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Thanks Lisa! I'm glad the creepy worked. I'm also glad the misdirection gave you a surprise. The ad is something I remember from my childhood. It was bugging me as I thought about this scenario and so it really helped form the story theme. Your review makes me so happy! Yeah!
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Oh, thank you so much! I appreciate the kind review. It was some ugly emotions, however redemption is always possible, I think.
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Thanks Adi!!! I'm glad it stuck with you. What a wonderful feeling that gives me. I appreciate the kind review.
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I am so glad you are enjoying it. This story is pretty special to me. I hope you like the rest of it. Thank you so much for the review!
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Thanks Defiance! I'm glad it worked. I wanted to engage and get the reader trying to figure out from the clues. Yeah! I'm thrilled that happened for you. I so appreciate the review.
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Thanks Carlos! I'm glad it came alive for you. I strive to do that. I loved the idea so I appreciate your review!
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Thanks Cia!!! Ran is always telling me to put more description to capture a mood and it seems I did. I'm not sure where they will go from there but I figured it was a kind of purgatory. I was thinking a lot about Dante when I wrote it. Anyway, I so appreciate the kind review.
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What a lovely job of portraying a death and return to life. I loved the vine analogy and the pulsing. it really worked well. Fantastic job Gary!!! Really great writing and storytelling.
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Really great narration of the coming storm and the summary of their predicament was awesome. This scenario has so much potential. I'm really enjoying what you're doing with it. Wonderful job Carlos!!!
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I loved your.approach to the theme. Very humorous take on it. i would have jumped to the same conclusion. Great job!!!!
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Oh my!!! I wasnt expecting that. However, I think most of us would make that choice. Very riveting and compelling. Great job Cia!!!
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Thanks Renee! I'm glad you liked it. Your review is very appreciated. I wanted to twist the twist a little.
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Thanks Valkyrie! It was a very dark visitation, but I loved exploring those emotions. Sometimes this is a good exercise. I really appreciate the review.
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Thanks Gary!! I'm glad you could see through the gloom and disgust. I wanted to lure the reader into finding something good in all the bad. It seems to have worked for you. I appreciate the review very much!!!
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I just love this horror story, Val! You did a great job with the descriptions, narrative, and the surprises. It was awesome you did such amazing flips on the story line. Awesome sauce!!!!
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I'm glad you enjoyed it and could see the beauty in their reunion. Thanks so much for the review!
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Fascinating take on the theme. Great job with the characters. You could feel their closeness and comfort with each other. I like how non-linear the story is and how it takes on the complexity of emotional reactions quite well. Wonderful!
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Very creative and impressive use of the theme. I could feel their concern and edginess throughout the whole piece without it being depressing. That's not easy to do. Marius and Neil were very well fleshed out considering it was short. Wonderful job!!!
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What a beautiful love story with a great message. It is the ones who take care of who earn our trust. This peek into their lives was simply lovely. Great job Renee!!!
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Time to renew. Really lovely piece that shows the tenacity of love. It also shows how sparks can be remembered. Wonderful job, Aditus!
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The Embers I stood in the entryway of the restaurant, rather disgusted by what I was witnessing. A cook was in clear view in the kitchen window picking his nose. He was really digging in there, and had a haunted, almost vacant look on his scruffy face. I wanted to turn around and walk away, but I couldn’t. For some reason, this place had drawn me. "Can I help you?" a woman's voice diverted my attention. She was in her late teens, possibly early twenties, and still had a rash of angry acne
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