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26 comments on this blog and every single one of them is about gravy and not the awesomeness that is Guess the Author....
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Eeeewww fungus
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I went to a diner once and ordered their open-faced roast beef sandwich and fries and told the waitress I wanted the plate covered in gravy. She gave me a funny look and laughed. I was serious. She brought me the plate with gravy on the sandwich, but not the fries. Gravy up that plate, woman! I asked for extra gravy and she ended up having to bring me like two things of it so I could douse my fries in it. Apparently gravy fries aren't a thing everywhere.
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I think it's impossible not to like anything made from scratch with pork fat.
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How the hell do you not like gravy? It's as freakish as @Slytherinnot liking bacon
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August CSR Feature: Soul Music: Love Encountered by northie
Valkyrie commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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I'm multitalented.
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Now that the Secret Author contest is behind us, it's time to start focusing on the anthology. What better way to kick off this year's Leap of Faith anthology than with a guest article by our Secret Author contest winner, @Libby Drew? Libby, like me, is a big fan of the short story medium, and has written a superb article about writing short stories. Remember that anthology stories can be as little as 1,000 words, and when done well, those words can pack a huge punch. So, read Libby's article and then start brainstorming for the anthology! Writing Short Stories, and All That Jazz By Libby Drew Short stories can be just as powerful and moving as longer works of fiction. In fact, they can be even more impactful because they deliver their message in a single, commanding hit. A novel is a floodlight. A short story is a spotlight. It is a moment. An event. A mood. In an unsurprising ironic twist, I had trouble keeping this article brief. As the short story form is close to my heart, I waxed rather poetic in my first draft of this post. In the spirit of the topic, however, I edited heavily. I hope what remains is interesting and helpful. Why even write short stories? One, short stories are excellent novel-writing practice, if novel length stories are either your trade or goal. Creating short form fiction fleshes out your thoughts and pinpoints what’s relevant to the narrative. It’s a good method of cultivating focus, skills, and patience for writing a novel. Two, it frees you up to take more risks. Aside from taking (presumably) less time, effort and research, a short story allows you to experiment. Do you typically write from a man’s perspective? Try a woman’s. Third person? Try first. Maybe take a stab at a non-chronological narrative. Present tense over past. These are just a few examples. The point is, if you want to spread your wings, this is the perfect opportunity. It’s a marketing tool. This one’s self-explanatory, I think. If readers enjoy you in bite-sized pieces, they might be more willing to invest their time in one of your novels. Writing for anthologies, contests or any collection of short form fiction is an invaluable way to stretch your intellectual and writing muscles. The anthology opportunities on GA are a goldmine for gaining a loyal audience and have helped me discover some of my favorite authors here. Crafting short stories can rekindle your motivation for writing. It’s common to occasionally feel exhausted and directionless when all of our attention is on bigger and longer writing projects. If you find yourself procrastinating or lack motivation to push through a longer story, take a step back. Write something short. Flush the plot twists, lengthy list of characters, complicated settings and world-building and instead write a moment. A crisis. A feeling. This is a biggie: writing short stories hones your craft. You will become a better editor because you’re forced to create a moving and engaging narrative within a tight space. Avoid extraneous content that doesn’t push the story forward. There’s no room for fluff. The practice of succinct writing can challenge you, and the more challenges you present yourself with, the better writer you will become. What is a short story? It is not an excuse to abandon engaging storytelling. You still need a protagonist, dilemma, decision, climax, and outcome. Short stories are often more focused than novels, as all the elements within—plot, character, pacing, story structure, and so on—must work together towards the common goal of brevity. How long is it? Depends on who you ask. A typical short story has a word count of anywhere between 1,000 to 7,500 words, although, as always, there are exceptions to the rule. Poe defined it as “something readable in a single sitting.” Ray Bradbury’s average short story word count is around 3,800. Hemingway, 5000. Flannery O’Connor’s works average about 7,000 words per story. My advice is to not become fixated on word count. Art is impossible to quantify, after all. Instead, focus on the following key elements. They are tenets of the short story form. ● A clearly defined mood, idea or emotion ● Clear, descriptive language ● A small cast of vital characters ● A strong point of view -- what do you want your readers to feel as they read? Tips for writing a short story Start as close to the end as possible. I’ve mentioned this before in my blog. Drop your reader into the unfolding story. Bypass the “before” and the “maybe related” and the “vaguely interesting thing about my protagonist.” Keep up the pace. Steady pacing, with rising tension, engages the reader. Keep the cast of characters small: a protagonist, an antagonist, and, maybe, someone to throw a wrench into the works. That’s all you need. Someone to cheer on, someone to hate, and, occasionally, someone who serves to advance the character arc for either the protagonist or antagonist. You can make a small cast of characters engaging. You can make them unforgettable, as a matter of fact. Give your main character a passion. Give him a weakness -- that’s always relatable. A glimpse into your character’s psyche is another good approach. This will make him feel real, and it draws the reader inside the story. And don’t forget… Conflict! Short doesn’t mean directionless. Your protagonist should have either a dilemma, a revelation, or be faced with a decision of some kind. Surrounding that conflict should be a good dose of tension. Conflict keeps readers invested in your story. It is the lifeblood of storytelling. Suggest a backstory, but don’t elaborate. You, the writer, need to understand a character’s motivation in order to write their story. The reader won’t need this level of detail if you draw them in with dialogue, tension, and by engaging their senses. On that topic… Engage all five senses. As humans, we don’t only see and hear. We smell, taste and feel as well. Visceral details are worth paragraphs of exposition. Dialogue brings a story to life. Don’t waste too much word count on scene setting. Tight dialogue is one of the best ways to build drama. Edit until it hurts. Delete transitory scenes and get right to the meat of the story. Get rid of repetitive words. Toss out unnecessary adverbs and adjectives. Make every sentence count. For the greatest impact, keep your language succinct, fresh and exciting, specific and colorful. Vary your sentence structure. Avoid cliches and platitudes. In conclusion Just because short stories are short, doesn’t mean they are easy to write. But the benefits of trying can’t be overestimated. As with any skill, the more we practice, the better we become. The better we become, the more we captivate, enchant and enthrall the reader every time we endeavor to put the human experience to the page.
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Great interview! I am not familiar with this author, but will have to check out this story.
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I've been down the YouTube rabbit hole with this guys many times. Love their covers!
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The secret author contest was a blast, and I'm already looking forward to next year's contest Thanks again to Cia for all her hard work, and to all who participated.
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Somehow I missed seeing this comment. Sorry about the late reply, but thank you, and I think I'll get one of those mirrors!
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I think most working people are well-acquainted with the "meeting that should have been an email". I had to attend a two-hour training today that was more interesting than others I've attended, but was still time I could have used to catch up on my endless backlog of paperwork. So this week's prompts have a "working" theme. Now get to work and start writing! PT Prompt #151 You are in the "meeting to end all meetings". It's lasting for hours, and it's information that could have been easily conveyed in an email. The speaker has a monotone voice and is droning on and on and finally lulls you to sleep. The next thing you know, you're being shaken awake. Who is shaking you and why? What happens next? PT Prompt #152 On the first day of your new job, you are the direct reason your boss (who has been with the company for 20 years) gets fired. What happened, and how do your coworkers react? Please include the prompt number either in your story/chapter description or title to help readers who would like to search for specific prompts. Also, please remember that stories less than one thousand words must be posted as part of a collection If you check the subgenre 'prompt' in your story tags, then people/readers can find everything here: https://gayauthors.org/stories/browse/subgenre/prompt/
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A great mix of authors, and there are quite a few I haven't read, which is why I missed some guesses. At least, that's my story and I'm sticking to it This was a blast, and I'm already looking forward to next year A huge thank you to everyone who participated, and especially to @Cia for all her hard work running the contest. And to all the pitchfork and torchbearers who read and commented on my story...
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That review is why I didn't think he wrote that story
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Yeah, heed the warnings if you don't like violence or graphic descriptions of violence.
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1. 14,000 Days of Virtue Libby Drew 2. Adrift - I'm sticking with @astone2292 3. Baring My Soul - Definitely @kbois 4. Learned to Lie 5. Life of a Pet 6. River City - Sticking with @Bill W 7. Searching for God - @Mikiesboy He was my guess if it wasn't @Wayne Gray 8. The Book of Poems 9. The Case of Cloud Rider 10. The Egg Stone - @lawfulneutralmage 11. Unchained - @drsawzall although 10 and 11 could be the opposite of what I guessed. I'm leaving some intentionally blank
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Congratulations! Very well-deserved! I thought this would be the winner when I read it I'm not surprised, since I love Libby's writing.
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I guess it's a secret
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Well, I'll start! I had a running list of guesses, but of course my computer ate it So I will guess a few I'm fairly sure of and some I'm not so sure of. The blank ones I have no idea until I see the author list and can make more educated guesses. Of course, I may be completely off the mark 1. 14,000 Days of Virtue - I had a few authors listed as possibles for this one, but I will guess @Parker Owens 2. Adrift - @astone2292 3. Baring My Soul - @kbois 4. Learned to Lie @Mancunian 5. Life of a Pet - no idea 6. River City - @Bill W 7. Searching for God - @Wayne Gray 8. The Book of Poems - my initial thought was @AC Benus, but then some of the writing style reminded me of @Carlos Hazday so I admit to being a bit stumped by this one. 9. The Case of Cloud Rider - @Mrsgnomie 10. The Egg Stone - I would guess @wildone, but this is depraved even beyond his standards, I think 11. Unchained - no idea
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We also had prompts on Friday, brought to us by @Aditus, who is also on vacation. Hopefully Addy and @wildone will both avoid becoming bear food
