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  1. Puppilull
    I can understand his confusion. Not easy to know if Shawn is genuinely interested or merely professional. Can't hurt to meet up again and see what happens. Just keep that crush in check.
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    The same thing happens to me. No notifications (which means binge time!! But still...) Also, I can't see his story in the Latest Story Updates. Could it be the post dating playing tricks on us?
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    I like this story so much! Read it! Just read it!
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    Number 6! (I was about to pick no 9, but I didn't have the heart to steal it from @JayT since he was so nice and edited my antho story! )
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    Saturday Night!

    Puppilull commented on Rip Skor's story chapter in Saturday Night!

    Oooh! What will happen in that room...? Apart from some heavy breathing and heart palpitations... Will they talk? Or will it end in more pining from afar?
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    This made me chuckle.
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    In ny case, I've had editors ask me what the h*** I mean. So I wasn't successful in my attempt at tempo and nerve.
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    I foresee a lot of visits to Club David... And a private dance, perhaps?
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    Chapter 5

    Puppilull commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 5

    The mind is such a powerful thing, if given the chance to work through issues and problems. I have a few techniques I use when life gets too hectic. Very soothing. I wonder what is so special about Lakshou's robe? Or is it simply too big?
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    Thank you for this! I struggle with commas a lot. Then I do some fragmented sentences, maybe because I try to achieve an artistic effect. I don't know if it's more common in Swedish and that's the reason I do it. It's a continuous work to better myself. So blog posts like this helps.
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    It's such a fun story, isn't it? I hope more people find it and read it.
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    4-10 - Unity

    Puppilull commented on Cynus's story chapter in 4-10 - Unity

    I don't find it strange that the contact is broken. The last time they contacted the netherworld, things came very close to disaster. Even if they know Caleb and Ethan would never purposely hurt them, they could have decided not to chance it anymore. If both are dead and therefore together, then Liz and Jake could have concluded they would be OK. Not sure how I feel about the baby being Orpheus reborn. I suppose reincarnation is a complete reboot. Still, all that hate... Will it simply disappear? Thank you for a different love story! I enjoyed it very much!
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    4-9 - Oaths

    Puppilull commented on Cynus's story chapter in 4-9 - Oaths

    So working together for all eternity? They'll be together. I feel sorry for his family, even though they have a way to go on accepting him.
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    4-8 - Faith

    Puppilull commented on Cynus's story chapter in 4-8 - Faith

    I don't think a link like that can ever be severed. It survives most anything. And someone will always be offended. But you know what? It's their problem, not yours. They should bear that burden, not you. If they take the time to explain their experience in a respectful way, you could listen. But you are not obligated to make it right. (Since I very much doubt you ever set out to offend people.) People need to learn how to deal.
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    That would be hard to top as well. Maybe it's OK to write about a former pet. A dead one. Risen from the grave to exact revenge... GAH!
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    Spider... I could never top @MrMs scary spider story. Nightmare material! https://www.gayauthors.org/story/mrm/vignettesbymrm/2 Maybe I could channel a dustmite?
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    Oh, it's so hard to see someone you really care about not like themselves at all. The frustration from trying to convince them they are amazing. Wanting them to see themselves through my eyes... Tony has his work cut out for him. It will take time. Just hope Stuart doesn't mess things up...
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    His Tale

    Puppilull commented on northie's story chapter in His Tale

    So many lives lived like this. In secret, hidden. I would hope times are truly changing, but it's difficult to not lose faith these days.
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    Yay! Another story! I really like your semi-fiction. It feels very real.
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    Wow, way to go! It doesn't have to be overly complicated to be effective. A good thing for everyone to remember.
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    Old aquaintances and the mystery is starting to brew! will my brain need to keep track of things now? Or shall I simply make wild guesses as usual...?
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    4-7 - Drink

    Puppilull commented on Cynus's story chapter in 4-7 - Drink

    Love is a most powerful weapon for those who dare feel it and share it.
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    Oh, I can't tell you how quickly this turns me off of a story! Come on, guys. We are women, not evil and strange aliens from a far away planet...
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    To me, that sort of writing is neither telling nor showing. Just barren words strung together in naked sentences. Not a story.
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    So busted!
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