Timothy M.
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Chapter 13 – Trials, Tribulations, and Overwhelming Joy
Timothy M. commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 13 – Trials, Tribulations, and Overwhelming Joy
I liked the story, but I wish you had written about what happened in their school. Did they come out as boyfriends or was Tony still too scared to do this ? I suppose at least Jordan was accepted since he kept on with his sports, but it still seems stange that you ignore this issue completely. -
Read all the chapeters in one sitting yesterday (and I should have been doing some work instead), and I'm totally hooked. You are a great writer, making your characters very believable and likeable. I especially like how our understanding of Jenny suddenly changed when they became friends rather than dating. I hope Corey and Clinton can help each other with the issues facing them from their surroundings. At least Clinton's parents seem sensible and kind. PS and I have a feeling I know what Clinton's surprise is, but I don't want to spoil anything, so I'll just give the intials R B and comment again if it turns out I was right.
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Great story so far (I've read the first 19 chapters), but something caught my attention in the last chapter with the move, and I came back here to check. And in the very first paragraph I found the same contradiction, which slipped my attention when I first read this. You say (here and in ch 19) that he has had the same room for almost 18 years, but at the same time you say here that they moved to the house after his mother started working in the store (9 years earlier), plus he has memories of their earlier house and the surroundings and had friends where he lived before. I know it's a minor thing, but it still annoys me when the rest of the story is so very realistic and captivating. Can't wait to read more and hope it ends well.
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Absolutely fascination and fabulous - but I'm so pissed that you didn't write that extra chapter about their weekend and how the relatonship went from there. And I also want to hear more about Glen and Jer, I liked them a lot. How about some chapters from other POW, like Jer's ? I wish I could work out how how I favorite authors here on GA, you'd definitely be on my list. And I like your writer's name too :-)
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Good solution, but I would have liked more details ;-) You are a very good writer and I'm sure it would have been both hot and delightful.
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The faster Aaron gets out of his relationship with Ben and back to Mark the better. But I guess he needs to be worked over mentally first, so that he is no longer the uptight, thoughtless prick, otherwise it would be bad for both of them. Hope you manage to take up the story again sometime, I really liked the Buy me a drink story. Almost in spite of myself - but the humor and quality of your writing actually made me enjoy the clueless drama provided by Aaron and the cast.
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To Fanfiction or not Fanfiction: That is the question
Timothy M. replied to Lily Velden's topic in The Lounge
I like all kinds of fanfiction, for all of the reasons mentioned above. And I've seen some nice examples on this site already. But there is one thing I sometimes wonder about. Does it make a difference whether the author of the original work is against fanfiction based on his or her world ? I've read that some authors dislike the idea, others approve or just accept fanfiction as flattery. Should we respect their feelings or just say tough luck if the primary author hates fanfiction based on their story ? -
Chapter 8: Frustration
Timothy M. commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 8: Frustration
I very much like their banter, fun as well as romantic. BUT not the best way to keep their relationship secret. Just takes one person to overhear and it's out. Oh well never mind, the story is great. -
Chapter 5: Shot Across the Goal
Timothy M. commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 5: Shot Across the Goal
Just read the news about Robbie Rogers who stopped his football career and then came out. Some of the comments he has made about how impossible it is to be gay and play soccer at the same time just shows that this story is spot on. So sad. Great story in so many ways, can't wait to see how it ends. My only objection (to this chapter) is that you let them kiss in the car outside Peter's apartment. Way too risky even if it's away from campus and other parts of town frequented by people who know Jason. Kissing in any public place is not being careful. -
I like all your Cathera tales, but this one is my favorite. Especially the interaction in the cafe at the start of the story, and later on in the coffee shop. I just laughed at the instant image I got of Calix's delighted and surprised face when Jerret asked if he wanted a kiss. It's easy to imagine them as business partners as well a s mates, playful and intense in both love and work. Wouldn't mind a sequel at some point.
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Very nice and compelling - and impressively authentic on the Christmas tree farm setting - though you forgot the 'formal Noble fir' in the list of trees I would certainly like to read a sequel to this story, I have the feeling it would (also) be totally hot !
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That was bloody HOT ! Wouldn't mind reading more stories about these two guys.
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Very intense and gut wrenching. Please don't leave them like that, they deserve a happy ending.
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Very sweet love story and I'm glad Justin was not stupid enough to reject love. But I also understood his reasons for hesitating and respected both of them for being honest and careful with each other. I had to look up the Reptilicus reference, I didn't know about this Danish film. Made me laugh.
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Your Riding Lessons series are great and I enjoy learning about horses and riding. But I wish you'd asked someone with medical knowledge about the convulsions bit. It's a myth that you have to stick something in the mouth of people who is having an epileptic fit. In fact you are more likely to do damage to their teeth and tongue that they would do themselves. You're helping perpetuating this mistake, and I wish you'd let the nurse on the phone tell them NOT to do something stupid like that. But otherwise I'm hooked on this story and the characters.
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I had to read this story several times in order to really appreciate it. But somehow it gradually got under my skin, and even now - though I know it has a happy ending - reading the part with the break-up makes my gut clench. Impressive in all its understated, tense, realistic romance. In addition, the idea that Marcus calls 'his biggest lie' is actually one of the things I respect about him. Even if in the end he does become a threat to Trevor's marriage, he didn't set out to do this. And so I feel that he is being too harsh in judging himself, even if I can understand why he feels bad about the affair.
