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I'll be honest and admit that I found it to flabbergasting that two of my favourite, complex, yet balanced characters that you've brought together in a spectacular manner that also includes a scorching dose of sultriness has bored you to the point that you shut the story down so abruptly. You've given yourself many branches on which to expound upon and make readers like me return like th thirsty to the well. It's a shame that you didn't explore the full potential of this story. Perhaps time will change your mind? A very thankfull yet disappointed fan. Feel free to grace us with more of your wonderful imaginings :-) especially concerning these two

This is the third time over the years that I've read this story. It is sad, yes, but also always reminds me that sad doesn't have to last forever. Thanks for this little jewel of light.

So, I was intrigued enough about Stefan's wierd behavior towards Will and had time so I've read through the last five books in the past week. As I ponder the identity of the Black Widow, whether it be literal or not, etc. I've been paying g attention to the webs you so amazingly weave mark. And if you continue writing, I think that Taquisha's children will emerge in the future much as Lou emerged from Stef's gesture when he was in Paris with Brad. And I like that if it's the plan :=)

Wow. Best new years present ever! It's insane because I usually hate too many vivid characters within one story as it becomes confusing. But the characters you weave... just wow! Please please please update faster. I've already re-read from beginning to end three times. I love Ezra in and Cory, Preston Indie and all the others you've introduced to us. Cory's dad's douchebaggery... yikes yo. But the brother dynamics like a little pack, gotta love that. And Preston and Indie. Dude! You have to write! Giving us a drug in such sparse doses is evil even if I lap every single one up. Just wow! Hope the damn mama wakes the hell up and sees the amazing sons she has. Gotta love uncle Johnny. And Preston's nosy ass, gotta love the boy. Moves the story along and nivelates long drawn out dramas lol. You're an amazing author. Thank you.

So, I read On the Mark in one sitting and loved it. I died of laughter when I realised that a lot of Will's character traits correspond to yours an I'm guessing his character is the most based on you, ( I think) and then almost gave myself a heart attack in the middle of the store when the irony of all your readers hating he who shall not be named hit me. Ahahahah... My husband was worried lol. Laughed flat out for a minute and then had the giggles on and off for hours. Cannot wait to see the excitement that Will shall deliver to Harvard. It's gonna be Epic!

Can't wait for more :-)

I've been reading the CAP series over the last two weeks and this is my first comment. I'm ashamed, but I'll leave it at that. Previous chapters have been heartbreaking but I'll admit that it took a lot of self restraint not to lash out at Robbie's passing. But the emotion and knowledge you put into this is deserving of respect. I was watching big brother sa with my mom in Africa when they flashed news on the first plane with a directive to switch to Cnn. We switched in time to see the second plane hit and were frozen as those buildings fell. I love word and writing but could never ever find the courage to place characters I'd built up in that scenario. Reading this was eviscerating but has given me respect for you as an author. And it has also helped me think of my life and evaluate situations better, despite the fact that I am faced with situations that are not flattering when I face myself in the mirror. You're my JP. Thanks Grand

Thank you so very much for a wonderful story and the wonderful characters who bloomed as the story wound its way towards the happy end. I enjoyed it thoroughly

<3 another great chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

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Liking the story very much so far. A shame that I cannot follow the story though. I hope we'll be able to do that soon. For now you go into my browser favourites :-)

Hmm, from reading the other reviews I've noticed that the Cory-Lawson 'relationship' bothers them... I am therefore wondering what's wrong with me that I don't find it weird so far. I do get that Lawson is like a ticking emotional time bomb that could either end up in violence or tears, but as long as he cannot physically hurt Cory, I'm along for a very intriguing story. And trying to be friends so soon after such a horrible break-up after which there was no communication, cheating and betrayal? It was a recipe for disaster. Poor Cory's going to be mortified. I wish he had changed his mind the moment they decided a song in front of him was an okay way to start repairing their friendships. To be honest, Sandy and Casey don't really seem like people that Cory needs in his life.

I cannot believe you ended it here! Oh my god! Please hurry with the next chapter, I need to know how Galen is

Reporters mention families who have lost loved ones... I'm not part of the LGBTQ community, but I can't stop crying when I think of all those people who lost the person they love. Their other half... It wasn't enough that my friends within the community were scared to live their lives in Africa, that they strived for the perceived freedom the US LGBTQ community has. They looked up to Americans, having a chance to live freely, at least some of them . Now some man has encroached on the few that were free to be themselves in a safe place. To fill a place of beauty with his vile hatred. I'm heartbroken because of what this will do to so many people, how it'll impact young people struggling to come out. Intolerance has no place in our world.

I won't lie and say that I didn't get to this story thanks to Running With the Pack. But I'm so glad ( if one may be glad in a bitter sweet way) that I read this. At the first chapter I felt an uneasiness that this may be a true story because of the detached manner of the telling. My heart breaks for you yet it rejoices at the same time. The world can be magical, but it can also be vile. I'm glad you are still here and shall be and that you have given us the gift that is your talent for the written word. I understand so much better how you came up with RWTP and I am so proud that despite what the fates cruelly handed you, you were able to have such marvelous imaginings and share them with us. You have every reason to be proud of yourself. I hope your parents ar wallowing in shame and regret for throwing such a beautiful soul away. I'll always be here if you need an ear or snarky comment to being about a smile on a grey day. You are a hero. I'm proud to have read your story and work. Stay with us and win for you!!! Proud proud proud

Can't wait for the next chapter. I think Lane has way much more potential than his family cares to know... it's a shame how often people don't just open their eyes and see...

Please please please continue this saga!!! I've read it threefold already.

Omg, I surely hope that Clayton's secret is that he's into dom sub relationships and not that he's sick. Bikers- I'm thinking douchebag took Dan to that club with the sling where the bikers happened to be and ( ugh) participate? Perhaps they are scoping out new subs... oh! I'm gonna make a crayfish boil but with lingustines as I can't get crayfish where I live. Thanks for the inspiration :-)

Omg! I absolutely love this chapter! Surprised no one has commented on the beautiful symbolism of the rings yet :-). I met my husband 2 weeks after I turned 18, on the first night had the thought that I could definitely be his, and 12 years later, we're still here. I'm not so shocked by the wedding. Monica and Garret perhaps, but then again they know their headstrong son. I hope Ambrose is back to do some good. Was wondering when he'd catch up to And :-)

Wow, I love these two. I really hope that you'll come back to them one day. Perhaps give the priest a slice of what he deserves? Show us how Kertyn has blossomed? Thank you for another wonderful story. I don't comment on all of them, but I do appreciate them very much.

Wow! An amazing story. I sincerely hope that you continue with it. I'm beyond curious as to what you've decided to have happen next. I'm a huge fan.

I absolutely love the way your mind works. I can only bow down.

Heart wrenchingly beautiful. The perfect combination of dark and light, the evil and beauty that this world has to give us, and sometimes forces on us. I love the way you write, the emotion you evoke and the ugly things that are part of this world that you show us we can survive. I never understood those on LitEr who would call you sick. The world if full of things we'd rather ignore and pretend don't happen,but they do. To all of us. Even the brightest among us. I'm glad you gave the guys a happy ending. But to be honest, I'd have understood if you didn't because life doesn't always afford us that. And it isn't sick, just realistic and aware of all the things human beings are capable of. Thank you for the amazing story.

The story wasn't bad to begin with, but it was a disappointment because you failed to inform the reader that the story would be about an eight year old, who although cute, doesn't act very age appropriate. I had hoped that you would spend a few chapters on his childhood then move on to the characters when they are older. Anyway, I read because you are a good writer, but I think I'd enjoy a story by you on older characters ( in keeping with your story tags which are entirely inappropriate for this story. Di

You are an amazing writer who is so conscious when he writes, it is an absolute rarity and joy to read these marvellous stories.if it wouldn't give my Polish professors a heart attack, I would absolutely love to write my dissertation about the wondrous complex world that you have spun. I'll wait patiently for your magic :-)