Great review, William. I think you summed up this story perfectly. Anyone who's a fan of Cassie's writing should give this story a read. It's well worth it.
These are all very gut-wrenching, but #2 is particularly good. I think RJ's comment was spot on. I also hear the survivor. Sorry you're in such a dark place right now. I hope you see some light soon.
Chapter 21
Joshua
“Ye just missed our turn, love,” Alannah stated as she lightly smacked my arm.
“Son of a bitch!” I searched for a good point to turn around, but there wasn’t one on the narrow rural route. I exhaled sharply in frustration. I was exhausted, and anything preventing me from being home as soon as possible put me in an even worse mood than I was already in.
“There’s a gas station a few miles from here. Stop there so I can drive.”
“Yeah, sure. Fine.”
Thanks, Defiance. Things are pretty dark right now. We'll see if Galen gets the help he needs. Thanks for your support of this story. I really appreciate it.
I once read that a good story needs conflict. Then add conflict to the conflict. Then more conflict, and eventually, resolve the conflicts. You raise some valid points. Those questions will be answered... eventually Thanks again for all the comments. It was great reliving the story by reading them.
Ethan, Galen, Josh... they all have their issues, that's for sure. This was a huge step for Josh, since he's always repressed his feelings instead of letting them out. We'll see what the result is. Thanks for your comments!
Thanks so much, Coastguard. It says a lot that you binge-read it in one night. The next chapter will post later today. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much. Thanks for the comment!
Thanks! Your support has meant a lot to me If you do try the feet thing, make sure you're holding onto something... Maybe I should have included a disclaimer in that section...
Yup. I'll be watching it all on TV this weekend One of these days I'll watch them in person I'd love to see the Masters (especially the Derby) but it would be really cool to see the Stampede too, so I guess it would make the most sense to visit in July when both tournaments are happening.