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Timothy M.

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  1. Well, it's not the first time that the comic relief characters are more popular than the main ones. Just think about Shakespeare's Much Ado About Nothing (not that I'm comparing my story to his). I always liked the 'I'm an ass' guard best. Feel free to start a TEAM Jasper, and I'll try to give him more time. Triple date, hmmmm...
  2. “That is the last time I am telling you anything!” Tina snubbed the two other girls, who were dragging her away from us. They were clearly embarrassed by the spectacle of their friend cooing over us and saying “I just knew it!” I imagined all of us thought ‘yeah, right’ to her outburst since it was highly unbelievable that Gossip Girl would pass up on a chance to share the interesting tidbits she loved to ferret out. I was never more grateful for the ability of my best friend to face any kind
  3. Timothy M.

    Day Two

    Definitely very mature and hot, very intense. I liked the toy part, but I'm not so keen on the oral-after-anal stuff. We're still a bit adrift on the past and future, but I guess they are very much in the present, and we should accept that.
  4. Delightful - and of course they shouldn't eat the peacock ! I'm sure Kayden would love to get some decorations for his clothes made with shed feathers from the peacock - or even just a tail feather to play with.
  5. Timothy M.

    Chapter 1

    Clem needs to get out of there and find what he wants - or if he is lucky someone will arrive who is what he likes (as in that Song book story of yours). Only problem is I think Nathan would object - and violently thus the need to leave.
  6. I'm delighted to hear that since my intention is to keep this story happy and relaxed. I'm smiling as I write, and even more when I read the reviews.
  7. No - and I did warn you in the chapter note. Although, it's not much shorter than the initial chapters.Yeah, Rob and Jasper might even become good friends over this. Not saying anything about Rob's future, you'll have to stay tuned. Rob and Eric's dad may feature in the next chapter...
  8. Oh yes, Eric is not letting go of his dream guy anytime soon.Glad you spotted one of those hints I like to add (as per request of Team Rob). I know it was short but the compensation will be another chapter soon.
  9. I'm glad somebody is happy with Rob's antics.
  10. Sorry Irri, I don't think he will. Rob is just too happy for his brother to keep quiet. Hopefully, Eric will get used to it.
  11. When did you ever know a Gossip Girl keep such a nice tidbit secret? But the matter is moot by now.
  12. Dear GA staff and members I think we should celebrate and congratulate each other that GA has reached the milestone of 900 authors. I also think it's cool that one in twenty members is an author. . The next important ones will be 100 million words of wonderful stories and 100,000 reviews to encourage our hardworking writers. to all the people working on the site for helping make this a happy and well functioning community. to all our authors for providing hours of entertainment. to all the members for reading, liking, rating, reviewing, and posting about stories.
  13. “Here we go again!” Eric and Nelson flew apart, their lips tingling from the long and tender kiss they had become lost in. Jasper was shaking his head at the couple. “Don’t you guys ever stop? Have you been making out in the kitchen since I left you more than two hours ago?” Eric wasn’t sure who was blushing the most of him and Nelson, but when Jasper started laughing, they soon joined in. “You should see your faces, too bad I didn’t get a pic. It would have been the hit of the year at sc
  14. Tillykke med fødselsdagen from your slightly mad Danish fan
  15. Timothy M.

    Prompt 372

    I liked the coffee shop trick, but the flu thing was weird. Nobody who is young and healthy dies from flu - and in less than 24 hours. Now if you had said meningitis that would have made a lot more sense. I'll just pretend you did, and Jack really saved his life and he now needs a long convalescens period where Jack can take good care of him. Should do the trick, lol.
  16. I enjoyed Tears of the Neko, especially the expanded version. The feline traits were brilliantly done and fun. I look forward to a sequel. Multiple POV works well for you, so don't worry about not doing any 1st person POV.
  17. Timothy M.

    Day One

    Well, that was certainly hot and sensually described, both the fantasy and the real thing. But there are plenty of unanswered questions, so hopefully we'll get more flashback-like explanations in the next chapter.
  18. What a wonderful review to wake up to ! I can't believe I've written 11 chapters either, but I guess most of them are short and sweet (this was unusually long). Drawing it out, I suppose I am, but I have to keep reminding myself they are teenager and have only just become a couple. Even if they do want to make up for time wasted - and some people are spurring them on
  19. Timothy M.

    Chapter 16

    Yes, more football stuff ! Thanks fot that. I have a couple of questions about the scoring, but I'll take those over to the forum. I loved how Peter stood up to Alan about the way he spoke of Jim. I wonder if the AFL team might consider taking Jim as well - although now I can't remember if they are the same team where the owner read the VFL team the riot act on tolerance. The team the Leopards played right after Jim came out. Interesting that Ollie and Helena may be a more serious couple than she implied to Neil. I'm happy for them if that's so. I hope Paul finds someone too, I like him a lot (shame he isn't gay). Ty and Karen meeting Neil's parents is a good idea, even if I worry about Ty's temper when faced with another abusive father. But it should make Ty a firm defender of Neil, who really does do a lot better now that he has friends. The small scene with his mom was very telling. Liam and the other bullies have a lot to apologize for.
  20. Well, if you have to leave us hanging at least it was with some delightful images. So Jonah is versatile, and I'm hoping Ren will be too, at least for the man he loves. Maybe he can bottom from the top, so to speak? Eric had better not be the reason Jonah got upset with Ren and ran away, or the jerk may have a crowd of readers chasing him with intent. But I'm guessing Ren's obsessive and controlling ways are at fault.
  21. LOL, why am I not surprised at this comment?however, see the forum for further discussion
  22. now you know why I was biting my tongue over your last review where you looked forward to them being all alone.It's all Jasper's fault - AC told me the phone call was like 'the ghost of Jasper' which made me laugh so much. But I'm glad you thought it was romantic after all, and they did manage to sort some important things out. and Eric won't forget about the hair trick
  23. I know, I'm so bad *evil snicker*the part about Rob had me nodding my head at first, but on the other hand: Eric seems to be going happily down that road without anyone pushing him. And I think Rob might be more likely to burst in on them rather than prevent anyone else from finding out.
  24. Unless Stef and Brad come to their senses before Thanksgiving, they will have the unpleasant experience of facing the contempt and censure of the WWJ trio of anti-war-profit campaigners. serves them right Edit to quote Mark: Yes, I saw your comment on Gary's ch 24 review and it immediately struck me as a core matter. Stef is effectively saying that making a profit is more important to him than his husband's peace of mind. It frightens me to think what this could lead to. I've always liked JP and Stef as a couple, and I would hate to see them split up over this.
  25. Timothy M.

    Chapter 25

    They’re running away and pouting It even made JP want to laugh. But I hope Stef comes to his senses soon. He's hurting JP.
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