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    Chapter 8

    Timothy M. commented on Uplifted Spirit's story chapter in Chapter 8

    I'm glad to see things are finally going right for Will. Hopefully, Frank's plan will do the trick for his last year in school. It's better to be alive than dead right about what you do in these cases, even if it's sad.
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    I like how you bring this aspect back up. To me Will's struggles to be in charge of his own life and his decision to apply for emancipation was actually my favorite parts of Paternity and the reason this is my favorite of Mark's CAP stories. Jeanine's way of tackling Will was as wrong as Brad's but of course she did it more a part of her power struggle with Brad than out of any mothering instincts towards Will. I noted he had a great relationship with Tiffany, so I'm not worried about her abilities to tackle bratty teens.
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    Chapter 10

    Timothy M. commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 10

    My favorite part was when Jackson realized Luke didn't need him or want him as a friend the way he is now. Priceless mortification Serves him right.
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    Early March

    Timothy M. commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Early March

    Gary seems to be working hard to improve and since being friendly and forgiving is improving Toph's spirit and satisfaction with his life, I must conclude his relationship (or whatever) with Gary is beneficial. Time will tell whether Gary is sincere in his comments about Toph's mother.
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    Tillykke med fødselsdagen Happy waving of Danish birthday flags
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    Born to Run

    Timothy M. commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Born to Run

    Bernardo may have diplomatic imunity but he can still be declared persona non grata in the US. With the connections CJ's dad have I'll not be surprised if that happens. Another revenge could be to tip off Bernardo's wife and family about his nasty habit of drugging and fucking guys, including teen boys. She might cut off his dick or get her brothers to do it. I'm sure you'll come up with something appropriate.
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    Good point, LL (and I know you meant to say Eric wasn't betraying). He, Rob and Jazz might be wrong, but at least Nelson should stop saying Trevor only took him to the prom to make a statement. It hurt Trevor every time, even after he was over his crush. Don't worry, Eric will make up his own mind as always. He just need to be prodded to do so. Which prom are we talking about?
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    they're not offending me, just making me drool. and I don't want to get my friends in trouble, they posted them to please me.
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    Oops, I think I need to go through my story topics and ask people to remove a few pics.
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    Chapter 3

    Timothy M. commented on LitLover's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Famous last words have a tendency to come back and bite your ass. As long as Corey lumps Jason with Ian (his dad) as a cronic cheater, he'll never be able to see the man Jason has become. I believe people can change if they want to, and there is a difference between a young stupid guy who makes a huge mistake and pays the price and an older married man who cannot even see he's doing anything wrong and hurting his family. My main surprise in this chapter was the bachelor party happening the night before the wedding. I thought that didn't happen anymore, since few brides with minds of their own accepts having a hung-over bridegroom. But perhaps it's Thursday, not Friday? I'm delighted Pierre has a great partner and is happy. But I wish Corey had told Zach to stay away completely.
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    Well, you would know all about stories with layers and deeply kept secrets, right? As bad as Patrick's relatives are, I'm not sure they are worse than David's or Toph's Keep up the hope for Fiona - and Patrick's new family too. The three members he's met so far are pretty awesome.
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    I'm you liked the intersaction between Michael and Patrick, they do indeed seem to connect in spite of language barriers. Michael has good instincts for love and kind people. LOL such a polite word 'interesting' - but it's better than boring. I'm glad you agree with his parents, and Patrick certainly kept up the 'tradition' but maybe he could have luck with a cousin or two?
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    I hope you're right, it would be nice for Patrick to have at least one cousin worth knowing. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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    I thought you would appreciate some more Michael time. You have a good point about the hospital, there might be some nurses or doctors who recall Patrick's mum. Staying clear of his relatives is definitely a good idea, perhaps with one or two exceptions. I'm delighted you like Mosta, she's becoming a favorite of mine too.
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    The Danish expression 'sno rundt om sin lillefinger' comes to mind in relation to Michael and Patrick - I guess it's the same in English: wind around your little finger. Yeah, Patrick lost (most of) his caring family, but has gained a lovely new one. Don't be upset about having difficulties with pronouncing Danish, it's fiendishly difficult.
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    Triple nice must mean you liked it, in spite of the not so nice family parts. I guess I'm not surprised you can relate to cutting off relatives who are not worth wasting your time on.
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    Yep, I cannot gainsay you, he really had very little luck in the family department apart from his parents - and his new family of course. But at least he won't be duped, as you point out. As for Fiona I love that Peter and Michael has gotten a place in your heart. Don't worry about the hospital, all will be well, I think. Moster Grethe does indeed have the perfect grandmotherly feel combined with a good dose of common sense and humor.
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    I'm glad you found the flash-back about Patrick's relatives interesting. There will be more later, and Fiona will become a part of the story soon. Michael's main role does include plenty of cute stuff and I promise there will be as little as possible about the nasty hospital stuff. Most of all I'm pleased you like Mosta and her prominent role as supportive and motherly. Luckily, she has several people to use her energy on, and she's quite independent emotionally and mentally, or it might get tiring for Peter and Patrick - or my readers.
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    Hi CG, so nice to have your reviews to look forward to. Yeah, dream away, I like the Rob / Trevor combination as well, but if Rob does try something on the wild side, I'm not sure it will include kissing. The Prom is at least a month away, so plenty of time for dates. You know how it is when the story doesn't progress timewise. I may have to do some unprompted longer chapters to leap ahead.
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    Very astute, my dear Swedish friend. Nelson may feel somewhat awkward, but at least he won't wound Trevor unintentionally any more. I'll do my best to come up with a great third date - well, hopefully Nelson will tell me.
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    That's a very good description, Gary, I like it. Yeah, the idea of a Rob / Trevor Prom 'date' is so tempting and fun I have difficulties leaving it alone. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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    One track mind, eh John? And you know where Rob is - he's running around in your story.
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    You're right, Drew, Nelson seems to have bad gaydar and a huge blind spot for guys crushing on him. However, this won't matter now he has found Eric. Eric does have some Perry confidence and Nelson being his boyfriend gives it a huge boost. Perhaps this will clinch the deal about running for GSA president.
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    LOL, remember they go to different proms, and I think Nelson would be somewhat embarassed after this conversation. But most readers seem to be in favor of Rob and Trevor going to the Prom together.
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    Or perhaps Chris thought Colt leaving the party was a snub, or he was embarrassed about choosing the beer pong game over Colt? Will Chris meet Colt together with Bradley?
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