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  1. Timothy M.

    The Homecoming

    Timothy M. commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in The Homecoming

    Arrgh, what a time to be out of likes. I'll be back to read this wonderful chapter again. I'm so glad they are in a good place with their relationship, and about them living together. Thanks for returning to this story, Thorn.
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    Thank you, dragon, I'm glad you think the chapter shows the developing relationship between Patrick and Peter. It's one of the things i want to achieve with this story. What about the neighbor?
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    Awww, thank you, Lisa. If you do visit the story discussion topic, be prepared for some heated posting.
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    Aftermath

    Timothy M. commented on Dabeagle's story chapter in Aftermath

    Bell and Corbin's mum are hilarious. Corbin may be a bit slow, but at least he does his best to work out what to do. I cannot believe that Jeff Jerry guy did not get a suspension, that was sexual assault, and the coach should have done something. for continuing this story. Hope we'll get more some day.
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    Chapter 26

    Timothy M. commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 26

    Curtis and Joshua ! that is just priceless Simply awesome. Joshua can admire the strong guy, and Curtis actually paid him a genuine compliment. They should get on well, and this will solve any problems with Shade and Casey feeling jealous.
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    Thank you, Lit, I'm glad you enjoyed both the teasing and the Michael parts. Patrick is definitely doing his best to create relations of everyone in his new family. I'm glad everyone feels happy about the teasing. As for Peter getting sweet revenge ?
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    Thank you, CG, I'm not surprised you pay attention to the details and like what they show, since you're a Master of evocative details yourself. Don't worry, the heirloom china will be unpacked eventually and create new memories. Patrick's parents would definitely approve of everything. Dinner with their new friends will be up next, but I don't think we'll get all the way to Monday. Patrick has a plan, you know...
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    Thanks, Tim, I agree. Patrick is becoming the man he is meant to be together with Peter. It's not only boxes that were locked away after his parents' death. I'm glad you felt the chapter had pace, I don't want the story to progress too slowly, but on the other hand there are so many aspects I want to cover.
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    If you knew the time I have spent trying to work out the meaning of various English three-letter abbreviations and coming up with wrong definitions. Thank you so much for the beautiful description of what this chapter showed you. I love the image of them and their lives becoming filled with love and happiness.
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    Thank you, Drew, you always make me smile and laugh with your reviews. I'm delighted you thought those intimate scenes were fun. You're right about Patrick being experienced with his own body and limits. He knows what he wants and he's not afraid to go for it. I'm sure they'll both enjoy it. Michael is definitely the 'Aww, cute' ingredient in the story, so I'm trying not to overuse it. Him calling Patrick Papa made the next step inevitable, yet it popped up quite unplanned at that moment in the story.
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    Thanks, Gary, I'm glad the chapter felt good to you. I'm not surprised the fruit scene was your favorite, Idid think of you while writing it. Patrick has the advantage of being able to push the teasing right to the limit. Peter may be a little grumpy but he'll soon realize the advantages.
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    LOL, Aditus, the discussion about the story and who was to blame got so intense I worried about losing several GA friends. And I'm not sure I'll ever read RRS again without getting the same gut-wrenching feelings. I'm glad you liked the review in spite of that.
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    LOL, is this punishment for posting so late you couldn't review first? I would have said there was plenty left which no one has commented on yet, but I guess those were 'boring' details? Glad you enjoyed it.
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    Patrick nipped into their bedroom to get the key for the other room. He unlocked the door and opened it gently, so as not to disturb the dust he expected to have accumulated in three years of no use. There was a large table in the middle of the room; it had been the working space for him and his father when they made cards together. Alongside one wall there were shelves and in front of them stood the cardboard boxes which held the belongings of his parents. Otherwise the room was empty. There we
  15. Timothy M.
    Tillykke med fødselsdagen Careful waving of Danish birthday flags just in case of http://satwcomic.com/coffee-thief or you may prefer http://satwcomic.com/nordic-cuisine
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    Uh, oh just as I was thinking they migth have a chance everything goes pear-shaped. Several times in fact. I hope Jared has managed to get hold of that army !
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    Torn in Two

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Torn in Two

    I love this story and particularly the ending. Gramps kep trying to provoke Scott to take a stand and tell him the truth. When that didn't wok he called in the cavalry in the shape of Scott's mum. I'm glad Scott finally made the right decision. The families of those two boys know what is important.
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    Show Time!

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Show Time!

    I think Elaine may be the best actor of the lot. And her husband was a clever Valentine. I'm sure Craig wil forgive them... eventually.
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    Story

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Story

    The recent fire in Canada inspired me to read this again. It's a great story but I always feel sad at the end about never knowing Brian's future. I want to see him become friends with Mike and Sharon, gain confidence to come out to his friends, and find a partner to ease his loneliness. How about we make a deal? If you expand on this, I'll revisit my Secret Santa story.
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    Chapter 17

    Timothy M. commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 17

    I was reading the chapter again to work out whether the pain was Lord Ashton tackling Kye. You do realize that it would be almost impossible for Richard to hit a fleeing target in the dim light with only a pistol? Lucky shot wouldn't begin to cover it. Also if Kye was hit by a bullet between his shoulder blades that implies a direct and lethal hit of his spine. I very much doubt you intend to kill Kye, but at least it would be a fast way to go. Other than running directly at one of the hiding marksmen and thus obscuring his aim, Kye did well on distracting Richard with noise and his other actions. At least he kept his mind on their goal, while Lord Ashton was distracted by Kye's thinness.
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    Chapter 6

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 6

    The interaction between Isaac and the players was certainly interesting, and he was clever to use Neil as a sounding board. I like Isaac's attitude about Dave, and I wonder if Charlie's meeting next week is due to someone else realizing he is the key to Dave. Not to the bad stuff but to what Dave needs in order to become a successful AFL player. I think his instinct to keep it quiet was spot on. Kevin is fast becoming one of my favorite characters, maybe cause I'm bi myself. He seems on the path to becoming AFL's first openly bi player - since I assume you don't have any of those either? It won't be the same as a gay player like Jim, but it's a step in the right direction. Though Kevin may come to realize he'll have as hard a time defending his orientation as a gay guy would. Anyway, I certainly approve of his honesty with Warwick.
  22. Timothy M.
    Thank you, my friend, I'm glad this chapter spoke to you. And yes, their spiritual connection and closeness was even more important than the physical act, as satisfying as it was. Patrick could probably have had plenty of sex before he met Peter if he had been able to ignore his need for the special touch only love would give. But it was impossible, and the reward was a mind-blowing first time. We seem to like the same kind of rings.
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    Tillykke ! It'll be great to see you in dark red from now on. Ooop, sorry, edited to get the color right
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    My thoughts exactly. Tiffany disagreed with Jeanine about the way she acted with JJ and Will and I think it contributed to their break-up. She's tough and clever and used to deal with egocentric skaters. Bratty teens will be a walk in the park - but she'll probably need Wade's help to deal with Elizaeth Danfield. JJ never interested me much, but he does add drama to CAP, and is useful for the story line in many ways. I was totally on his side regarding the noisy kids episode.
  25. Timothy M.
    I loved how Kellar wrapped up his old life with calm deliberation. His body changed from child to adult and the shift to wolf accelerated the process. His whole existence has indeed changed and shifted into another gear. One where he'll be alone but away from pretense, responsible for himself but searching for answers, a clever self-reliant teen but not yet the man and shifter he can become. For that he needs to find others of his kind and your story description promises just that. Bring it on, we're eagerly waiting to see where Kellar's journey will take him.
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