Timothy M.
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Another favorite chapter with Brad finally letting Isidore know what he thinks of her betraying Will the same way she betrayed him. And Stef is even sexier when he pulls the cold and calculated business man trick on the errant family members. This whole Will buying a house episode is wonderful and a lot more constructive than when he trashed Brad and Robbie's things. Will is so efficient at teaching his family important lessons while learning from his own (and their) mistakes too.
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Serves Tony right, every last bit.
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JP is so sexy when he gets all stern. I loved the way he told Claire off and pointed out the errors and misbehavior of Marie, Claire and her mother. Of course, it enhanced my pleasure that Will my favorite volcano was held up as the example to follow, and he was shown to be the injured party. These chapters are among the best in the whole CAP series.
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I love JP's rational way of dealing with conflict and how he takes polite and appropriate action. Just as awesome if Stef's ability to see and explain why Will was so hurt and upset. To Will family loyalty and personal loyalty is everything, and he feels utterly betrayed and rejected in this situation. Him being unable to sleep until he apologizes is so telling.
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Whenever I read this chapter I'm so proud of Will and JJ, Will called the snobs on their lack of loyalty to the family and JJ backed him up. Awesome.
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It was fun reading this story all over again. I'll look forward to the sequel, which I hope will be about them helping the other hidden families to produce better shields and also involves Bart looking for wild talents to help them.
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Chapter 18 General Quarters!
Timothy M. commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 18 General Quarters!
Very clever cover up and apparently Kade and Abel II are an irresistible combination. -
Chapter 16 The All Important Meeting
Timothy M. commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 16 The All Important Meeting
Yuk, I'd happily forgotten about that awful incidence with Travis. btw you've written Dennis instead of Travis in this sentence: At that time we lived on Earth in California. Dennis was being overwhelmed with the thoughts of so many people and he couldn't sort them out or, effectively and selectively block them -
If Dennis is the one for Abel, will he be able to leave Starview? The club sequence was fun, and I liked how Abel kept an eye out for his cousins and that Dennis thought well of him for it. Every restaurant needs a signature feature to draw customers.
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Chapter 13 Arrival at Starview
Timothy M. commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 13 Arrival at Starview
The Kleins are one of the hidden families, right? Mus be since Abel outed himself to Dennis. Hmm, blond, good-looking and a telepath. Do we have a match? I'm surprised so many of the crew wanted to leave, but hopefully the upgrade will compensate. They should reward the loyal crew members handsomely. -
Chapter 12 In Transit, Part 2
Timothy M. commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 12 In Transit, Part 2
Provoking the Guardian by peeping was a bad idea. Hiding their psychic presence is a good plan. Let's hope it works or the crew may get really upset. -
The Guardian was a nasty shock. I'm not surprised they're worried about him. I agree about telling the cousins. It would be a good test of the idea to warn young people in the hidden clans.
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Not to worry, Lisa, I've hidden it quite well. But I knew you'd find it when I tagged your name. It's a great new feature here. Are you sure there's any of those stories you haven't read and commented on? We've made each other laugh a few times, haven't we? Especially on jwolf's Corbin story. I wish he'd post more chapters. I don't think the PR list is available right now, but yeah you're ahead by a HUGE margin. 2K or so, if I recall correctly. So no need to panic. But I'm sure authors will welcome your efforts.
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I'm glad you decided to tell Benny's story after this one. But Calix will always be my favorite after David the Snake.
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No, @Lisa heads the prolific reviewers list, far ahead of me. But I'm a proud number 2. Edit 2020: see new comment about this.
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Yes, not that many yet - only one page. Don't confuse them with comments (the reviews in the old version) - that list is 272 pages long !
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I've transferred rewritten versions of my blog reviews to the Complete stories. A list of my story reviews can be found via my activity feed. Nice feature.
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Chapter 20 Close cousins
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 20 Close cousins
Thank you, Arazon. Yes, Fiona is now part of Patrick's family, and I love your description of him building a new life. More cousins will arrive eventually, but you'll have to be patient. No, the customer isn't from any other story, and he's not an A.I. case. Usually, the team has to be there when the 'soul mates' first meet. You did read the two A.I. stories, right? There will be a third one posting soon, and actually another character from that story might be the right entity to deal with this guy. Did that make sense? -
Chapter 20 Close cousins
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 20 Close cousins
The chapter is with my editor, but I realized it can't be posted until after the Anthology is out. -
It was, but not intentional. Good catch !
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Weekly Wrap Up (Apr 9 - Apr 15)
Timothy M. commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Lots of interesting stuff going on. Good thing I'm on holiday so I have time to spend here. -
Aaargghh you can't leave us hanging here. My guess is he set the bastard on fire. Actually, I hope he did. The evil fucker deserves it. Oh well, at least we know Bobby and Johnny get out of there alive, or you may have found me and Gary hunting you down with pitchforks. I can't believe Bobby didn't break the chain for the collar on his neck before he started on his legs.
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I'm mainly wondering what Bailey's mother and David the slick lawyer has come up with to cheat him out of his inheritance. I refuse to feel sorry for Bailey who is a fool for rejecting all the offers of help, even Justin's. I realize the boy has massive trust issues and is on the road to a complete mental breakdown, but that might be the best thing to happen in order to get him out of the mess he's in.
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Paintball is fun and i'm glad for Luke's uncle it's a success. I'm pleased Jackson stood up to Cindy, she really is a stupid bitch. Oh and Derek is an idiot, he needs to think about his behavior. Why is Jackson scared about Ally finding out? Is it because he thinks she'll be hurt? That would be kind of him, and he's probably right.
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Chapter 10 The New Year
Timothy M. commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 10 The New Year
Good idea to get Steve and Bill to do some visual improvement of the ship's living quarters. I also liked the shuttle refit part, it was realistic and the suggestion twist was clever.
