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Cole Matthews

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  1. Happy Birthday! Have a great day!
  2. Happy Birthday! Have a special day.
  3. Fantastic job Addy! The interactions are fresh, real and work well. There is a distinct sense of the characters' personalities exposed. Their relationship with each other is emerging. We are in for a fabulous marathon!
  4. Happy Birthday! Hope you have a special day!
  5. Cole Matthews

    Avalon 2005

    Very intriguing and suggestive! I can't wait to read more! great start.
  6. Sounds like your year is starting out brighter! Thank goodness for that! *bearhug* Happy Birthday.
  7. You can bunk with us too Jo Ann! I'll even make breakfast!
  8. This is probably the single most poignant sentence I've read in the last few months. It was a really perfect image, Cole. Thanks! I will have to go back and reread. I don't remember it at all. I like it though!
  9. Thanks so much Val. I hope you're crying for happiness sake because when I wrote it, that was my feeling. Though the two men had lost so much time, they were ready to move on together. I think their lives from 1996 on were very special. Del had been too scared to go Into the Fire back in the day, but he's ready to now. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
  10. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 1

    What a wonderful way to describe a lifelong love. By measure of the stitches, they grew together forever. Great job Bill! Thanks for sharing this heartwarming story with us!
  11. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 1

    Great job Val! I loved it. An interesting take that speaks of universality. Thanks for sharing it with us.
  12. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 1

    El to the rescue!!!! I love this next episode in Max and Elliott's life. Stick it to the movers and shakers I say! Hahaha!!! Great job and the surprise at the end was awesome. Great job Val. Thanks for sharing this.
  13. Thanks so much Tim! No one has yet commented on Del's son being named Charles and Chaz' son as Bert. (Delbert) I don't think the other was ever far from their thoughts over the years. I'm glad you liked the realism. I appreciate the kind review.
  14. Thanks so much Tim! No one has yet commented on Del's son being named Charles and Chaz' son as Bert. (Delbert) I don't think the other was ever far from their thoughts over the years. I'm glad you liked the realism.
  15. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 1

    Now I want to know what happens next! You created and solved a murder mystery but the dynamic between a not quite conventional beta like Gary and Bill feels like it's just starting. I want more Wayne! What gruesome encounter will they need to detect next?
  16. I really enjoyed this stunning overview of nature that read like poetry! I felt as though I were watching it unfold flashing forward in time. Amazing job! Thank you for sharing with us!
  17. I chose to picture the subject battered by words and emotions and the crow is the subject's ego. Maybe not what you intended but that's what I saw. Thanks for sharing Celethiel! Great job.
  18. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 1

    What a wonderfully sad story! Your imagery with the use of smells was so evocative. His thoughts and memories were so vivid, as alive as those remembrances we have of moments that change us. They don't seem to fade. Fantastic job Yettie! I loved it though it was a tale of lost love. We all seem to have those things in our past.
  19. Addy, what a sad, beautiful, and gut wrenching story. I'm teary eyed in memory of my own dealings with the death of friends too young. You expressed the shock and disjointed feelings so well. Thank you for sharing such a personal piece. I'll carry this with me.
  20. I've only started reading but so far really great stuff. I'm so glad to be part of such a talented group with strong stories and ideas. This is awesome!
  21. Cole Matthews

    Story

    Really powerful sentiment with this idea. I like the idea of scars as a new beginning of positive things. Thanks Renee! Beautiful idea! Lovely tale.
  22. Cole Matthews

    Emergence

    That is a story ripped from the headlines you have portrayed really well. This seems to be a story of survival and a truly Good Samaritan. The first person in this story had a sense of empathy that demonstrated their characteristics clearly. Toby showed his resiliency and Evan is brave. Damn, to go out with someone with scars like these takes courage! Great job Val!!!
  23. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 1

    Wow. You did a great job portraying how "the Broken" go on. The patterns of abuse continue onward the lower the subject's self esteem goes. Less care is taken to find someone worthy of "the Broken's" affection. Not all of them have streaks this bad, but it does convey the reason some find one bad apple after another. I thought the hospital interludes were very effective at objectifying the pain. Very interesting device that worked quite well. Great job Wayne. Horrible subject matter but you handled it with finesse and tact. Very impressive!
  24. Cole Matthews

    Poem One

    Thanks Foster! It had me feeling a sense of that sharp discomfort you get when you can't decide something important. It almost hurts until it becomes settled. That's what I felt. It's very good.
  25. Thanks so much Gary! I'm glad it was touching and read so real. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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