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Puppilull

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  1. Puppilull

    Chapter 3

    Attraction is strong, but is there more? And if so, what? Ryan must have suffered something terrible to turn off that part of his life so completely.
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    Chapter 2

    Hmm... If merely talking about research brings on anxiety attacks, Ryan should proceed with extreme caution. Maybe he's ready to face his past and that's why he can't just walk away. Seems like Erik knows something...
  3. Breaking format makes reading on my phone a bit weird, actually. So it's not just scrolling. The whole text and the comments are affected. In the same way as when people post images that "don't fit".
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    Elixir

    Since I get the impression you like Christmas, I'm sad to hear 2017 ended the way it did for you. I went close to home with this story and to see that readers got what I was trying to say is a relief. Not sure I can say I'm happy about it, but you understand what I mean. The passage almost strikes me harder now that you highlight it. Seeing that pain through the eyes of another is perhaps the filter I need to let it in. Or out. Not sure... Perhaps I came closer than I thought.
  5. Puppilull

    Chapter 1

    A very compartmentalized life. Usually it's to stay safe and protected. Whatever happened to Ryan?
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    Two's a couple

    Tiny steps forward. A good way to work on Geoff's shyness. Fun to be part of such a production together!
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    Elixir

    Then I'd say they are good tears.
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    Elixir

    Oh sweetie... It got emotional writing too. That was my goal, but I hope you don't feel tricked into sadness. I wanted honest emotion.
  9. Happy birthday!
  10. So far, so good. But where is this headed? Except for the obvious short term destination... And interesting to get some info on douching. I've never found it to be necessary, but maybe my hubby has another thing to say... He's not complained so far.
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    Chapter 3.2

    They work well together. A little family forming...
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    Chapter 12

    An army of Mata Haris. Designed to kill but kill who? What was the end game for these tests? What a burden for Kohen... Just when he was beginning to feel safe.
  13. So plot thickens. Rush's spideysense is tingling. I think Ben will realise he's a big part of their little family and business. Trust is difficult, though.
  14. The very best Christmas indeed! Such a sweet but also sad story. Love prevailing and acceptance for all love. Beautiful.
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    Family Issues

    I was so glad to see you finish this story. It's been a favourite for a long time. Good to see Jared growing as an Alpha and Darwin coming to grips with being a submissive. Together, I think they can provide a new beginning for the pack.
  16. Charlie seems to have turned a corner, but he's right. Karla will need time and should take time before she trusts him again. Still, if she can let him in as a friend, it could do them both some good.
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    Chapter 25

    Oh wow... I felt worried about Mick. He has so much crap in his past, he really isn't in the best place to play with a potentially sinister bedmate. Even though he enjoys it. All those memories can trigger a terrible reaction. So his guys are a better fit.
  18. Or you can hang out on GA and find another introvert who becomes your BFF!
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    The Story

    This was a bit scary and I feel sorry for James. Not much of a cult if they don't even try to convert him before killing him. More a bunch of homicidal lunatics... Mesmerizing tale written very suggestively. Great take on the prompt!
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    Elixir

    Being careful with what you have and cherish it isn't always easy to remember. A reminder of loss can help you in the right direction. Sensible and magical. Sounds a bit like me actually... That hole isn't far off either. And there's no need to delete or hide your editing. It's good to be reminded of the perils of homonyms. Especially since I find they are increasing the more I write, strangely enough. I'll fix it when I get back to the city. Too scared to edit on my phone after one too many formatting incidents.
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    Story

    I must admit to being pleased with Lupercalia. It combined my love for the Roman era with writing. Thank you for reading and reviewing! I saw you have been binging my short stories. Always nice to see someone read my work.
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    Chapter 11

    So not so defenceless after all... when will Kohen realise? He could be very valuable with that ability. No wonder they kept experimenting.
  23. Crossing all fingers and toes over here. Makes it darn difficult to write, but I so hope for the best for you and your husband!
  24. Puppilull

    Chapter 1

    Sweet and romantic to warm up the cold, starfilled nights up north. Made me long for a bit of snow. Well done!
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