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Well some of the blank slots stayed!
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First off, all the things you and your family are feeling are NORMAL. When my mom was dying due to cancer, things fell on me. My brother actually packed house and moved to Florida knowing mom would likely not last out the year. He brought dad with him. He felt it would be too much to deal with mom's illness and take care of dad after his stroke. In that he was 100 % right. Knowing mom did the right things have very little to do with the feelings involved. Have you ever heard the saying "The heart wants what the heart wants."? If two years later the anger has not faded, perhaps a freight councilor would help.
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Chapter 46 Shining a Bright Light into Darkness
Kitt commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 46 Shining a Bright Light into Darkness
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Why can I picture Ms Sybil dragging someone like Warren to the nearest vehicle and commanding them to shut up and drive?
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You had a lot of loose ends to tie up here. Looks like you have practiced the are of macreme in the past. This is a well written account of a loving extended family and how they deal when life starts tossing curve balls. I am certainly glad I chose to read it, and will be working my way through the rest of your stories. I was a bit surprised the judge didn't question Troy about the zipper thing directly, and that CPS didn't have the Lyntons there since they were the inztigators. I would have loved to see the reactions when the judge drew the REAL story out of Troy, and then dresses the homophobic twits down after. Well done sir. As a critic featured on the news when I was a child would have said...
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Bad wolf ! Bad bad bad! You best plan on telling us when they hatch!
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Ball gags for your characters?
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Chapter 44 A Time of Rebirth
Kitt commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 44 A Time of Rebirth
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As an editor I have worked with a wide range of authors.They cover the gambit from Sasha Distan, who's fingers cannot keep up with the characters shouting in his head to Carlos Hazday, who has an outline he wrote prior to the first CJ book that extends two books beyond the one we are currently working on. The only one you need to worry about what they do to write is Hudson Bartholomew. Sending you a box of very sharp pencils (sharp pointy things) to prompt your characters with.
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First off, doc's are wrong, all the time. Don't become one of the walking dead, the ones who just give up and wait in misery for the end. Remember the squirrel. Even if they are right, you are alive, so live! Do the things you want, enjoy. Write if that's what makes you feel good. Rant at us if you need to. We are friends and are here for you. We love you.
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557 - Portal Stones Don't Just 'Go Missing'
Kitt commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in 557 - Portal Stones Don't Just 'Go Missing'
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That's what I was wondering Jess. Just what was Cris doing at that particular moment?
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Chapter 43 Coming to Grips
Kitt commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 43 Coming to Grips
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I love binge reading, but now the wait for new chapters begins for me. Of course I had to pick the biggest cliffhanger of the story to catch up. You have woven a well written tale of real life. The characters are believable, and the situations could easily be recounting of actual events. Why do I get the feeling the statement "You hurt my willy." is going to cause as many headaches for Alan and the family court as the grandparents abduction?
