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Timothy M.

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  1. for that - since apart from you missing important information, this also means we miss out on a story like from you to place Diego on the Top Story list.
  2. Not to mention certain fungi Like this SATW comic
  3. I guess you can say @aditus woke up my muse, since this story would never had taken off if Aditus hadn't joined me in writing. Plus Sablo and Theliel are Cupid Central characters, though I invented Diego. This is why we both feature as authors if you look at the front page of the story. However, working on this prompt together got my writing going on other projects, for which I'm very grateful.
  4. I like the new possibility of having more than one author for a story. It's fun to collaborate (right, @aditus ?) - so I can recommend it, if you get stuck when on an Antho theme.
  5. Hey @Page Scrawler Thanks for leaving a story like to push Diego onto the Top Stories list.
  6. No, I don't think we do. And it's the first time I've noticed bird song on Valentine's Day, but isn't that supposed to be part of the reason it's special for lovers. Lots of male birds singing "This is my territory and I want sex!'
  7. Getting milder - and I heard the blackbird singing in the dusk on my way home. Melodious and characteristic, as @Thorn Wilde says. But I guess it can be annoying at 5 am and right outside your window.
  8. Yeah, it's never really caught on much in Denmark either. But @aditus and I decided to celebrate Valentine's Day by posting the first chapter of our new joint story. Hope y'all like it. Happy Valentine's Day. (and a special for Val for super fast editing when we suddenly decided to post.)
  9. “What do you mean, you’re dating Death? And why are you suddenly listed as decommissioned?” Sablo stared at his brother, who was slumped over a glass of whisky. They were in a familiar human bar, but none of the few other patrons could see or hear them. Guardian Angels were invisible whether they were on duty or not. Not that anyone there would have bothered two cops having an argument in heated whispers, when they were alive. “I asked to be DOR’ed.1 Leave me alone.” “I never did bef
  10. I was thinking 'Threesome!'
  11. It's mostly that I don't know if I do it or not, rather than feeling the need to change it. I've never thought about it in relation to stories I've edited, so I can't answer the question. I look forward to hearing the replies.
  12. for the explanation ( damn, now I have to go through all my stories looking for that)
  13. I'm looking forward to reading the new story.
  14. What are 'independent body movements' ?
  15. Hi @Graeme you might like this sports story, even if it's cricket and not football. https://www.bbc.com/sport/cricket/47217002
  16. Next to Iceland with the bird or is it Faroe Islands ? https://satwcomic.com/one-bird-in-the-hand Sweden is the strict one in front with a blue tie, and I guess Denmark is on the right, so the shy one must be Finland.
  17. Timothy M.

    Plot Holes

    Which is something I learned reading Circumnavigation by C James.
  18. Glad you got back safely. I've been reading about icicles and huge snow loads dropping from roofs in Norway (Oslo).
  19. I enjoyed the breakfast scene so much, and I'm glad Shaun could see the similarities to having a relationship. Harley seems to be a natural carer and he likes being able to do physical stuff for Shaun (massage, fixing breakfast etc). In return, he's pleased to have Shaun's attention and admiration. I think they fit well together and hope they have a future as a couple.
  20. And if not sleeping, at work. I see you found the blog review of Holding Back. I can recommend reading both the review and the story.
  21. I was having a hard time keeping quiet about this, @Thorn Wilde It's been ready for a while. I'm like my Swedish friend, I'll read anything by our fellow Scandinavian, even if I didn't even know who Deadpool is. I loved the story just like her. It was probably more fun to see the Deadpool movies after I read Holding Back. I'm looking forward to a second read soon, and seeing all the and comments on the chapters. Hope to see lots of new fans there.
  22. That slow intimacy of sharing mornings with your lover is as good for Shaun's state of mind as the sex. Harley is a keeper, and I bet he feels the same about Shaun.
  23. Timothy M.

    Story

    I don't know how I didn't find this story before. It was great and I liked Tucker being independent yet sensible about his relationship with Stelian. He knew the mate thing was true but he still needed some time to accept it. The fact he saved his mate's life helped a lot. For once I'm not going to clamor for more, I think the story is perfect the way it is.
  24. As shocking as the assault was, I can't really say it was illogical. We may have ignored Alex' tendency to violence while he was playing nice as Robbie's friend, but he essentially raped Robbie the other times they had sex too. It was a nice fantasy that Alex could be redeemed, right along with Don's idea about Bible conversion. Unfortunately, I doubt Robbie will tell anyone and Don will simply assume they continued the fight after he left, and Robbie got his butt kicked by Alex. I'm pretty sure Sue will insist Alex leave the house, especially if she finds Robbie half unconscious and smelling of vomit. As a nurse (or am I wrong? But at least familiar with hospitals) she should realize Robbie getting punched in the head is bad news. And Robbie doesn't even have to say anything, since Don will provide the explanation for his state. I'm not sure it will be of any use for Robbie to tell the truth to his foster parents. He can save it for his therapist if he survives long enough to speak to one. I'm mostly worried this incident as well as the emotional hurt from the meeting with Nathan will send Robbie into the clutches of Mr Symmonds. But I sincerely hope you're not going down that path, it would be well nigh unbearable. btw I'm guessing Nathan and Robbie's talk has outed Alex anyway. Those girls in the mall are not going to keep this conversation to themselves, and we all know how fast gossip travels. I'd love to see Don's face if he's confronted with this.
  25. Timothy M.

    Chapter 7

    I guess his parents were actually being helpful when they pointed out he was falling in love. Even if his mom did tease him a bit. I was slightly surprised at the mistress question, since he had just met both Brandon's parents. But the open door - you too comment was funny.
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