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    Chapter 22.1

    Heaven and hell in this one. I hope they can find strength in each other for the fight with Cheryl and her gang.
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    Chapter 90

    Now I'm picturing a scaley cherubim who comes out of that egg breathing fire... Would make the toddler time interesting...
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    Chapter 89

    If one egg doesn't make it, it would be sad but not so strange. Must be lots of things than can go wrong, especially for a special blend like this. But I'm guessing it's a very special creature in there...
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    Chapter 88

    Oh, I want them to hatch! So curious! But it would be weird if they emerge from the eggs as tiny Kohens...
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    Chapter 1

    I was a bit concerned about the risk of just this confusion. I considered having italics or some other way to show the dream sequences, but I didn't want to ruin the element of surprise when the "real" world entered the story. So I opted only to use the dashes inbetween. I'm sorry if this made the story unclear and I'm grateful for the feedback. If I try something like this again, I'll give it more thought to see if it can be avoided.
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you for reading and commenting! I tend to daydream too, but maybe not as vividly as Devon. It can be an escape or a break from regular life. I couldn't let Devon end on a sad note. He deserves a little boost for all his good work. LOL I think Devon would be a bit embarrassed to write down his fantasies, but you have a point. Maybe he's a diamond author in the rough? I wanted Fabian to be a good guy, so it felt natural to have him try to cheer up his slightly down Devon. The guys were just a little off track, so some proper communication (and a little role play) set them straight. As for counsellors... I have no idea how they can keep going sometimes. Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you think I got it right when it comes to the struggles at work Devon is facing. I went on stories told to me by family and friends who work in the schools. And I think you're right about his fantasies being an escape. It wasn't actually the relationship that was bringing him down, but a sense of "Is this all? And is it worth it?" I'm happy you found the characters different in each snippet. Even if you found it strange, I actually made an effort to have them all be different people. The risk to me was writing them same guys in each scene. Though I will think about if this makes the story too disjointed and if I could have done something differently to avoid this. The light-hearted was because I felt it was a bit silly with the cliché dream scenarios. And of course I always knew Devon and Fabian had nothing to worry about as regards their relationship. Now that I read the comments, it's clear people took Devon's troubles more seriously than I thought. So thank you for pointing that out. And for commenting! Rattling his cage... Yes, that's the exact feeling. He did break out of his tedium and managed to verbalize what he needed. And Fabian was very happy to oblige. Even if it meant donning a frilly shirt... Thank you for commenting!
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    Perseverance

    It must be so difficult to break through the wall of preconceived notions and get actual help. Going on your own conviction can be very lonely. I'm glad they at least got help.
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    Twin Stars

    Hmm... This has longer story written all over it. Another Wednesday adventure? I know I want to know more about these guys.
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    Chapter 1 Hooked

    Romantic and sweet. Life can take unexpected turns, so all you can do is roll with it and occasionally ride the rapids. The new place you land on could be exactly where you were supposed to be.
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    Chapter 1

    The desert wind softly caressed his face, its warmth and fragrance ghosting gently over his skin. The heat of the day was finally waning. In the distance, he could hear the camels rustling as they slowly chewed on their dinner. His legs were starting to hurt slightly from staying in a kneeling position for too long. The floor of the tent was covered by soft, colorful carpets, but even that wasn’t enough. He tried once more to shift his position so he could sit on his side, but the restraints whi
  11. Devon is struggling with feelings of life slipping through his fingers, which in turn causes his mind to slip away to far more romantic places. But what does he actually want out of life? And will it include his boyfriend Fabian?
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    The Tale

    Well, Lex sure needs someone to give him a reality check... What an ass! How could he put Tom through all that, even if he didn't know of the ghosts. Tom should head back to Dan and have more midnight fun.
  13. Emotions going all directions at this ending. Glad Joy finally reached out (even if there's a way to go yet) and also to see the guys having such a great time on their holiday, angry about that violent idiot. I'll look forward to see more of them.
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    Chapter 87

    Well, a dragon/Kohen hybrid would be a formidable creature, but who is planning this? Seems they are down to a precious few people and it would be sad if one of them actually was a traitor. Aparoe is closest at hand to suspect.
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    Chapter 86

    Kohen - father of dragons...?
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    Chapter 85

    I want a sparkly creature too!
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    Chapter 84

    Could it be the end of their struggles and only smooth sailing from now on? As long as they find stuff to do, it could be nice to just follow their hearts desire.
  18. Rekindling old flames! What's not to love about second chances?
  19. Hugh turned out quite lucky, finding such tolerant colleagues in a rather macho world. But times are changing, thankfully. I'm sure he and Dean will have plenty of opportunities to practice putting out the blaze between them. Temporarily until it flares up again and again.
  20. LOL Of course, these two have to have their say and the last words.
  21. Nice to see them forming their own little band of brothers. I'm sure there will be many more double dates in the future.
  22. What a fascinating experience to shift like that! It would be fun to try being a man for a while, just to compare. I suppose Azrael has a lot of experience to draw from, being ancient and all.
  23. Clever Diego setting up some naked one on one! Not that Azrael needed much coaxing. I would love to go to Iceland. Maybe I'll get to do it next year, for a work thing. Fingers crossed!
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    Story

    Oh, what a lovely revisit! I'm glad you gave them such a sweet ending. And a parade! I love reading about those little towns doing parades. Feels like those places are where they are needed most. Since I spent last night by a lake under that never ending pale sky fighting off the mosquitos, I felt so at home during their beach visit. It's a beautiful part of the world we live in.
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    Chapter 13

    Such deceit! Must feel like an immense betrayal from those who were considered closest confidants.
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