Timothy M.

Damn you just had to take the torment of Benny to another level, leaving us all in the same sort of flabbergasted shock as the poor man. I'm hoping the next chapter will be from Benny's POV, I'd love to ge a peek into his thoughts and feelings during the same day and night and morning. But it's great to see that Yuri is actually damaged in a way that does not preclude them from being together, and Benny needs to stop having all these preconceived notions about how to treat him and just ask open questions.

Awww, that's so cute. He has to jerk off for the first time in centuries because he's too scared to tell Jem how he feels and ask his pet to fuck him senseless. And having Jem refuse to be rejected was the funniest confrontation ever. I like this spunky human more and more, and he certainly is the perfect match for a temperamental snake demon. Kiaza's house mates seem to be very careful not to upset him while at the same time being rather determined to point out that they know what is going on and that Kiaza is not going to get away with pretending otherwise. And I have the feeling that once the situation has settled they'll have a lot of fun watching Jem wrap the sneaky shape shifter around his little finger and spank him when he is being naughty. And so are we

I forgot about Matt's shrink, but it was good to see him make the same point: Grow up and get a stable life for you own sake, and the extra reward is that it might make Wade want you back. Why do people conclude that Will has been meddling in Brad's love life just from those few random sentences ? Brad may suspect it just for that moment because he is feeling sensitive, but I bet Will has just been teasing Ben. He's flirting with him and trying to trip him up with remarks about his date with Brad and so on. Will cares about his dad and wants him to be happy, but he doesn't try to interfere or push guys at him. But Brad will have fun teasing Will about it nonetheless

Don't know how I missed this story - but at least it was complete when I read it. Such skillful use of the settting and the climbing to illustrate the relationship between the two guys, impressive. And I understood why Seth got insecure, but at the same time I could relate to Aaron's point of view about bi men having this kind of problem. I think one of the best parts was the fact that they didn't spend days worrying in silence, but actually tackled the issue almost immediately. Aaron didn't dismiss Seth's feelings as silly, and Seth trusted that his boyfriend was sincere. All of this tells me that they will make it as a long term couple. Wouldn't mind revisiting them in a cosier setting

Oh right, now I don't know whether to feel proud or stupid over my last comment about how Corey should come out to his friends. Since he just did AND said that he was going to out himself to Cj. So I guess I can't call him a coward anymore Hopefully his friends will have his back and pound Cj into the dust if he tries anything. But the real thriller is how Clinton will react. Hopefully his parents will comment in a way that shows their tolerance and give him the courage to come out to them. And tell them that Corey is his boyfriend (more or less).

No !? WTF Kiaza, are you out of your scaly mind ? Here's this clever, devoted guy, who went through hell (literally) to find you, and you tell him No. There had better be another explanation than rejection for this, or else I hope Kiorl spanks your hot little butt. Which might be hot too Well, I guess it is embarrassing to have all your house mates witnessing that moment where you're confronted with the fact that someone is in love with you and you might just feel the same way too. Especially after denying forever that it would happen Oh and then there's the small matter of what it takes for Jem to be able to stay. I'm not sure I'd fancy having that conversation with the Prince of Hell no matter the rewards: "Oh hi Nassau. Ehm yeah well sorry about that imitating your dead lover stunt and running away for hundred years. Oh and by the way this is the human who loves me, and woud you mind making him immortal, so we can spend the rest of our lives together ?" Bet that little request will go over real easy with the enraged Prince - NOT Brilliant chapter, Jem is great. And I'm so happy everyone adopted the nickname. Which I mainly used because I can't spell Jeremiah without looking it up

It took me a long time to work up the courage to read this. But I have to say that it was worth it. In fact it explained one of the great mysteries of Nemesis: why Zöe would ever date Craig ? If he was really bad, she'd never have been attracted to him. But he isn't evil, even if he did some extremely repulsive things. Which he'll pay for the rest of his life (as I have the feeling he'll never make it out of prison or maybe only just before he does himself in). And I'm not saying there is any excuse for what he did and especially not to Josh, who had no part in the original mess which shaped Craig. Just that suddenly things make sense. He reminds me of the bad guy in the book Lolita, who is always held up as the selfish pedophile of classical literature. Which he is, but in the book his background history is a tragic love story from his early teens. The girl he loves dies, and they were prevented from consumating their love on the moonlit beach by two old men who happen past and casually drop a few nasty comments. So he was never able to move on from loving young girls. Both of them needed help but were too scared and stupid and macho to get it, and the bad stuff grew to consume them and the poor people who came in touch with them. But to me that is less evil and scary than ruthless guys (including psycopats) who are totally devoid of emphatic feelings for others. You are very brave to write this story and it shows what a clever and versatile author you are, that you can create even those few moments of feeling sorry for Craig in between all the disgust we have for his actions. I salute you Thorn.

I'm actually beginning to like Stuart. I can totally relate to the 'speak before you think and put your foot in your mouth' issue. And just the fact that Stuart was actually worrying about anyone but himself was nice. Even if you can argue that he did it because he's clever enough to see that the band needs Nick to function, so it's important that Nick is happy and functioning, Stuart still made an effort to ensure that Dave - the most important thing in Nick's life - took his responsibility seriously. Ohh and cute with the matchmaking with Zöe and Javelin. Wonder if the Oxymorons get to play at the next police ball Happy to have you back Thorn, and I hope spring and more sun will cheer you up too.

You know what they say: be careful what you wish for... I bet Benny has wished for Yuri to be back in his bed for more than a year, and now that he is, it's almost a worse torture than sleeping alone. Sooo cute and sooo heart wrenching. Awesome

Wade must be hurting so much inside from his decision to cut his ties to Matt, and I bet that's why he is acting the way he is. But I think he is right to keep Matt at a distance right now. It's too soon - or at least we need more confirmation that Matt is moving in the right direction. I'm glad that Matt seems to be getting his shit together, and I feel sorry for him. The pain of losing Wade was just as bad as I feared, even if it was mainly his own fault. It will be interesting to see if Matt can mature enough in the next four years to get rid of the ghost of Robbie's relationship behavior that has Wade freaking. Matt may not chose to do it, from his wounded pride at being rejected by Wade. If so Wade still made the corrct choice. But I think Matt will find that JP and Stef would counsel him in the same direction for his own sake. And the reward would be another chance with Wade - who would be much more impressed with a Matt who grew up by himself and not to please his partner. Can't understand the worry about Matt as chaperone for Will and Zach. After all it's just a ploy to keep Zach's parents satisfied. I hope Matt is too clever to really try to mess with Will. Hpefully, he'll just go along for the ride, let the young couple have fun and time to bond, and fuck his way through Europe. And if Matt can get Will to accept him as a brother, that would ultimately help with Wade too. (I'm not saying Matt was thinking that when he offered, he's not that calculating, just showing the big heart below the bull shit).

Glad to see that Greg is not the bastard lots of people thought he was. I always felt there was more to him than just a 'user' even if he did behave badly the last time. But he's not the one for Corey, Clinton is - though it may never come to be, with all the small town issues. Clinton is no more a wuss than Corey is - and in a way I think Clinton would have been much more likely to oppose Cj if he wasn't gay and in love with Corey. But knowing that Cj is such a bastard who will turn on him at once is a lot more scary when you actually DO have a secret to protect. At least Corey's friends are nice persons - but he is still scared about their reactions. So until he has come out to them, he can just stop whining about Clinton. Even more important, Clinton needs to tell his parents, and Corey should talk to his mom. Then they should start make their own group with Jenny and the other sensible girls and gradually create an alternative to Cj's clique.

Sorry I haven't left a review before, though I'm really keen on this story. I read the short version and it was good but left me yearning for more. This version is so much better with all the small details that makes it fun and even more interesting. You have a special style - apart from writing really well - and I ususally enjoy your stories a lot. Don't be in a hurry to end it, especially not after the visitors start coming through That was one of my main complaints about the short version, that it ended just when things got really hot.

Damn now you're yanking us in the other direction with Ty. Suddenly I'm beginning to think he's straight after all. Especially as I reckon he's to honorable to use a nice girl like Karen as a beard. And now I'll have to wait for the next chapter Great story Graeme, so ignore my complaining

Damn, I just went back to ch 2 and realized that Rachel is Will's wife, not Peter's. Could you please put the names of wifes and permanent girlfriends in the list too ?

Well done Peter, I'm glad he told Eric off and stood up for his team, his decisions and Julie. I like this guy, but his wife (Rachel) needs to get rid of her stupid irrational jealousy. The next thing we know she'll find out about Tony and worry about him hitting on Peter ! Ohh and poor Tony, he actually likes 'Ken'. That'll complicate things for sure. Your favorite thing to do

Hmm, gay related sponsors for rugby guys, that's like to cause a stir. But according to Julie they need the money, so it's a 'beggars can't be choosers' situation. But I'd think Tony would be clever enought to realize that only players who are mature and secure in their place on the team and have long term girlfriends can probably deal with such sponsors. Young, single rookie players would just get too much hassle and if they are already struggling with attitude problems, this could quickly get volatile. My money is on Ty as Ken, not Paul, but it'll be interesting to find out what Paul's secret is. On to the next chapter to read about Tony being introduced to the team. I'm sure you'll keep the behavior of our suspects ambiguous enough to keep us in the dark. Tease

Oh you are so devious You had us all set up to think of Paul as gay, but now I'm suspecting that it's Ty instead (and he's the one going to the club not Paul). As always your stories capture me right from the beginning, and at least there's already seven chapters to read.

Matt should be happy that Sean has found someone else, because as far as I remember Sean was attracted to Wade and in my mind he was one of the few potential guys for Wade to have a relationship with other than Matt. I liked Sean a lot and always felt a bit sorry for him (about the Wade thing), so it pleased me that he clicked with Ben. Hope we'll see more of them as the story continues - and I'm not adverse to some hot threesomes Will may tease Ben about it, but he knows what it's like to have a connection like that. And since Brad obviously feels good about the whole situation, Will is likely to be content too. I think the whole experience was good for Brad, he needed to know that a handsome young guy like Ben can find him attractive and want to flirt, and he needed to know that he was comfortable going on a casual date. It wold be too difficult for him to go straight into another relationship. And I still think Brad should spend a night with Cody for some sexual healing.

Well that was a surprise. But I liked that Drew was clever enough to figure out the truth and big hearted enough to see that they both were at fault and to forgive Rick. Also great that it didn't go on for longer, it cut down on the heart break. can't say the same about the story - are you seriously ending it here ?! Arrrggh Graeme you persist in torturing me with open ended stories I'm gonna keep begging until you write Brandon's story - and please start it way back when he first realized his feelings for Drew and began protecting him. Everyone who agree raise your thumb

I have no doubt that Rick is straight, and I wasn't surprised that Brandon is gay and in love with Drew. Poor Shannon, though I doubt she'll lose her heart to Bran as long as he keep the distance that Rick pointed out. But now the solution is clear: Rick has to persuade Brandon to come out of the closet and tell Drew that he loves him. That should do the trick Wonder how on earth he (and you) will pull that off. Still loving the story.

Wow, as if you're not giving us enough treats with MUSH and Born Wolf, you suddenly out of nowhere magic us with this great new Circle of Hell tale. I think Kiaza may become my favorite of that world. I've always liked snakes and I sure as hell wouldn't have minded being in Jem's place. Hope this is set to be a nice long convoluted story of another demon finding but fighting love. We all know you'll make them see sense in the end. Hugs and hisses from me

Yes ! Tom did the clever thing and got his nasty brother with a Tay missile. Oh and Taylan had better extract the same promise of non-involvement from Kit. Otherwise I think he'll go all out protective next time he and Tom meets Jay. Nice to know that they are equally in love, even if Kit is more vocal. or chatty or - whatever

That was fun - I hope for the long term relationship too

Arrrghhh Graeme I hate it when you do this !!! (But I still like you ) You create these interesting characters and situations and issues and we really get involved. And then you just finish with no chance of knowing what happened next. Granted it's usually on a hopeful note, but I want to read MORE. Please.... This one has so much potential, so please think about continuing it one day. I loved the banter with the two teenage sons and Shaun seemed like someone who could be a friend if not a boyfriend. And doing things with him might be fun for the whole family.

It took me a while to decide to read this story, but now I'm totally hooked. I feel sorry for Rick for the deception he's managed to get caught in, but I actually think he's doing pretty well keeping things going without being directly dishonest. And I'm amazaed how you manage to make every new twist and turn seem perfectly reasonable. The whole premise for the straight guy pretending to be gay was completely believable to me. I can't wait to see the reactions of the whole circle of friends once the truth comes out. I hope it'll be more hilarious than hurtful.