Normally I add a link to the original review, but the link option has disappeared from the story review editor.
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    This is a story of strong friendships and of budding love which goes awry at times, due to insecurity, mistakes and the misplaced interference from other people. The main strength of Mann’s first story is the way he makes the characters come alive before our eyes and persuades us to like them in spite of all their faults and mistakes. I particularly admire the way he portrays the insecurities and fears of Little Man without once making him come across as whiny, feeble-minded or weak-willed. Clay doesn’t let his emotions rule his mind for long, even when they mess up his heart. My only objection is the same as @Freerider mentions. I won't elaborate, but you can read my Improve and Encourage Critique of Little Man for specific details and more praise of this story.
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    Yeah, links to stories do that, like this one: But can't you catch the upper left corner and then delete it ? (find the small cross by hovering the mouse over the upper left corner)
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    Oh Can't you select it in the Signature box and press delete ? How did you add it ? Was it a link ?
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    Go into your profile or press arrow next to your name in upper right corner. Choose Account Settings in the drop down Menu next to your name. Choose Signature in the list at the left of the page. Delete current picture / link and add new. Save. I hope it works.
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    The Red Piano

    Timothy M. commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in The Red Piano

    It's a relief Maggie caught on to it early. I'm wondering if Ryan is having problems with connecting to his emotions due to the ADD again, or he simply can't bear to think about Toby being in danger. Connor should talk to his therapist about how it makes him feel,
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    I'm surprised Maggie doesn't react to Toby not feeling well. It could be a sign of his leukemia returning.
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    Chapter 2

    Timothy M. commented on Hudson Bartholomew's story chapter in Chapter 2

    where's the explicit stuff ? Great chapter, but Erik is being a little dense here. Can't he tell Ryan is fishing for him to move to Toronto ?
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    Connor need to have a new strategy for hiding his money from his mother. Perhaps let Ryan take care of them?
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    Friends

    Timothy M. commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Friends

    Well, at least Connor had a nice weekend. Not happy about Toby being a smoker, but if Connor doesn't mind kissing an ashtray...
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    This flashback is a success, because three of the stories have been on the Top Stories list during the week.
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    Chapter 1

    Timothy M. commented on Bondwriter's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This was fun and I hope Corey became a more considerate man instead of the selfish thoughtless boy.
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    I'd only read Graeme's Georgie story out of all these, but some of the others are fun too.
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    I hope Cinder will remember to bring his loyal androids to the royal household.
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    Short Story

    Timothy M. commented on Jack Scribe's story chapter in Short Story

    I quite liked Peter Pan when I was a kid and I've even read the book (which is actually a play). This story was a nice take on what could happen when Peter finally decided to grow up.
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