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Puppilull

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  1. This was so very good. I really liked the rythm of the poem. Conveys the feeling of a stolen moment, breathless, hurried but deeply connected.
  2. Wow! Just wow! You capture my thoughts to this heartfelt scene so precisely. And you make it look effortless, which I know it isn't. That lightness of the wording combined with the subject matter just floors me. Now I'm even more triggered to do this. I don't think I'll be able to top this, but I want to give it a try. It's so beautiful.
  3. Maybe you need a differently wired beta for that. But then again, Tim has surprised me before. He might strike again. He is, after all, Lightning Tim.
  4. Breast feeding in the Metaverse? Who'd have thunk it?
  5. Too close for comfort? LOL I'll read tomorrow. A blackout and our open fire made me lose focus on reading tonight...
  6. JAR take it?!? That would be the day. Of the apocalypse... Bloody nipples... TMI. No, I can take it. And I do mean that.
  7. That's a way! Sweet can work just fine!
  8. I have my ways for making him talk... (think horrible b-movie German accent)
  9. Or rouge...? Hi, hi! Kidding! I've got nothing against bottle feeding. It works really well. You should choose on the right basis though. Not due to some misconceptions. Emma has made her choice, which is fine. I just don't want that myth perpetuated, so someone thinks this is a truth and abstains from something she wants to do on false premises. So end rant!
  10. Tim, you're such a renaissance man! Knows everything! If she doesn't want her body to alter shape, then yes, staying away from pregnancy is a wise choice. However, most changes are manageable and you get a baby for your troubles! People can have how many or how few kids they want. Just make choices based on fact. Emma's barely out of that haze of the first kid and she's awfully young for a mother. She should wait a few years and see how she feels then. So trippel protection is a wise choice!
  11. Ok, if we suspend discussions regarding who Emma really is, I'd like to address the issue of breastfeeding. And JAR, you brought this on yourself! Just in case there are any mothers to be reading this, I'd like to make it clear breastfeeding doesn't really alter the shape of your breast shape. Pregnancy, being overweight, unhealthy living does to a much greater extent. So don't be afraid to breastfeed. Besides, it's very convenient. Perfect food available at any time!
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    Prompt 442

    Thank you for reviewing! I was a bit nervous about this, since I had never tried writing sex before. It's a different but fun experience. I'm glad I made it sexy.
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    Prompt 442

    I'm glad this prompt had the intended effect! I hadn't really thought about the neighbour other than a nifty way to get those prompt words in there, but her nosiness could prove useful. What a good idea! Thanks for reviewing!
  14. Oh! My little prompt! *doing a happy dance* Ha! For me, it would be zombie but without the energy to cause an apocalypse...
  15. In Sweden, we generally celebrate birthday rather quietly too, with family and friends. I however read those lines as AC apparently intended. That there were no big birthday bashes after their father died. Having organised quite a few partied myself (with my hubby), I can relate to not having the energy to host them as a single parent. Especially with a sick child to care for. I guess it's another thing that was sacrificed due to all the sadness that this family had suffered.
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    Prompt 442

    Thank you for your review! I was going for sexy, so I'm glad I seem to have pulled that off. I hope for more inspiration soon. I have a very rough draft in my head...
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    Prompt 442

    When that hunger strikes, you have no choice but to follow along for the ride... The next I hope won't be so close to PWP, but who knows? I might get stuck on sexy! Thanks for reviewing!
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    Prompt 442

    I'm thinking about the back story now, but this prompt just demanded to be written first. It's kind of an experiment: Can I write sex and sexy? It's a first go and it was kind of hard (he, he...). Thanks for your review!
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    Prompt 442

    I'm glad you liked it and that you think I managed to hit the mark with a more sexy feel to it. I felt almost challenged to step up my game by a certain evil author... (Just kidding, he's very supportive and nice. Don't tell anyone... ) Thanks for reviewing!
  20. So... I was thinking... Where do kittens come from?
  21. Luke pisses me off! How can he do that to Gary? Some Christian, almost forcing himself on Gary.A physical reaction isn't a go ahead. Not if the other person says no! Chris has some profound insight to the role of a missionary. Maybe because he's grown up in different circumstances. How are such young people supposed to be able to teach and preach, when they have no life experiences to draw from? To reach people, I think you need to connect. To connect you need to understand. Otherwise, you'll just stick to judging.
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    Chapter 12

    That woman! I mean... GRRR! Ok, that said (or growled), I feel so incredibly bad for Eddie. If he ever realises what his mother is doing, his world could collapse! He's so sweet and trying so hard to be good and she just uses him. He's childlike in the true sense of the word, not thinking ill of anyone. Not even Wyatt, though MD has him convinced he's hurt Bryan. Couldn't Wyatt have been able to reach that blanket...? I get shivers just reading this. At least, he has water.
  23. If you think vanilla is boring, you're not doing it right!
  24. "Have you seen Duchess?" I started at the shrill voice of my neighbor and just about dropped my keys after opening my door. She stood almost right behind me, far too close for comfort. I briefly thought she might be a vampire too, since she moved as quietly as my houseguest. I dismissed the thought suppressing a smile. You never smiled at Mrs. Simons, unless you wanted to spend endless amount of time talking about the most boring things in the universe, mainly her cat. I wouldn’t be surprised i
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