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I feel sorry for Noah, but I also know what a terrible beast self-sabotage and self-isolation is. So that makes me proud of Seth finding the wherewithal to call Noah despite knowing that he messed up by distancing himself for so long. I know that explaining to those that you love helps a little bit, but it's still a bitter pill to swallow when your person runs... Oof, the gentlemen don't have it easy. & doctor or not, he isn't Seth 😑 It's a No! Lol

Anders is vile. Can't wait to find out what manner of ridding the world of him the boys find suitable 😉. Absolutely loving this roller-coaster you have us on! Thank you!

I'm really glad that you chose to explore the trauma element that is often missing in so many stories. It's unimaginable to have gone through such traumatic, life altering events and not have some type of ricochet. I can't believe you left us with such a cliffhanger though 😭. Here's to practicing patience and gratitude that you're sharing with us in the first place 🙃🙂. I'll try and comment each post because I'm honestly surprised that you're surprised that you have such a following. Feedback is the least I can do, even if it may sometimes only be a sentence or two. I'm excited to discover what you have planned for our eclectic yet loveable bunch!

Can't wait to dive into the story!

Absolutely amazing story. A myriad of interesting & different characters, great pacing and definitely not your typical predictable magical tale. Can't wait to hol on over to the new story! Thank you for sharing Demiurge ❤️

Thank you for sharing this wonderful tale with us. It was a great read with interesting characters, surprising developments & of course the happy ending we're all after. Berault, as a character, very much reminded me of Wilbur Smith's character, Taita, from his Egypt series of books. One of my favourite characters of all time & therefore my favourite character in this charming tale of overcoming adversities & evil. A much appreciated read ❤️

I've never clicked on a notification on GA so fast 😅! Garjah is very very possessive... I wonder what in the heavens that could mean 😋. I'll be back as always next Wednesday for my fix of this marvelous tale you're weaving. Thank you for sharing it with us Cia.

Can't help but hope Luca or Eamon kill her... She is a general after all, and wouldn't it just be grand to have wonderful little Luca become one 😉 Thanks for sharing your amazing talents with us, as always. You spin a wonderful tale 💙.

Really not into this whole solo trip thing with Kyle. Yes he's scorching and whatnot, but he was with people that were associated with Worthington's uncle & W hasn't 'checked' for Sinclair meddling.

Can't help but hope that Carl mentions in passing to Alex that one of the guards looks like the Monceits because we all know who that is and he's way too close to Alex for my liking. Also I have no clue why ( I think I've mentioned before) I think he and Talia may end up together. How I have no clue. Also how is the demon gonna react when she finds out Orr has her daughter and has taken the liberty of chopping bits off her... he's got balls ( or doesn't realise she's so near). I adore Luca. Tbh I wish he'd choose a fulfilling relationship and that's gonna be Eamon. That leaves poor Adrian at loose ends though... it's a mess that I almost don't want to see resolved because there'll be a world of hurt for likeable characters either way :-( I absolutely love this story. Thank you so much for sharing it. With your permission I'd like to have it printed in a leather-bound book for my collection when you're done.

Okay, haven't read again. But I'm feeling slightly more than a fool for thinking Adam is the dad and am more leaning towards that he and his sister perhaps had the same lover? Conspiracy theories are trashy but it so fun, & I'm late to the game :-)

Haven't read the comments yet but ever since Adam tensed up and said he wasn't hay I thought that he might be Artie's dad but felt it was too wierd to make that comment... here goes to reading other comments to see if I'm way off, but I've bitten my tongue for long enough I suppose. Loving the story by the way. Thank you

Sending the evil eye because the next chapter isn't published yet lol. Thank you for this delectable tidbit...

I'm intrigued... bait has been bitten & I'll keep on reading, although if the letters are all so short I'd suggest posting more often.

I hope they manage to have an honest conversation on that plane ride, and not keep on playing the game they initially started ( and that ended the moment emotions came into play, which they both didn't notice) I want these two back together

Beyond delighted to read about these characters again :-) I'm glad that Luca decided to stay. It's wasn't for naught after all that Ysabel thought of him for a generalship. She saw in him what Alexander only realised later. His surprise at the arming of the people of Mulansburg took me by surprise as I assumed he would have known that by now. Just goes to show how preoccupied by the war he is I suppose. I'm not really sure how to feel about Luca wedding the Iljardi prince, but then again perhaps the iljard could use their merchant ships to aid Alex' cause therefore showing Luca that they have his back. Accepting a marriage proposal just because it comes from a nice prince seems a bit trite for Luca even though his main motivation at the time of acceptance was to spite Eamon Huge fan of this story

So I'm thinking that this is not a question to the readers, i.e. Mark doing a poll for a look-see at how thoroughly he may be lynched for expiring JJ on the cusp of a potential JJ and Carulo love fest... I think this is a tongue in cheek way of asking "who " in the family would care? Foreshadowing a hell on wheels Will and/or Brad revenge plan? (yes please if this is the plan) Steff would be motivated to be pretty lethal, JP too. Darius could serve some unexpected excitement and suave bad-guy-assery. And perchance Alex would finally grow a pair & load his inner defend your close ones programme? On a roll so I was about to suggest Mary-Ellen may be contrite and help, but let us not be silly. Mark, I bow down...

Wonderful chapter, thank you! I kind of feel like Stef's annoyance at Will is a combo package. Will in many ways reminds me of a young flirty Stef who generally didn't have problems tripping a who bunch of guys into his bed. That in combination with his and JP's love life slowing down (also bringing back old insecurities for Stef) has definitely got to have Stef feeling some kinda salty. Then when the whole emancipation thing and war with Brad thing happened Stef was on Brad's side and mad as a hatter at Will. I got the distinct impression that what Stef was really pissed at was that instead of coming to him for help (as they were super close) Will handled a lot of stuff himself and quite well might I add. Even on the financial front, Will's been doing a surprisingly good job & hasn't really consulted with Stef as much a one would have expected. I think his independent nature annoys Stef. And also the age thing unfortunately, we all know Stef is vain. Will isn't even 18 & he's mostly got his shit together so it would only be fair to assume he's gonna have a pretty bright future if he continues at his pace. I think Stef would be happy in having a hand in that rise rather than be mostly sidelined while Will does what he wants. And Will also keeps on coming up with positive things Stef doesn't forsee, which he must find annoying, like the family homes in Hawaii or the car for JP's retirement. & also, if I'm not mistaken Will used to be closer to Stef than JP. So that dynamic changing also kinda has to smart. & no offense to JJ because I actually like him, but if I had my pick of grandchild to be closest to & be most admired by, my choice would be Will. Now that's off my chest... lol. Thanks for the frequent updates :-)

Okay, so first chapter I was slightly worried that this'd be a revenge tale and wasn't sure if I wanted to continue because I'm not really into that sort. Got clouded by the well written sex scenes and the seduction, I suppose. I'll read a chapter or two more to understand what Oscar is about, but not a fan of vindictive revenge in general. Well written even if the turn the story had taken leaves a source taste in my mouth. :-/

Lmao! So I've come across this story a couple times and passed it over because I had assumed that the small amount of comments posted probably meant the writing was horrible but the author was a die hard to get their story out there. Anyways, I decided to have a look see at the first chapter or two to determine why a story with so many chapters had a dire amount of comments... now I totally get it. The readers probably fly through because you're a good writer and I personally like your tempo. Imagery doesn't hurt either :-D People are probably exhausted after a chapter and run to clean up so the most they have the energy to do is a polite like click. On I move to the next chapter, but couldn't have done so without a guilty conscience if I hadn't commented on this story, which although a shag-a-thon so far, is a very well written one which certainly deserves more comments. Merci for the story so far

Oh wow! I just discovered this gem and devoured it in a day! I love the characters and the exquisite tale you wove. I sincerely hope you finish this some day.

An excellent read. Something I'll definitely come back to read at least once more. I liked your characters and the fluidity of the story. Thank you for sharing

I've been reeled in a hundred percent. I forsee patience waiting for new chapters of this being an issue for me...

I like the boys, how they seem to just gravitate towards each other despite the relationship being so new. And I find Kaiden's neurotic moments adorable personally. <3 No clue why, but I get the feeling that the coming out won't be at the party but rather before, as in someone from college might have been at the fairgrounds, and well, since Kay is so recognisable it'd be safe to assume commentary on Friday's happening maybe floating about come Monday?